VN Ren'Py Where the Heart Is [S1 Rev1] [CheekyGimp]

[wpeale71341]

Theresa makes an easy villain as the mother of dogboy and with her religious antics. But that makes me think of her as a red herring if anything. More importantly her antics point more towards her being a sexually dominant partner (her taking a firm hand to show you the evil of your ways) and I don't your father would stand for that.

I agree that there's something a bit off with Jolina. I don't necessarily trust her reasoning for how she reacted to you asking her out initially. She might be in league with the gold-digger or know something. But I think she's coming around. Her "You're the only thing that hasn't gone to shit in my life" comment and then not trowing you out or breaking down after she sees Jenna on her laptop makes me think she's on our side now. I guess we'll see first thing in the next episode.

There's a few things for and against Lily in the story but I'm ruling her and Debbie out because of meta reasons. One of them being the gold-digger will instantly break the whole Lilly, Debbie, Katie dynamic and I don't think Cheeky and Ace are willing to do that. I mean kudos to them if they have the balls to do it but it's highly unlikely imho.

I'm not sure about Wanda. I always got the feeling the MC was the first to treat her that way but I might be wrong. Also the MCs dad comes off as controlling and an asshole but not really as a Dom. But maybe Elaine was lying and that chain bed in the beach house was put to good use. That's the big thing: Who is lying and who isn't? Talk is cheap. After all most of us have the MC lying through his teeth to fuck every woman in this game. But that's exactly why my money is on Bella. She talks of playing no games, building bridges, family being more important but her actions say something else. At least the way I see it. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Only one problem with your Theresa theory. When Bella brought up the religeous nut that your dad was cheating with it was during his marriage to your mother. This means it was while she was living still and most likely before she left him to move in with Monica. So you would have still been very young. She specificly stated that there was some digging done to uncover the very old affair. Then if you pay attention during your conversations with Theresa she refers to her hatred for the last man she fell in love with and the bad way he treated her. She also says that the only good thing that came from it was Tommy. So it looks like that was your father and that would also make Dog Boy your half brother. She does however seem to be expecting an influx of money soon but that may be due to your father leaving her some money not because she was the other woman. The lawyer does seem to imply there were other recipients in the will he was not at liberty to discuss but that only 3 people were in line to recieve the big money. She could have just been recieving a non conditional payout same as your initial one. Even the episode 19 meeting with the lawyer seems to reference there being other people other than the main 3 people in the will payouts. Nothing specific but just the way he discussed the payout conditions. No I don't think it was any of the others you suggest as your father seemed to have a low tolerance for stupid women in his life that can't follow orders. Now think about the others you suggested and ask yourself how well do they follow direction. The last would have been a child but I don't think that would have phased your father any.

 

[wpeale71341]

There are two big hints as to why the GD is Bella -

Firstly Dad says in his tape something about how Elaine would have killed him if she found out who it was.

Secondly there is some sort of link between Bella (and Elaine) and Jolina.
There have been pics of Jolina's place matched up with Bella ( and Elaine didn't want to go have coffee at Jolina's for some reason.
Case closed

Well Jolina is probably a lesbian lover to both Bella and Elaine both. She does prefer women and admits it. Bella has sex with her sister and she admits it unknowingly to the MC in a conversation with the MC. She says she knows the taste but can't place it when she kissed the MC right after he had performed oral sex on Elaine. He claimed it was Sushi as a cover. Elaine is familiar with the coffee shop because she too knows Jolina. Not ruling out a girl on girl thing there either. Elaine says she never fooled around on the father but I don't think she counts girl on girl as fooling around personally. I highly doubt her sexual relations with Bella waited to begin after Daddy-o's death. So think on those things a little. If I am way off mark let me know what I missed.

 

[Maviarab]

Only one problem with your Theresa theory. When Bella brought up the religeous nut that your dad was cheating with it was during his marriage to your mother. This means it was while she was living still and most likely before she left him to move in with Monica. So you would have still been very young. She specificly stated that there was some digging done to uncover the very old affair. Then if you pay attention during your conversations with Theresa she refers to her hatred for the last man she fell in love with and the bad way he treated her. She also says that the only good thing that came from it was Tommy. So it looks like that was your father and that would also make Dog Boy your half brother. She does however seem to be expecting an influx of money soon but that may be due to your father leaving her some money not because she was the other woman. The lawyer does seem to imply there were other recipients in the will he was not at liberty to discuss but that only 3 people were in line to recieve the big money. She could have just been recieving a non conditional payout same as your initial one. Even the episode 19 meeting with the lawyer seems to reference there being other people other than the main 3 people in the will payouts. Nothing specific but just the way he discussed the payout conditions. No I don't think it was any of the others you suggest as your father seemed to have a low tolerance for stupid women in his life that can't follow orders. Now think about the others you suggested and ask yourself how well do they follow direction. The last would have been a child but I don't think that would have phased your father any.

