- Dec 23, 2019
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There has to be a better group of labels to name ones that are clearly family, especially when the second sentence in the title outright confirms it.
The purpose of having to create the different titles is obvious, it just seems the ONLY ones chosen are Landlady and Roommates like the MC was actually paying RENT as a child from his hard day at the playground.
Anytime I read a character call another by one of these titles, I can't help but read it like they are heavily drooling, an arm curled up to their chest, dragging a club foot and trying to bite their own ear.
But that's just my opinion.
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The renders look smooth and detailed, though the dialog...wow that needs some serious editing ("Did Emily tell you say I am doing a laundry" for instance, and that is verbatim!), I hear you can post a request for help on here, then pay them when you get enough support from your fans.
Just an idea.
The purpose of having to create the different titles is obvious, it just seems the ONLY ones chosen are Landlady and Roommates like the MC was actually paying RENT as a child from his hard day at the playground.
Anytime I read a character call another by one of these titles, I can't help but read it like they are heavily drooling, an arm curled up to their chest, dragging a club foot and trying to bite their own ear.
But that's just my opinion.
Edit:
The renders look smooth and detailed, though the dialog...wow that needs some serious editing ("Did Emily tell you say I am doing a laundry" for instance, and that is verbatim!), I hear you can post a request for help on here, then pay them when you get enough support from your fans.
Just an idea.
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