VN Ren'Py Where the Heart Is [S1 Rev1] [CheekyGimp]

[botc76]

I sure would hate not to get my Monica fix this time around. The short part in the last episode was nowhere near enough.
I wonder, if the photo shoot got pushed back and we do HAVE significant Monica content in this update, then that would probably mean we will have actual sex with her, everything else would honestly feel like stalling, at least a little bit.

If we have sex with Monica in 14, that would make the photo-shoot even more interesting. It will either be a bit difficult, to manage Monica and Angel at the same time, if we have a relationship with both of them OR or cheeky MC could find a way to gently introduce the thought of involving Angel in some kinky stuff.

And yeah, I know that supposedly Angel gets photographed alone, but she will still be around during Monica and MCs stuff.

I'm kinda torn on the Elaine content. She made big progress for me in ep. 13 and even if you don't trust her, she is hot as fuck, but it feels kinda unfair for her to keep hogging the spotlight, just because she's late into the game.

 

[Deleted member 997153]

I wonder, if the photo shoot got pushed back and we do HAVE significant Monica content in this update, then that would probably mean we will have actual sex with her, everything else would honestly feel like stalling, at least a little bit.

If we have sex with Monica in 14, that would make the photo-shoot even more interesting. It will either be a bit difficult, to manage Monica and Angel at the same time, if we have a relationship with both of them OR or cheeky MC could find a way to gently introduce the thought of involving Angel in some kinky stuff.

I gotta disagree here. I think the photoshoot has the potential to be the pinnacle of testicle-bursting teases that should culminate in the most cathartic nut in the history of porn VNs. If we get to blow a load in Monica prior to the photoshoot, I feel like it will be a missed opportunity on par with not banging Katie after the epic party revenge. We've been building tension with Monica for 13 episodes and I've personally been salivating for this photoshoot in the months since it was announced. It's all about building the sexual tension to a crescendo and bedding Monica before the photoshoot seems like it would be the literary equivalent of cumming in your pants while your girl is still taking off her clothes.

 

[Ghostboy031]

I gotta disagree here. I think the photoshoot has the potential to be the pinnacle of testicle-bursting teases that should cultimate in the most cathartic nut in the history of porn VNs. If we get to blow a load in Monica prior to the photoshoot, I feel like it will be a missed opportunity on par with not banging Katie after the epic party revenge. We've been building tension with Monica for 13 episodes and I've personally been salivating for this photoshoot in the months since it was announced. It's all about building the sexual tension to a crescendo and bedding Monica before the photoshoot seems like it would be the literary equivalent of cumming in your pants while your girl is still taking off her clothes.

Came here for a good discussion on the game, left with lolz

 

[Deleted member 997153]

Also, I like the idea that the possibility of sleeping with Monica could be at risk during the photoshoot. Managing the interactions between Monica and Angel would be even more thrilling and suspenseful if the stakes included losing the potential to bed Monica at all. Again, it's about building that sexual tension as high as possible before finally closing that thirsty girl. I'm already dying for episode 15.

 

[Deleted member 997153]

Came here for a good discussion on the game, left with lolz

I can't tell if this is a compliment or an insult...

 

[Ghostboy031]

I can't tell if this is a compliment or an insult...

Compliment my man, that last line was golden

 

[botc76]

I gotta disagree here. I think the photoshoot has the potential to be the pinnacle of testicle-bursting teases that should culminate in the most cathartic nut in the history of porn VNs. If we get to blow a load in Monica prior to the photoshoot, I feel like it will be a missed opportunity on par with not banging Katie after the epic party revenge. We've been building tension with Monica for 13 episodes and I've personally been salivating for this photoshoot in the months since it was announced. It's all about building the sexual tension to a crescendo and bedding Monica before the photoshoot seems like it would be the literary equivalent of cumming in your pants while your girl is still taking off her clothes.

It's not that I disagree about the yarn you spin here, that sounds delicious.
My point was more about where we are with Monica now (actually seconds before entering her pussy with MCs dick in the kitchen) AND that it was revealed that the photoshoot was pushed back to ep 15. AND that allegedly Monica will be a large part of ep. 14.
If we are already this close to as you say "blow a load in Monica" how could she play a large part ion ep. 14 and not have actual sex with the MC?
Wouldn't that feel weird? I mean we literally could have her nude, bent forward on the kitchen counter with the MCs dick at her pussy ready for insertion and then she plays a large part in the next episode but nothing happens?
I would prefer it if the MC would not have had sex with Monica before the photoshoot, but if she is a big part of the next episode, what if not actual sexual intercourse could happen?

 

[Skylaroo]

As much as I like Jenna, I'm a bit confused if we ended up having sex with her this update. The progress with her doesn't feel like anywhere near her being ready to have sex. But I'll be happy regardless.

 

[Bonhomie]

I understood Cheeky has said ONE of the main characters will get a big chunk of 14. I took that to mean Jenna, once the photoshoot had been put back.

Much as I would like to see a 50-render full blown sex scene with Monica at the Beach House (away from the possibility of her daughters hearing her screaming during repeated orgasms) I don't think it will happen. Some action with Elaine there is more likely in this next episode.

In No. 15 - if the photoshoot is a 'success' as far as Monica (and Zarah) are concerned then there will be happy times.
I mean we all suspect that there will be some fun with the female models (Angel and/or Wanda), but would it surprise anyone if there was a demand from the guy buying the lingerie range for a more mature model or two as well, and as per last time, will they need a male model to add a bit more to the pictures, will the photographer be female (Is the Pope a ? ) ... ... ... ... come on people - do you think Cheeky will miss the opportunity to get Monica in stockings and thongs with the MC equally scantily clad in close proximity.
Hell a post-shoot champagne celebration orgy could be on the cards.