Well Jolina is probably a lesbian lover to both Bella and Elaine both. She does prefer women and admits it. Bella has sex with her sister and she admits it unknowingly to the MC in a conversation with the MC. She says she knows the taste but can't place it when she kissed the MC right after he had performed oral sex on Elaine. He claimed it was Sushi as a cover. Elaine is familiar with the coffee shop because she too knows Jolina. Not ruling out a girl on girl thing there either. Elaine says she never fooled around on the father but I don't think she counts girl on girl as fooling around personally. I highly doubt her sexual relations with Bella waited to begin after Daddy-o's death. So think on those things a little. If I am way off mark let me know what I missed.

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Bella has sex with her sister and she admits it unknowingly to the MC in a conversation with the MC. She says she knows the taste but can't place it when she kissed the MC right after he had performed oral sex on Elaine. If I am way off mark let me know what I missed.

Hahaha....how old are you? A woman knows what a woman tastes like. Bella fucking her sister? rofl....good one....hahahahahahaha

 

[Deleted member 216358]

You’re so fucked....and not in a good way!

I've thought more about this today and I'm not as fucked as I first thought. I can follow the code pretty well and may have to use some console codes to get myself back on track if things quickly go south. For now, I'm playing the game like a harem but I can change important variables when the time comes.

 

[wpeale71341]

Theresa makes an easy villain as the mother of dogboy and with her religious antics. But that makes me think of her as a red herring if anything. More importantly her antics point more towards her being a sexually dominant partner (her taking a firm hand to show you the evil of your ways) and I don't your father would stand for that.

I agree that there's something a bit off with Jolina. I don't necessarily trust her reasoning for how she reacted to you asking her out initially. She might be in league with the gold-digger or know something. But I think she's coming around. Her "You're the only thing that hasn't gone to shit in my life" comment and then not trowing you out or breaking down after she sees Jenna on her laptop makes me think she's on our side now. I guess we'll see first thing in the next episode.

There's a few things for and against Lily in the story but I'm ruling her and Debbie out because of meta reasons. One of them being the gold-digger will instantly break the whole Lilly, Debbie, Katie dynamic and I don't think Cheeky and Ace are willing to do that. I mean kudos to them if they have the balls to do it but it's highly unlikely imho.

I'm not sure about Wanda. I always got the feeling the MC was the first to treat her that way but I might be wrong. Also the MCs dad comes off as controlling and an asshole but not really as a Dom. But maybe Elaine was lying and that chain bed in the beach house was put to good use. That's the big thing: Who is lying and who isn't? Talk is cheap. After all most of us have the MC lying through his teeth to fuck every woman in this game. But that's exactly why my money is on Bella. She talks of playing no games, building bridges, family being more important but her actions say something else. At least the way I see it. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

You left out Bella's nasty habit of showing up at inopportune times no matter where the MC is. And she always seems to know exactly where he is as well. At Monica's when she shows up with his clothes (conveniently after she claims Elaine threw them out) I suspect she got them from the garage myself where the rest of his things were stored and she claims she stored them there. There is only her word that they were in the trash.) She shows up at the beach house and failed to take no for an answer when the girls were there as well. She repeatedly shows up when you are alone with her sister and she was not home when you arrived. Plus she interrupts when you two are alone and she is there. She acts like it is HER house and she is just a guest. It just feels like she is having the MC kept under surveilance so that she knows his movements and who is with. She is very aware of her conditions and also seems aware of the MC's will conditions as well. So keep that in mind. She is encouraging the relationship between Elaine and the MC and she is encouraging the MC to remain with Monica. Now think about those will conditions for both Elaine and the MC. Hmmmm. Something else to consider. If I am still not seeing something please tell me. Loving this story so far. Very deep. Hope to see some pregnancies pop up in this game due to all the unprotected creampies that are occurring as well. Wonder how far we get to take the Theresa involvement as well. Will it get to the last stage or just stay stopped at a handy? Is the MC going to ever see any outside earnings come in from his ventures financially that do not involve his dad's will recievings? His modeling photo session with Monica's company? His new investment in Jolina's coffee shop? Although I hope that isn't going to be a failure I suspect she will go bust and end up sharing his bed in the beach house. Keeping up with th e50 or so girlfriends this guy has is getting tiresome.

