I agree with everything you said except this part.
It's not what I want. It's about him following
basic game design and story writing principles. The most rudimentary fundamentals of game design; proper quest logs and tutorials, and story writing concepts. Also using the correct terminology.
For example, he incorrectly uses the term
erotomaniac when describing Krowly, when I think he actually means to say that Krowly is
satyromaniac. Then if Krowly becomes highly feminine, he'd be considered a
nymphomaniac. Which can then explain why he isn't seeking any kind of relationship building, intimacy or connection with any of the girls, just wanting empty casual sex.
Is expecting him to use terminology that makes sense really too much to ask?
I'm not faulting him harshly for this,I don't think english is his first language, it's not his fault and he's probably overwhelmed with lots of work, so his fans can help him, that's no big deal right?
If Krowly was hypothetically an
erotomaniac, then he'd be thinking that Fina is in love with him; especially since she's in a position of power (study erotomania psychology), and he'd be trying to actively pursue a romantic and intimate relationship with Fina, because he thinks that Fina is infatuated/in love with him;
erotomania. But that's not the case, so it's annoying that the game implies one thing, but then doesn't follow through due to writing problems.
EDIT: if boobsgames is russian, then I think erotomaniac = satyromaniac in russian, but in english erotomaniac has a different meaning, so that threw me off when playing the game.