VN Ren'Py We Need Money [v1.5] [Naughty Gamer Studio]

[Ggunn74]

The first part of the game was not conducive to an immersive incest centric story so I went through the beginning and rewrote a lot of the script to make it work better. I also went through the script and made the MC less of a vulgar, douchbag. I made him act and speak like he actually cared about his long-lost family(I imagined the father getting custody after a divorce, and kept the MC away from his mother and siblings.) I also made some of the other characters nicer and fixed grammar where I caught errors. I don´t know how good these edits are for the rest of you, but I thought I would share the script file in case you wanted to have a more coherent incest story and a nicer, more caring MC. Enjoy.

 

[Greengoblinhobgoblin]

Any hero?

 

[Greengoblinhobgoblin]

Some characters in the game are connected, like Antonella and Tina. Antonella cheated on Tina with Alexandra to get the job, and there’s still a lot more that will happen.

Do the futa neighbour fuck the blonde girls in the new update on your patreon?

 

[soulmaster410]

haha love to see that the nurse is a trans or futa and look at that no choice again lmfao im done with this game one of the admins need to place gay shit is unavoidable so people can avoid this game if they dont wanna play it lmao they deleted my post wahaha gg trash game/dev

 

[chiefkilic]

So futa/trans is unavoidable? And apparently, all women are probably bisexual too, so the same applies to the MC. I mean, if you have sex with a futa/trans woman, you must be gay, right? Shouldn't there be a "swinging" tag then? I mean, if everyone's sleeping with everyone, it's either ntr or swinging. After all, the women are being fucked by three dicks. I don't see harems in this game; there are too many dicks in the game for that. (Translated with Google)

 

[Mellbear]

yeah there is futa on male (Femboy).

In the intro to the game you have several spelling mistakes between conversations with the mc and rally and the mom and lilly where lilly even calls the MC sister, now granted I am doing a playthrough finally where I renamed everyone appropriately instead of downloading an incest patch or some nonsense like that. So I dunno if that breaks it or not but yes the spelling mistakes for who is who are what I've got an issue with other than that so far I like the game I've only just started though. Also screw the people who hate futa.

 

[capt21]

thx

 

[Beaviss]

Word of advice. Stay out of politics. Not that I disagree with what you made but just know you're likely to kill off half of your audience

 

[Artecialife]

Like

 

[Naughty Gamer Studio]

In the intro to the game you have several spelling mistakes between conversations with the mc and rally and the mom and lilly where lilly even calls the MC sister, now granted I am doing a playthrough finally where I renamed everyone appropriately instead of downloading an incest patch or some nonsense like that. So I dunno if that breaks it or not but yes the spelling mistakes for who is who are what I've got an issue with other than that so far I like the game I've only just started though. Also screw the people who hate futa.

Sorry about that. I’ll improve the writing in a major update later on. Right now, my main focus is pushing out as much content as possible.

The game started in October, almost three months ago, and I think I’ve done a solid job with the amount of content so far. Future updates will include rewrites and spelling fixes.

 

[Naughty Gamer Studio]

Word of advice. Stay out of politics. Not that I disagree with what you made but just know you're likely to kill off half of your audience

Thanks for the advice. I wasn’t trying to make a political statement — I just wanted the game to feel more connected to the time we’re living in.

Still, you’re right, and I appreciate it.

 

[Mellbear]

Thanks for the advice. I wasn’t trying to make a political statement — I just wanted the game to feel more connected to the time we’re living in.

Still, you’re right, and I appreciate it.

Nah you get a win in my book since I agree with MC's response to that travesty. So yeah good on you for trying something daring, not many people will like politics but you know what? It's your game and besides unless this game has demons and crazy ass shit in it it should at least play somewhat into modern times. So feel free, plus I like how you literally included an onlyfans reference. You've done a lot of daring things in your game without trying to do too much too quickly or just be over the top.

 

[Danv]

all this effort to setup characters relations in the beginning and first thing what come out of their mouths is "i'm not your mom", "stepson", "stepmom"... come on dev, did you run out of variables? why this fakecest? it was so close...

edit: fuck this writing - OMG? LOL? is it supposed to be humans talking or fucking twitch chat? yeah, pass on this one

 

[Naughty Gamer Studio]

all this effort to setup characters relations in the beginning and first thing what come out of their mouths is "i'm not your mom", "stepson", "stepmom"... come on dev, did you run out of variables? why this fakecest? it was so close...

edit: fuck this writing - OMG? LOL? is it supposed to be humans talking or fucking twitch chat? yeah, pass on this one

I get your point, and I understand where you’re coming from.
Just to clarify a few things: I’m not a native English speaker, and this is actually my very first game. I’m still learning, improving, and trying to build a name and some popularity for my studio step by step.

