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Dactess

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Hmm

I ain't a smart man so what I got to say will probably reflect that but...

I quite enjoyed this VN. I mean while I wasn't totally into all the love interests, at least in that way, I did find their stories compelling. And the main story kept my interest and I am looking forward to what comes next.

I will say that for some reason, Juna was probably the best girl for me. I don't know if it was the idea of a prince falling for his servent or what but I like the idea of her being a main love interest and hope she will be in the coming chapters.
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Also, can't a man get a romantic scene of simple love making after a declaration of love? At least before proceeding to the rough stuff.

But yeah, while there were some things that I disliked, mainly like lesbian stuff that didn't include MC and well Magna trying to fuck all the girls too, I enjoyed it enough to over look them. All and all, I had a fun time.

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Thank you all for playing! I am working on the next chapter, which will be released as a standalone title. If you have any suggestions, or things you would like to see from the start, please post them here. I like these long forum formats, so go wild.
I'd welcome Juna being a main gal even if she is a servant lol even if some ppl might disagree with me... But honestly you did well with the first chapter so I trust you to handle the next and look forward to seeing what you add or do.

I mean maybe having more things be avoidable rather than just skippable but I think I saw you mention doing that so this is kind of pointless for me to say
 
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Pixillin'

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Hmm

I ain't a smart man so what I got to say will probably reflect that but...

I quite enjoyed this VN. I mean while I wasn't totally into all the love interests, at least in that way, I did find their stories compelling. And the main story kept my interest and I am looking forward to what comes next.

I will say that for some reason, Juna was probably the best girl for me. I don't know if it was the idea of a prince falling for his servent or what but I like the idea of her being a main love interest and hope she will be in the coming chapters.
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Also, can't a man get a romantic scene of simple love making after a declaration of love? At least before proceeding to the rough stuff.

But yeah, while there were some things that I disliked, mainly like lesbian stuff that didn't include MC and well Magna trying to fuck all the girls too, I enjoyed it enough to over look them. All and all, I had a fun time.

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I'd welcome Juna being a main gal even if she is a servant lol even if some ppl might disagree with me... But honestly you did well with the first chapter so I trust you to handle the next and look forward to seeing what you add or do.

I mean maybe having more things be avoidable rather than just skippable but I think I saw you mention doing that so this is kind of pointless for me to say
Coming out of Part? Chapter? Season? 1 ...

My fam are Cleo, Juna, Ezra, Thea, Joy and probably Josie. Those are the people I want around me.

Josie and I need to have a conversation but I suspect that there is a lot more going on here than a kidnapping. I think it's possible that they saved MC's life and just didn't have time to explain. If Josie had wanted to kidnap MC she had plenty of opportunities that were less risky that grabbing him in the middle of a large public event. But we still need to have a talk about using her words and not just knocking me out and locking me in a (very nice) cell with plenty of food and drink and Juna.

If MC can defeat his father (who I'm pretty sure is who Josie and Juna saved him from) and become the leader of Wartribe, I want Cleo to be the Queen - which should end her problems. I want Juna (who I will probably continue having sex with) to be the hand, I want Ezra to be the head of my security detail, and Josie to continue as alchemist. I also want Josie to make one of the temporary sex-change potions she made for Ezra so that Joy and Thea can have a baby without finding a donor, though I'll still claim the child as part of the royal line if that's what Thea wants.

The rest I'm mostly indifferent about. They seem nice but for various reasons I either don't trust them or don't see them as romantic partners. And I agree about all the lesbian stuff - for me there is no difference between a Li sleeping with another guy and a Li sleeping with another woman. Cleo was way ahead of the pack from the start but the scene where she said "Come on, you know I'm not into girls" pretty much clinched it.
 

Dactess

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Coming out of Part? Chapter? Season? 1 ...

My fam are Cleo, Juna, Ezra, Thea, Joy and probably Josie. Those are the people I want around me.

Josie and I need to have a conversation but I suspect that there is a lot more going on here than a kidnapping. I think it's possible that they saved MC's life and just didn't have time to explain. If Josie had wanted to kidnap MC she had plenty of opportunities that were less risky that grabbing him in the middle of a large public event. But we still need to have a talk about using her words and not just knocking me out and locking me in a (very nice) cell with plenty of food and drink and Juna.

If MC can defeat his father (who I'm pretty sure is who Josie and Juna saved him from) and become the leader of Wartribe, I want Cleo to be the Queen - which should end her problems. I want Juna (who I will probably continue having sex with) to be the hand, I want Ezra to be the head of my security detail, and Josie to continue as alchemist. I also want Josie to make one of the temporary sex-change potions she made for Ezra so that Joy and Thea can have a baby without finding a donor, though I'll still claim the child as part of the royal line if that's what Thea wants.

The rest I'm mostly indifferent about. They seem nice but for various reasons I either don't trust them or don't see them as romantic partners. And I agree about all the lesbian stuff - for me there is no difference between a Li sleeping with another guy and a Li sleeping with another woman. Cleo was way ahead of the pack from the start but the scene where she said "Come on, you know I'm not into girls" pretty much clinched it.
Juna cleo pricella rhea and joy for me. Though i liked anna too

Like threesome with 2 LI and mc is fine cause idk it just is lol rhea and joy is fine cause that was already a thing and like i said it is more of a throuple thing. I like magna, I liked her ending, but not to big on the idea of her sleeping around with other girls... kinda hypocritical but whatever lol so if she is more exclusive or just does threesomes with mc then maybe my opinion will change... but i prefer stacia over her

but that is just me, I have no problem with having LI's in the game like that, I just choose not to have MC pursue them.

