Here are a few thoughts, as always, just my opinion, no claim to be right or to know everything.
Definitely need to go through this one again, lots of weird sentences and wrong grammar. Not so much spelling, but missing words and stuff like that. Really took me out of the game a few times, having to wonder what exactly the sentences were supposed to be.
Apart from Lily, all sexual encounters were a bit of a disappointment, Monica might have been fine, if footjobs did anything for me. The boobjob was alright, but with all the talk about how the MC took Jenna's ass, even if she is on her period, fucking her ass should have been possible, especially considering how horny both the MC and Jenna got.
I mean, getting a blowjob from Elaine was to be expected and really I would have wanted some more groping and kissing going on with that, the blowjob alone was okay, I guess.
The scene with Katie and Jenna was sort of hot, sort of weird, felt a bit like back-pedalling, as did the whole episode in regards to threesomes and sharing, with almost all the girls declaring/demanding exclusivity.
I know, I know, a lot of people will say this is how it has always been, but it's not the vibe I got from the last few episodes, which seemed to pave the way for several possible three- or even foursomes.
No, to me it seemed as if this episode sort of, as mentioned, back-pedalled a few developments which Cheeky might have thought developed too fast previously. Again, just my opinion, I don't claim to be all-knowing, this is just how I experienced the playthrough.
I admit, when the previous episode ended, I went into porn film mode a bit and expected Jolene to be fine with Jenna watching, so that she was so shocked and hurt was a bit of a surprise, even though outside of porn film logic it would have to be expected, dunno she just appeared a bit more open and crazy than that.
Story-wise this was a tad disappointing, for one because it felt in many ways like a filler episode, were nothing really game-changing happened and many scenes seemed more like stalling or setting-up for the next update than anything else and in the sense that the pay-off of infiltrating Elaine's computer should definitely have been higher, considering how long we were going for that information.
Yet there were many, many other hints that could and should make us suspicious of Elaine and her motivation, especially if you tell her what Bella told you, her reaction to that didn't exactly install confidence in me.
I know some people do quite suspect Bella, but she comes of way more sincere than her sister to me, though I admit, all these hints about Elaine's behaviour could be her attempt to pass the blame onto someone else, but for me personally Elaine's reactions kind of tell the same story, so for now, despite her incredible attractiveness, Elaine has moved high on my list of suspects again, especially concerning her repeated aversion to go into Jolene's coffee shop.
As for Theresa, here too we got a pretty strong hint for her involvement, even though story wise her being the second woman would be coming a bit out of left-field, considering how late she was introduced.
It's not like I disliked the episode, I liked the way Monica behaves with the MC now, I liked the Jenna scenes, even if sexually only the paizuri was great, Lily was an absolute joy, even despite the librarian, Bella actually came on pretty sweet, I liked how open she was about her feelings and expectations.
All in all, this was a really huge episode, but very little actual development, I've said it before that after such a long wait, it was practically impossible to publish an episode that wouldn't feel at least a little disappointing and yes, this one did.
If I should give this one episode a rating alone, I'd probably go with a 6 out of 10, a bit above average, but below average for this great game.
I'm not trying to rip the team a new one, but this at least FELT like the weakest episode for me, it might actually be as good or even better than some others, but it doesn't feel like this, if you have to wait basically half a year for it.
Again, not saying it's the team's fault or that the delays aren't perfectly understandable and acceptable, but it doesn't change how you or at least I FEEL about the update.