Some creative decisions were also influenced by platform guidelines and practical limitations at this stage of development. Right now, community support is very important to me, as it allows me to keep developing and, hopefully in the future, work full-time on what I love.

Regarding the writing — yeah, it’s not perfect, and I know it needs polish. That’s part of the process, especially for a first attempt. I’m taking feedback seriously and aiming to improve with every update.

Sorry if the experience wasn’t for you, but I still appreciate you giving it a shot, and I hope you’ll notice real improvement in future projects.

 

[Huck0o0]

Bastante buena esta actualización, se nota la mejora en las animaciones respecto a la primera version del juego.

 

[Peri3481]

Yeah, that’s the point — the game won’t include any explicit incest sex, so the developer’s platforms don’t get shut down. The scenes might look like incest, but it won’t be made obvious. Still, there could be some things happening between family members in the future.

But a) this is so lame and b) what's the point of being invited to set relations in the first place then? I set the relations in the obvious way (Mom/Aunt/sisters/brother etc) and then found that the choices didn't make sense and didn't matter anyway. The whole set-up just doesn't work if the 'new' family aren't at least related to each other. 'You're the most wonderful stepmom a stepson could ever hope for' - that's a close and delete line right there and the MC hasn't even arrived on the scene yet.

There are various possible work-arounds to platform restrictions. And if the dev is still determined not to include even a hint of family relations, then just use names instead. It's not that hard. As it is, the story and text are shouting at you that this is a family game but not really which is the worst of all possible worlds. And this is a shame because the models look great, and the set-up could be really promising - ie a harem with your family (real/adopted/whatever) including femboy.

Then I went further, up to the first day at college. Very little of the text makes sense but then half of it's impossible to read anyway when it's white text on a light background. Everyone dresses and behaves like they're in a free-use scenario/at the end of a harem game but talks like they barely know each other. Meanwhile our MC wanders in and out of scenes, promising to screw anything that moves but so far being blue-balled from doing so. There's something here. It's just that either the script needs completely different renders or (hopefully) the pictures need a completely new script.

 

[LUCiFER-47]

But a) this is so lame and b) what's the point of being invited to set relations in the first place then? I set the relations in the obvious way (Mom/Aunt/sisters/brother etc) and then found that the choices didn't make sense and didn't matter anyway. The whole set-up just doesn't work if the 'new' family aren't at least related to each other. 'You're the most wonderful stepmom a stepson could ever hope for' - that's a close and delete line right there and the MC hasn't even arrived on the scene yet.

There are various possible work-arounds to platform restrictions. And if the dev is still determined not to include even a hint of family relations, then just use names instead. It's not that hard. As it is, the story and text are shouting at you that this is a family game but not really which is the worst of all possible worlds. And this is a shame because the models look great, and the set-up could be really promising - ie a harem with your family (real/adopted/whatever) including femboy.

Then I went further, up to the first day at college. Very little of the text makes sense but then half of it's impossible to read anyway when it's white text on a light background. Everyone dresses and behaves like they're in a free-use scenario/at the end of a harem game but talks like they barely know each other. Meanwhile our MC wanders in and out of scenes, promising to screw anything that moves but so far being blue-balled from doing so. There's something here. It's just that either the script needs completely different renders or (hopefully) the pictures need a completely new script.

Man, I’ve been playing porn games for like 8 years now. At the end of the day, it’s all about imagination and taking each scene on its own, like watching a porn movie. Not everyone is George R. R. Martin, Tolkien.

Most of these devs really need our support. They do get better and more skilled over time. This is his very first game, and if everyone expects a 5-star script and perfect quality from day one, devs like this will just give up and quit.
He also mentioned more than once that he’s not a native English speaker. Writing a good story in another language is genuinely hard. I’m actually playing the game, and I can clearly see him improving with every update.

He released 5 updates in just 3 months. Most devs need 3 or 4 months just to release a single update—sometimes it even takes a whole year. So honestly, I really hope he keeps going, even if there are still some issues.
You get what I’m trying to say.

 

[Naughty Gamer Studio]

Man, I’ve been playing porn games for like 8 years now. At the end of the day, it’s all about imagination and taking each scene on its own, like watching a porn movie. Not everyone is George R. R. Martin, Tolkien.

Most of these devs really need our support. They do get better and more skilled over time. This is his very first game, and if everyone expects a 5-star script and perfect quality from day one, devs like this will just give up and quit.
He also mentioned more than once that he’s not a native English speaker. Writing a good story in another language is genuinely hard. I’m actually playing the game, and I can clearly see him improving with every update.

He released 5 updates in just 3 months. Most devs need 3 or 4 months just to release a single update—sometimes it even takes a whole year. So honestly, I really hope he keeps going, even if there are still some issues.
You get what I’m trying to say.

Thanks, man. Appreciate it.

 

[skyrfen]

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