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I didn't pursue Ezra but s/he does seem like one of the few loyal ones
 

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Juna cleo pricella rhea and joy for me. Though i liked anna too

Like threesome with 2 LI and mc is fine cause idk it just is lol rhea and joy is fine cause that was already a thing and like i said it is more of a throuple thing. I like magna, I liked her ending, but not to big on the idea of her sleeping around with other girls... kinda hypocritical but whatever lol so if she is more exclusive or just does threesomes with mc then maybe my opinion will change... but i prefer stacia over her

but that is just me, I have no problem with having LI's in the game like that, I just choose not to have MC pursue them.

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I didn't pursue Ezra but s/he does seem like one of the few loyal ones
Ezra is extremely loyal. The only reason Ezra entered the military was to be closer to MC. Ezra can be a LI or not but it would be silly to send away the only one you're sure is 100% loyal. Rhea and Joy are a couple and I get the feeling that they don't want to be a throuple, it's just something that Rhea is willing to do so she can get her family off her back. I'm willing to have them in my household as a couple and leave them alone as a couple - I want Rhea to be my spy master and in exchange I'll pretend she's one of my wives and that her child is part of the royal family, while actually letting her just be with Joy like she wants. Cleo and Juna I trust and like them almost equally - making Cleo my Queen though will clear up her legitimacy problems by making her and our child part of a larger royal family. Josie is probably also still in my good books - I never doubted her before, but I need for her to explain to me WTF she was thinking, and if she'll help me round up the rest of my fam, I'll help her with whatever issue she's trying to resolve.
 

Dactess

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Ezra is extremely loyal. The only reason Ezra entered the military was to be closer to MC. Ezra can be a LI or not but it would be silly to send away the only one you're sure is 100% loyal. Rhea and Joy are a couple and I get the feeling that they don't want to be a throuple, it's just something that Rhea is willing to do so she can get her family off her back. I'm willing to have them in my household as a couple and leave them alone as a couple - I want Rhea to be my spy master and in exchange I'll pretend she's one of my wives and that her child is part of the royal family, while actually letting her just be with Joy like she wants. Cleo and Juna I trust and like them almost equally - making Cleo my Queen though will clear up her legitimacy problems by making her and our child part of a larger royal family. Josie is probably also still in my good books - I never doubted her before, but I need for her to explain to me WTF she was thinking, and if she'll help me round up the rest of my fam, I'll help her with whatever issue she's trying to resolve.
I wasn't necessarily saying it was a throuple relationship just that I kinda saw it that way and that is why I didn't have a problem with it. Mc was joining their relationship (whatever that means idk) so it didn't bother me. At least I didn't find it as annoying as magna... not that she was all that annoying, just annoying in a "stop hitting on mc's women" kinda way lol

And I didn't have too much of a problem with the LI's not showing 100% loyalty to MC. Like they are there for political reasons to start out with, other then cloe. So things are gonna take time before there is 100% trust and loyalty. For most, it seemed like at the end the relationships were just starting, though some had already fallen for mc, others were only starting to. And I do think Rhea is coming around.

Juna was put in a tough spot, duty or love and all that. Ezra like you said followed MC so yeah he is trustworthy I think. I'm just not upset that ppl weren't completely on the side of MC yet. They all had their loyalties, whether to his father or their own families, so I understand that winning them over will take time.

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I wasn't necessarily saying it was a throuple relationship just that I kinda saw it that way and that is why I didn't have a problem with it. Mc was joining their relationship (whatever that means idk) so it didn't bother me. At least I didn't find it as annoying as magna... not that she was all that annoying, just annoying in a "stop hitting on mc's women" kinda way lol

And I didn't have too much of a problem with the LI's not showing 100% loyalty to MC. Like they are there for political reasons to start out with, other then cloe. So things are gonna take time before there is 100% trust and loyalty. For most, it seemed like at the end the relationships were just starting, though some had already fallen for mc, others were only starting to. And I do think Rhea is coming around.

Juna was put in a tough spot, duty or love and all that. Ezra like you said followed MC so yeah he is trustworthy I think. I'm just not upset that ppl weren't completely on the side of MC yet. They all had their loyalties, whether to his father or their own families, so I understand that winning them over will take time.

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Magna bothered me but I still kinda liked her up to the point when she tried to convince me to join a threesome with the step-mother she'd been claiming to hate up to that point.

And yeah we know a bit about the father, enough for me anyway. Between what we saw in Josie's flashbacks (that MC experienced) and what we found out from spies - such as he was originally planning to attack the festival on the big night and kill all of the girls but had supposedly canceled that plan. I'm sure there's more to find out but I know enough to consider him an enemy and (importantly for the culture they've been talking about) an enemy without honor.
 
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All I can say is that if I'm ever locked in a big comfy cell, with a big comfy bed, a hot submissive elf girl with a high sex drive and plenty of food and drink - nobody had better rescue me. I did the crime (not sure which one but whatever) so I'll do the time.
 
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I'm a bit puzzled about Juna.

At some point, she left because we were getting too attached. Her options were deleted for a few updates. To be honest she's the character I cared about the most, so I figured that I would stop playing the game and wait for her return, so I probably missed a few updates. Last time I played, these options came back, but I couldn't start them because she was unavailable.

Now I've just met with elves in a nearby location at night. Next morning I went to the... gatehouse? where the retainers are. She's just standing there with Josie and Sabah.

I can deal with the emotional damage, but it does feel like I missed something.
 
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