 

[wpeale71341]

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Hahaha....how old are you? A woman knows what a woman tastes like. Bella fucking her sister? rofl....good one....hahahahahahaha

Thanks for tip on posting but no need to be rude in your reference to my age which you don't know. I guess you think all women taste exactly alike. Not from my experience. 40 years of oral tells me that they do not taste alike. diets ad other hygiene factors greatlly influence the taste. There are even subtle references to how elaine tastes in the game as well. So really no need to insult me over my comment.

 

[Deleted member 216358]

You left out Bella's nasty habit of showing up at inopportune times no matter where the MC is. And she always seems to know exactly where he is as well. At Monica's when she shows up with his clothes (conveniently after she claims Elaine threw them out) I suspect she got them from the garage myself where the rest of his things were stored and she claims she stored them there. There is only her word that they were in the trash.) She shows up at the beach house and failed to take no for an answer when the girls were there as well. She repeatedly shows up when you are alone with her sister and she was not home when you arrived. Plus she interrupts when you two are alone and she is there. She acts like it is HER house and she is just a guest. It just feels like she is having the MC kept under surveilance so that she knows his movements and who is with. She is very aware of her conditions and also seems aware of the MC's will conditions as well. So keep that in mind. She is encouraging the relationship between Elaine and the MC and she is encouraging the MC to remain with Monica. Now think about those will conditions for both Elaine and the MC. Hmmmm. Something else to consider. If I am still not seeing something please tell me. Loving this story so far. Very deep. Hope to see some pregnancies pop up in this game due to all the unprotected creampies that are occurring as well. Wonder how far we get to take the Theresa involvement as well. Will it get to the last stage or just stay stopped at a handy? Is the MC going to ever see any outside earnings come in from his ventures financially that do not involve his dad's will recievings? His modeling photo session with Monica's company? His new investment in Jolina's coffee shop? Although I hope that isn't going to be a failure I suspect she will go bust and end up sharing his bed in the beach house. Keeping up with th e50 or so girlfriends this guy has is getting tiresome.

Yes, I was wondering about all the creampies I've given to most of the girls in the game. Katie said she was heading to the pharmacy to take care of it ('The Morning After pill' I'm assuming). I see those in the store every time I pick up a prescription. They have two brands and are $29 to $33 each. They aren't even hidden behind the pharmacy counter anymore. I've even seen girls come in the store and purchase them. I know what they did last night, lol.

I invested in Jolina's coffee shop but didn't invite her to live in the beach house with me. I want to keep the beach house for me and Katie to live in. Katie is the best girl, fight me.

I don't grow tired of all the girlfriends I've accumulated throughout the game but I know it can't last. At least five girls in the game consider me to be their steady boyfriend.

Thank you for the insights. I'm not saying anyone is correct but you do make some good points about Bella always showing up at the right time.

Plot twist - All of the conditions that were given out are a test. If you adhere to the conditions you actually get nothing. It proves that you are a dick just like your father. Only those who sacrifice and don't care about the money will see any of it. The lawyer is forbidden to give out the actual conditions. I know this goes against the MC's father's personality but I've been thinking about this possible scenario a lot lately. Sure, anyone can shoot holes through this theory but it is a fun plot twist that hasn't been suggested yet to my knowledge (please forgive me if it has).

 

[Deleted member 216358]

Thanks for tip on posting but no need to be rude in your reference to my age which you don't know. I guess you think all women taste exactly alike. Not from my experience. 40 years of oral tells me that they do not taste alike. diets ad other hygiene factors greatlly influence the taste. There are even subtle references to how elaine tastes in the game as well. So really no need to insult me over my comment.

Players can be really hostile on this site as I've experienced it myself numerous times. If you say something negative or slightly wrong, all the fanboys will jump on you like a swarm of bees. Just look at the replies I got when I said something negative about the game.

I just took it with a grain of salt and moved on. Fans of the game unfortunately aren't always welcoming to newcomers.

 

[cakeny]

Well Jolina is probably a lesbian lover to both Bella and Elaine both. She does prefer women and admits it. Bella has sex with her sister and she admits it unknowingly to the MC in a conversation with the MC. She says she knows the taste but can't place it when she kissed the MC right after he had performed oral sex on Elaine. He claimed it was Sushi as a cover. Elaine is familiar with the coffee shop because she too knows Jolina. Not ruling out a girl on girl thing there either. Elaine says she never fooled around on the father but I don't think she counts girl on girl as fooling around personally. I highly doubt her sexual relations with Bella waited to begin after Daddy-o's death. So think on those things a little. If I am way off mark let me know what I missed.

