- Jul 7, 2017
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My main gripe with her story is that you don't get to fuck her in demon form, just a blowjob. I feel like that was wasted potential since a demon could get fucked rougher than any human and still love it.The evil version of Rose is an interesting concept, but it was barely explored. It could have led to a much more engaging conflict.
Demon MC could do something like have a second dick so he could DP her or have demon Rose come out every once in a while and the MC has to hatefuck her in to submission, or even have Rose make amends with her demon half, be like her twin sister who shares her body, and MC has to win over the hearts of both, but what we got was pretty boring... that and red head Rose looked hot so it's a shame so little was done with her.
As for the story being predictable I can say that for just about all the stories in the game, they all follow traditional tropes for fantasy novels and story elements are telegraphed pretty aggressively. Not everything needs an M. Night Shyamalan style twist, sometimes just having an upbeat fantasy story with a happy ending is nice. Writers have been using the same concepts to write stories for over 4000 years, the concepts don't change only the presentation.Everything feels predictable. She already likes the MC, and we know that his cock will break her spell. It takes the MC far too long to figure that out himself. Her conflict with the villagers feels endless and could easily be cut without major consequences. Let's be honest, the main villager is a boring character.
As for why it takes the MC so long to figure it out it's because the story was created before the Lana chapter and could be finished before the MC finds out about the master gift so he has no idea his cum can break curses at that point in the story.
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