SweatyDevil
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- Jan 8, 2022
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Yeah, it made sense for him to run away, and it made the plot interesting as we explored taboo and forbidden stuff. Now, we’re just encountering the usual landlady/roommate interactions, and it feels really awkward.I can understand and deal with the Helen change, but Leia being his twin was integral to the plot.
Instead of William falling in love with his sister, leading him running away, we're now at the point of "he fell in love with his roommate and the other roommates wouldn't approve".