Where is it said that Bella had sex with Elaine?

 

[wpeale71341]

Yes, I was wondering about all the creampies I've given to most of the girls in the game. Katie said she was heading to the pharmacy to take care of it ('The Day After pill' I'm assuming). I see those in the store every time I pick up a prescription. They have two brands and are $29 to $33 each. They aren't even hidden behind the pharmacy counter anymore. I've even seen girls come in the store and purchase them. I know what they did last night, lol.

I invested in Jolina's coffee shop but didn't invite her to live in the beach house with me. I want to keep the beach house for me and Katie to live in. Katie is the best girl, fight me.

I don't grow tired of all the girlfriends I've accumulated throughout the game but I know it can't last. At least five girls in the game consider me to be their steady boyfriend.

Thank you for the insights. I'm not saying anyone is correct but you do make some good points about Bella always showing up at the right time.

Plot twist - All of the conditions that were given out are a test. If you adhere to the conditions you actually get nothing. It proves that you are a dick just like your father. Only those who sacrifice and don't care about the money will see any of it. The lawyer is forbidden to give out the actual conditions. I know this goes against the MC's father's personality but I've been thinking about this possible scenario a lot lately. Sure, anyone can shoot holes through this theory but it is a fun plot twist that hasn't been suggested yet to my knowledge (please forgive me if it has).

Wow your plot twist is interesting indeed. Had not considered that but now that you mention it it would be interesting as a gotcha. Was not planning on being a dick like Dad was. Hell the only females my character has not had sex with so vaginally are Elaine, Theresa, and no involvement at all with Carny Ho (Maddy, Maggy or whatever her name was) The only one I did not creampie was Angel. I liked her character and just basicly did not want to screw with her modeling career if pregnancy ever became a factor. Sure there is morning after pills. Jenna just doesn't come across as a morning after chick. Plus I did not creampie when I took her virginity and found it interesting that the game does had periods in it but not pregnancy. I am thoroughly loving the way the game is done and find the characters in depth and easy to get involved with. Even the ones you want to hate are still hard to resist having emotional reactions too. Carny Ho was totally anger inducing from her insults to Monica while you are on a date with Monica. Wanda makes you sometimes feel a heartstring pull while 2 seconds later you want to choke her to death with her own panties. Bella is just to friendly which i find very suspicious without even taking into account her uncanny knowledge of all things MC related. Theresa is just bat shit crazy but despite that I still want to knock her up and give her anal just to spite her and Dog Boy. I just want to help Lily succeed in her fashion design career ambitions because she is super sweet. Jenna is my favorite with Angel as my second favorite. Katie just tends to grate on my nerves with her constant bitch act. It was cute at first but then it got annoying. She is hot though. Jenna is just a sweetheart and she looks great in everything even the ugly clothing. Waiting on some girl on girl with the MC also involved with her character as well. She comes across as just like her sister she is curious and may be a bit bi. Katie is but doesn't admit it yet. Debbie is technicly bi and not full lesbian. She likes both but prefers to be with women as her main selection. It has not slowed her down on her MC consumption at all though. I like how the plot involved both female stalkers and male stalkers as well. Good writing to make people aware of other issues.

 

[Deleted member 216358]

Lily being a hardcore tease (she should win an award or something):

 

[Maviarab]

Players can be really hostile on this site as I've experienced it myself numerous times. If you say something negative or slightly wrong, all the fanboys will jump on you like a swarm of bees. Just look at the replies I got when I said something negative about the game.

I just took it with a grain of salt and moved on. Fans of the game unfortunately aren't always welcoming to newcomers.

No, it was everything to do with dumb comments. For his, automatically assuming Bella sleeping with Elaine (in a no incest game) rather than knowing a woman knows what a woman tastes like and that the last thing Bella would have expected to taste on the MC would be that, at that point in time.

As for your comments...uggghh...but you've made up for it I see last few days with all the posted images This is actually a very friendly thread, we just don't deal well with plain stupidity. Won't apologise for that. As a game dev yourself, you should also show far more class on another devs game thread don't you think but, no, you're first post here was shitting all over it. You wonder why you got attacked?

