VN Ren'Py Where the Heart Is [S1 Rev1] [CheekyGimp]

[CheekyGimp]

I started the new version from beginning. Is the "feel my heart"-scene on bed deleted too or i had just different choises? afair there were the same as in the old version.

No I like that scene too much to get rid of it, but it isn't in this release. I broke the scene up and this now happens just before bed (still in day 1). I thought too much was happening in the initial scene, so split it up to allow the boob/extra kiss to happen later that night....... It will be at the end of the next release which will be out by the end of this week. Was hoping to have it as part of this release, but ran out of time. The scene is obviously ready (from last update), but two of the new scenes in between (one in Jenna's room and one with Monica on couch) aren't.

 

[Mrs Delington]

I shouldn't really tell you this, but *spoiler alert* Monica is in a horrific accident in Episode 3 and loses her lips (both sets)... and bush penedeyewink:

WHAAATTTT ???

where is the "unlike" button ??

What the hell are you saying ?? ::|_O

 

[CheekyGimp]

WHAAATTTT ???

where is the "unlike" button ??

What the hell are you saying ?? ::|_O

Based on the strong objections, I am going to rewrite. She'll only lose one lip from each set and half a bush. That's a fair compromise...

 

[Mrs Delington]

Based on the strong objections, I am going to rewrite. She'll only lose one lip from each set and half a bush. That's a fair compromise...

It what was making your game unique ...because of your characters.
I am sure I am not the only one to find that your lady (Monica) was hot.

If I have just a suggestion, stop remolding and rewrite. Just go forward. You have already everything to have a success.

Strong objections...wow...i dont understand...they just have to go playing another game...but what are you doing with people that love your characters and your current style ? And my initial review of your game was based on your actual style, actual characters and their look, attitude and apparance.

 

[LordCharmz]

i say make the game the way you envision it. Sure take some feed back but don't discard what you got.

 

[CheekyGimp]

It what was making your game unique ...because of your characters.
I am sure I am not the only one to find that your lady (Monica) was hot.

If I have just a suggestion, stop remolding and rewrite. Just go forward. You have already everything to have a success.

Strong objections...wow...i dont understand...they just have to go playing another game...but what are you doing with people that love your characters and your current style ? And my initial review of your game was based on your actual style, actual characters and their look, attitude and apparance.

I was joking about the strong objections. LOL (I was talking about your strong objections to maiming Monica). Monica and her lips are quite safe. Yea, the re-writes were mostly based on my own critique. Once I had everything coded / scripted or drafted, I wasn't happy with the pacing or the sequence. And the re-renders for episode 1 were because these were my very first attempts in Daz, so needed some work. Hopefully, I've gotten better over the past couple of months, so the renders that go in from now won't need updating. And now I have a feel for pacing and how scripts transfer to actual gameplay, there shouldn't be a need to re-sequnce. Once Day 1 is complete (next week), I don't expect to go back and change it (other than errors/bugs) and concentrate on day 2. Put the re-writes /scripting down to beginner's erorrs on my behalf.
And I repeat, don't worry about Monica - She is safe !

 

[UncleVT]

don't worry about Monica - She is safe !

And her bush too hope

 

[Mrs Delington]

I was joking about the strong objections. LOL (I was talking about your strong objections to maiming Monica). Monica and her lips are quite safe.

And I repeat, don't worry about Monica - She is safe !

Never, never, never give me another fear like that....i was borderline of a heart attack.

 

[CheekyGimp]

And her bush too hope

The bush get's killed off. But it's getting it's own spin-off game. Working title is "A bird in the hand is worth two in the ..."
Anyway. I'm ranting now. It's 03:35, so going to bed. No more updates tonight !

 

[Reese286]

either the dev couldn't help but overdo the boob slider or some of these women have mad cows disease

Lol, mad cow is a common affliction among game dev's these days.

 

[AGoodDay2Die]

So, then, I guess the plastic surgeon will transplant the remaining lower-set lip to her mouth? Which mouth-lip will be lost? (Just so we'll know whether she ends up with a mustache or a goatee in the inevitable "plastic surgery gone horribly wrong" plot development.)

 

[K4in]

Not sure abut the big d**k thing also in some render looks like he could use it as a third hand. Also not sure how fast we meet new characters. Other then that I like changes to the dialogue and pacing. Really good update.

 

[Skylaroo]

So far, I really like the dialogue that actually sounds natural. It helps a lot to make the characters likeable. Except Zarah, I really don't care about her, but glad I'm given the option to somewhat ignore her.

 

[fortuna95]

Based on the strong objections, I am going to rewrite. She'll only lose one lip from each set and half a bush. That's a fair compromise...

maybe you can little reduce Katies boobs, too? Because the MC spoked of "man chest and pecs" and 99% of all Adult Games anyway are flooded with oversized unrealistic MEGA BOOBS.
For example here is a natural red hair, fitness lady with flat chest and is still very sexy:

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[DanMachiFan]

maybe you can little reduce Katies boobs, too? Because the MC spoked of "man chest and pecs" and 99% of all Adult Games anyway are flooded with oversized unrealistic MEGA BOOBS.

Unrealistic? But... we haven't seen anything so far... let her show them before complaining.

 

[L☹VE]

i know it's sounds funny, but i like mc size, not horse cock and not tiny penis, perfect

 

[N7]

this game needs bigger boobs like this one pls :evilsmile:

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[freedom.call]

I'm still loving this, you have no idea (maybe you do, I dunno ) how refreshing it is to (being the young MC) act 'normal' around females. Women looking their age big plus too.

Yeah the MC's dick is probably too big but I don't mind. :biggrin:

 

[CheekyGimp]

maybe you can little reduce Katies boobs, too? Because the MC spoked of "man chest and pecs" and 99% of all Adult Games anyway are flooded with oversized unrealistic MEGA BOOBS.
For example here is a natural red hair, fitness lady with flat chest and is still very sexy:

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Sorry fortuna, I don't intend to change the body shape of the current (4) females that have already appeared. But there will be some small boobed women later on

 

[buttlovinmagic]

im disappointed.....how on earth (or any other planet peeps may be from...I don't discriminate) does a game make it to more than initial release with out adding lots and lots of anal? there are now 4....yes 4 characters for the MC to give some buttlovin to but, for some weird reasoning I cannot fathom, the MC is yet to do even 1!!!

if this trend continues I will have absolutely no choice but to download this and play it for free in absolute silence

there....ive said it.......let THAT be a lesson to all devs