So I've just started this for the first time and its already bad right out of the gate.
MC has been in uni for almost 4 years, 1 month left.
and he's just going to up and fuck off?
In the last month?
For something that on the face of it doesn't seem that important?
Typically, at least as I understand it, you have quite a lot of important shit going on in the last month of your 4 year degree...
Then 'Timo' is pissed off because it took us 20 minutes to pack up and get to his car?
He can go fuck himself, cunt shows up unannounced [how did he even know where you were?], I would have turned right around and gone back to my room the moment he gave me any lip.
What's the big rush? Your 'mother' who hasn't given a shit about you for more than 4 years? And you're getting shit about how long it takes you to get ready from your 'brother' that also has given no fucks for 4 years?
They can fuck right off.
But anyway, we find out this Timo guy has decent money and yet they are going to drive 2 days 'across the country' for some reason?
Just fly there [or close to] and rent a car if you need to, it'd be cheaper and faster, given what fuel costs combined with having to stay at motels along the way, this is such a stupid part of the story.
Combine that with all this "it'll only take a week" right in the last month of uni and already the plan is to waste a minimum 4 days of driving?
This is just moronic.
There is no way the story and plot can be good when it starts from such a shitty premise.
So here comes the cunning plan ...
We'll go see Rosaline, because she probably knows where mother is or maybe mother is with her!
Such amaze, very wow!
USE A PHONE, YOU CUNT.
You know where she is but can't make a call or send a DM over social media and would instead interupt the last month of uni and drive TWO FUCKING DAYS to visit in person?
What kind of epic bullshit is this?
MC asks the long-lost brother; "Why did you cut contact and never pick up my calls?"
I don't want to answer. The past is the past.
Fuck this guy, why did we even go with him?
Then we find out the brother worked part-time as an unqualified, unlicensed, mechanic and is somehow driving a brand-new $100,000 plus car?
Really?
Did you even read this shit back to yourself after writing it?
The we 'meet' Candice in the as-a-kid flash-back memory ... Candice looks about 31, not like some kid who wants to play checkers ...
Candice has weird torpedo tits and strangely form-fitting clothes.
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It's not attractive.
Anyway, now we're at Rosaline's place, mother isn't there, what a shock, if only we'd called ahead, we could have solved that mystery days ago.
But maybe she's with these other randos?
Ok where are they, 5 minutes by foot? How about 30 seconds by phone which we also could have done days ago?
Ok well we'll be off then ... err not so fast, actually we want to stay here, with no warning or invitation, that's cool, right? What? You don't even know us? Is that a problem?
No, no problem, we have no spare rooms so you can go sleep with my daughters, it'll be fine!
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My guy knows how to create some ugly characters, that's for sure...
She's supposed to be young, for anyone wondering. Looks about 48. Maybe a smoker too.
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Nah, I aint talked to the bitch in years, actually I don't even know why I care or why I'm here.
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Dev, why are we here and still caring?
I literally couldn't give a shit where she is or what happened to her at this point.
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Thanks for making the journal annoying to read, its so great.
Also why would I want to read any of that shit?
Anyway, I got to the free roam, an AVN mechanic I detest, and closed the program.
There are no redeeming qualities.
The premise is shit.
The plot is shit.
The characters suck, literally the first LI we meet is actually just some cheating slut, as if I'd even give two shits about a cheater and none of the 3 women I'd seen up to this point were particularly good looking anyway.
The supporting material sucks, why would anyone want to read about Timo fucking around and the size of his dick in the 'journal'?
I can't for the life of me work out why anyone with eyes and a brain is giving this 4-5 stars.