 

[HSHS1111]

You left out Bella's nasty habit of showing up at inopportune times no matter where the MC is. And she always seems to know exactly where he is as well. At Monica's when she shows up with his clothes (conveniently after she claims Elaine threw them out) I suspect she got them from the garage myself where the rest of his things were stored and she claims she stored them there. There is only her word that they were in the trash.) She shows up at the beach house and failed to take no for an answer when the girls were there as well. She repeatedly shows up when you are alone with her sister and she was not home when you arrived. Plus she interrupts when you two are alone and she is there. She acts like it is HER house and she is just a guest. It just feels like she is having the MC kept under surveilance so that she knows his movements and who is with. She is very aware of her conditions and also seems aware of the MC's will conditions as well. So keep that in mind. She is encouraging the relationship between Elaine and the MC and she is encouraging the MC to remain with Monica. Now think about those will conditions for both Elaine and the MC. Hmmmm. Something else to consider. If I am still not seeing something please tell me. Loving this story so far. Very deep. Hope to see some pregnancies pop up in this game due to all the unprotected creampies that are occurring as well. Wonder how far we get to take the Theresa involvement as well. Will it get to the last stage or just stay stopped at a handy? Is the MC going to ever see any outside earnings come in from his ventures financially that do not involve his dad's will recievings? His modeling photo session with Monica's company? His new investment in Jolina's coffee shop? Although I hope that isn't going to be a failure I suspect she will go bust and end up sharing his bed in the beach house. Keeping up with th e50 or so girlfriends this guy has is getting tiresome.

My post that you quoted is from a year ago! A lot of the stuff you mention was from versions that came out later. But we more or less agree anyway. Bella was my prime suspect then and she still is now. Followed by Theresa. But nothing definitive has been said or shown. A lot of puzzle pieces have been put on the table but which ones are used in the final picture is yet to be seen. Not everything which has been said will necessarily be relevant information.

 

[Snugglepuff]

That's precisely why it could be an option. As i mentioned in another post, ofter those "culprit hidden in a small group" type of mysteries end with the least possible culprit revealed at the end.

You do realise that Scooby Doo cartoons aren't documentaries, right?

The only one there is no way you would have guessed. Usually the first or the second that "died" during the story just to jump out at the last minut saying "Gotcha! It was me all along".

That only makes sense in specific circumstances, and again, it would make no sense here... Repeating it won't make it work. Square peg/round hole situation.

She's dead.
She is an ex mother.
She's dead, buried, and short of Cheeky turning her into Joshua Christypants II, she's staying dead.

 

[HornyyPussy]

People actually think that Bella had sex with her SISTER?

Ace, have you been developing the game with the i-patch installed again?

 

[Benares]

You do realise that Scooby Doo cartoons aren't documentaries, right?



That only makes sense in specific circumstances, and again, it would make no sense here... Repeating it won't make it work. Square peg/round hole situation.

She's dead.
She is an ex mother.
She's dead, buried, and short of Cheeky turning her into Joshua Christypants II, she's staying dead.

and that's how we discovered that Cheecky is a huge fan of "The bold and the beutiful".

jokes aside, it amaze me that on a pirate site dealing with porn games we discuss a lot about the plot of a game.
Kudos to the writers.

 

[Snugglepuff]

it amaze me that on a pirate site dealing with porn games we discuss a lot about the plot of a game.
Kudos to the writers.

Indeed, and not just the plot but the characters as characters, instead of just being fap material.
Typically this kind of thing only happens with games where the dev(s) have a great understanding of both writing and people.

Hell, a lot of us are talking about these characters like they're real people, so that's an achievement in and of itself.

 

[Avaron1974]

Thanks for tip on posting but no need to be rude in your reference to my age which you don't know. I guess you think all women taste exactly alike. Not from my experience. 40 years of oral tells me that they do not taste alike. diets ad other hygiene factors greatlly influence the taste. There are even subtle references to how elaine tastes in the game as well. So really no need to insult me over my comment.

The whole Elaine/Bella thing is easily put to rest.

There is not, nor ever will be, incest in this game.

Bella has never touched Elaine nor would Elaine even allow it. Elaine is an old fashioned romantic, the thought of incest would be enough to put her off.

 

[Actually Autistic Gaming]

Getting an unspecified error when trying to extract E14S4_40.jpg from the zip file from the win/linux version from mega. The rest of the game unpacks fine and the game starts fine. Though I am guessing that I am going to get a missing image error at some point while playing through.

 

[Abhai]

Getting an unspecified error when trying to extract E14S4_40.jpg from the zip file from the win/linux version from mega. The rest of the game unpacks fine and the game starts fine. Though I am guessing that I am going to get a missing image error at some point while playing through.

anyway, it would be shame to ruin one of the best scenes with (one of my favorites) Elaine, so here are both of e14s4_40 images, just in case you need it
note. compressed images