What could make 14 more interesting is discovering Elaine's Will 'terms', and even who No:3 Gold digger is.

 

[botc76]

I understood Cheeky has said ONE of the main characters will get a big chunk of 14. I took that to mean Jenna, once the photoshoot had been put back.

Much as I would like to see a 50-render full blown sex scene with Monica at the Beach House (away from the possibility of her daughters hearing her screaming during repeated orgasms) I don't think it will happen. Some action with Elaine there is more likely in this next episode.

In No. 15 - if the photoshoot is a 'success' as far as Monica (and Zarah) are concerned then there will be happy times.
I mean we all suspect that there will be some fun with the female models (Angel and/or Wanda), but would it surprise anyone if there was a demand from the guy buying the lingerie range for a more mature model or two as well, and as per last time, will they need a male model to add a bit more to the pictures, will the photographer be female (Is the Pope a ? ) ... ... ... ... come on people - do you think Cheeky will miss the opportunity to get Monica in stockings and thongs with the MC equally scantily clad in close proximity.
Hell a post-shoot champagne celebration orgy could be on the cards.

What could make 14 more interesting is discovering Elaine's Will 'terms', and even who No:3 Gold digger is.

Of course Monica is in the photoshoot, the magazine wants the MC and Monica in hot "circumstances" that's what the photoshoot is all about. Angel or Wanda supposedly will be shot alone, to have another, younger model in the lingerie.

 

[Azazeal]

Sex with Monica in epidode 14.

In episode 15/photoshoot, anal with Monica.

If we dont have sex with Monica in 14 or if the events in 14/15 can lead to sexual denial with Monica:

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It's not that I disagree about the yarn you spin here, that sounds delicious.
My point was more about where we are with Monica now (actually seconds before entering her pussy with MCs dick in the kitchen) AND that it was revealed that the photoshoot was pushed back to ep 15. AND that allegedly Monica will be a large part of ep. 14.
If we are already this close to as you say "blow a load in Monica" how could she play a large part ion ep. 14 and not have actual sex with the MC?
Wouldn't that feel weird? I mean we literally could have her nude, bent forward on the kitchen counter with the MCs dick at her pussy ready for insertion and then she plays a large part in the next episode but nothing happens?
I would prefer it if the MC would not have had sex with Monica before the photoshoot, but if she is a big part of the next episode, what if not actual sexual intercourse could happen?

 

[snakeplisskin]

Of course Monica is in the photoshoot, the magazine wants the MC and Monica in hot "circumstances" that's what the photoshoot is all about. Angel supposedly will be shot alone, to have another, younger model and Wanda is basically only the back-up IF you even called her.

Lol angel aint part of my photoshoot. I went with Wanda not a fan of angel

 

[blaackstarr]

Lol angel aint part of my photoshoot. I went with Wanda not a fan of angel

I really didn't like her in eps 13. Gonna go back and invite Wanda instead.

 

[botc76]

Lol angel aint part of my photoshoot. I went with Wanda not a fan of angel

Ah yeah. That's true of course, it's optionable, but still it's only one girl and Monica.

 

[Bonhomie]

Ah yeah. That's true of course, it's optionable, but still it's only one girl and Monica.

Ah, but is it only one?
Why would Cheeky allow us to invite both without some possible plot options - I think a couple of saves are necessary.
MC in the middle of Angel AND Wanda, with green-eyed Monica (and Zarah) looking on.

 

[blaackstarr]

Ah yeah. That's true of course, it's optionable, but still it's only one girl and Monica.

You actually could invite both. Thats what I did.

 

[Deleted member 997153]

It's not that I disagree about the yarn you spin here, that sounds delicious.
My point was more about where we are with Monica now (actually seconds before entering her pussy with MCs dick in the kitchen) AND that it was revealed that the photoshoot was pushed back to ep 15. AND that allegedly Monica will be a large part of ep. 14.
If we are already this close to as you say "blow a load in Monica" how could she play a large part ion ep. 14 and not have actual sex with the MC?
Wouldn't that feel weird? I mean we literally could have her nude, bent forward on the kitchen counter with the MCs dick at her pussy ready for insertion and then she plays a large part in the next episode but nothing happens?
I would prefer it if the MC would not have had sex with Monica before the photoshoot, but if she is a big part of the next episode, what if not actual sexual intercourse could happen?

Ok, I can agree with that. We were about to storm her gates last episode, so I take your point. It would be silly and nonsensical to have something like another erotic massage with her in ep 14.

I would imagine one of two things will happen: you're right and we will have sex with Monica (a mistake, IMHO) or we'll see them attempt it but get interrupted by people or circumstances (like the kitchen scene in 13). But I do agree with you 100% on your overarching point - sex with Monica cannot be postponed much longer and if it is, then it has to be done in a credible and believable way. I have faith that CheekyGimp will pull it off.

 

[Deleted member 997153]

If we dont have sex with Monica in 14 or if the events in 14/15 can lead to sexual denial with Monica:

You must be registered to see the links

That made me actually LOL. Great reference!

 

[botc76]

You actually could invite both. Thats what I did.

Oh, I did too, but Wanda is just my back-up.

No, what I mean is that far as was said in the game the MC and Monica will have suggestive pics taken, while the other lady supposedly will only show off the lingerie.

I really didn't like her in eps 13. Gonna go back and invite Wanda instead.

You shit me not? I loved the first sex with her in 13. I thought she was sweet, being so insecure despite being such a bombshell and at the same time she was quite kinky.

The only thing is, chances are indeed high that she was the other lover of MCs dad at least at one point and that makes me a little suspicious about her.

 

[lordofhirunds]

Monica refused to have sex with Mc's father, that's why he hates Monica, otherwise it wouldn't explain so much fury against her and her family.