- May 9, 2018
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That is some A-Grade writing there in that scene.what i gather from the story so far... MC mom disappears, MC mom left a letter with Candice (MC ex) before disappearance, as time passes (as story progresses) Candice calls MC to meet (they meet up), Candice tells MC that his mom left a letter with her for him BUT didn't bring it at meet up?!?
really, something as important as that...air head? bimbo? absent minded? writer oopsy?
I'd say leave now to get me THAT letter NOW
- Candice: Mc lets meet tonight at 9pm and talk"
- 9pm
- Candice: Oh i have a letter for you but I didn't bring it, even though I knew I was meeting you.*
- MC: Okay np... so what did you want to talk about?
- Candice: Nah now's not the time to talk about it.
- MC: fuck you woman, don't do that, it is.
- Candice: Okay. I missed you, I've been fucking around with others and have a new bf, but never stopped loving so. Sorry got to go, bbkkthanks
* Yes I know she didn't have the letter so there is an excuse for them to meet up later again, but please, there are ways it could have been done better. That is just lazy.