- Sep 29, 2019
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Kinda liked the update, but many scenes could have been removed like the store scene (I really don't care about Brooke)
And although the writing is fine, there are a lot of superfluous dialogues, which hurt the pacing.
And although the writing is fine, there are a lot of superfluous dialogues, which hurt the pacing.
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