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Yeah that was good joke, same for any disney movie as well lol.
I think your writing is pretty spectacular, overall. But maybe you're not into dialogue, or sex narration/dialogue. Which is fair, but might be a drawback in this particular medium. I think you can probably do better than opera singers echoing at each thrust, but it's a creative endeavour, and you do you. Expansion in descriptiveness in that area is the only thing I could think of that could benefit from more effort. Hopefully that's taken in the spirit it is given.Yeah, I'm kinda dog at writing, so I'd rather have the player make up whatever dialogue they want in their head whilst the animations play in the background instead of doing icky lines like "My shaft enters her fleshy cherry blossom colored walls, her voice echoing like an opera singer with each thrust." Idk about y'all but that kinda dialogue doesn't do it for me.
She aightTako Yuh, is Alyssa a dreamboat or what ?
BlasphemyShe aight
You’re not the first person to say that. Alyssa is single handedly carrying this game from a financial standpointBlasphemy
She is the only reason I bought the game tbh, petty, maybe, don't care
What can I say for me she is giving Jaye from Chasing Sunsets a run for her money.....if you put a gun to my head, not sure I could chooseYou’re not the first person to say that. Alyssa is single handedly carrying this game from a financial standpoint
Now you are obliged to use this masterpiece in game."My shaft enters her fleshy cherry blossom colored walls, her voice echoing like an opera singer with each thrust.
I am not sure it is safe to talk shit about MC. Dude was one bullet away from being Batman.
I really like the writing dev I think you do a good job
And also, Alyssa is ok but compared to the sweetest girl in the game Leslie
It's no contest.
That's right everyone in this game Leslie is the girl for me