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It will come... I have just been real busy with work and everything, so just hold tight, and I will try to work on that...
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I was frustrated about this as well, so I just handed off a combined script.rpy to JJsworld via PM, with chapter breaks and a 'jump to' chapter menu at the beginning. Hopefully he's able to make use of it. Hopefully he will put together a combined package soon...
I didn't make fancy chapter images this time (like I did before with A New Beginning), just a black splash screen with chapter text in the center for each chapter. I wanted to keep things simple for JJsworld for future chapters, so that I can just focus on my own Daz hobby...
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Cheers. I been wary of WD ever since I had 3 in a row fail on me (all of them WD Green something though).
These days I usually check
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before I buy anything. Man I miss HGST. :\
Sorry for derail
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Some constructive criticism here:
I sensed (latent?) 3DCG creation skills, probably better than most here. A good skill to have, and it will only improve over time. The girls perhaps a few too many copies of the same barbie figure, but that is just be my personal opinion. Some will like that.
In my subjective and unprofessional view, your biggest challenge to get more readers probably lies here: The characters, story and script are downright bad. The characters are flat and uninteresting and the MC repulsed me. Events that likely have never happened since the beginning of apekind, in a plot and dialogue that inspire attention. Having an English audience, without an English writer's proficiency, also did not help.
Despite these flaws, you have some avid readers and I also am intrigued enough, mainly due peak CG. At moments it felt just right, when selected design parameters came together, and creating something I found visually and aesthetically pleasing. In my selfish opinion, I would like to see more of just that.
My suggestion, given there probably is more written fiction out there than can be read in a lifetime:
1 Revive a great work from some barely known dead author, and for good measure weave some girls and spice in.
2 Collaborate with someone with (English) writing skills to atleast outline the story and characters (hint: given certain circumstances, less is more)
If there was a good amount of joy making this, ignore every and all critics, suggestions and 'demands'. Just keep doing whatever. Recognition from a crowd that will never be pleased, will likely not return dividends that benefit in any way. Financial or otherwise.
Toitoitoi!
Some constructive criticism here:
I sensed (latent?) 3DCG creation skills, probably better than most here. A good skill to have, and it will only improve over time. The girls perhaps a few too many copies of the same barbie figure, but that is just be my personal opinion. Some will like that.
In my subjective and unprofessional view, your biggest challenge to get more readers probably lies here: The characters, story and script are downright bad. The characters are flat and uninteresting and the MC repulsed me. Events that likely have never happened since the beginning of apekind, in a plot and dialogue that inspire attention. Having an English audience, without an English writer's proficiency, also did not help.
Despite these flaws, you have some avid readers and I also am intrigued enough, mainly due peak CG. At moments it felt just right, when selected design parameters came together, and creating something I found visually and aesthetically pleasing. In my selfish opinion, I would like to see more of just that.
My suggestion, given there probably is more written fiction out there than can be read in a lifetime:
1 Revive a great work from some barely known dead author, and for good measure weave some girls and spice in.
2 Collaborate with someone with (English) writing skills to atleast outline the story and characters (hint: given certain circumstances, less is more)
If there was a good amount of joy making this, ignore every and all critics, suggestions and 'demands'. Just keep doing whatever. Recognition from a crowd that will never be pleased, will likely not return dividends that benefit in any way. Financial or otherwise.
Toitoitoi!
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