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you continue to put the luxury of obstructing MC ahead of the need to reach her own terms of the will.It doesn't make sense at all for Jolina to get close to the MC if her goal is to ruin him, she should do her very best to drive him into the arms of Monica and the girls. Jolina is anything but unattractive, the risk that the MC will fall head over heels for her is way too high. And again, sending emails to several people is extremely stupid if there is a plan to get him close to Monica and the girls.
Also, a will condition that merely says "make the MC have you stay in the beach house" is entirely boring, in my opinion. All the other will conditions seem to require some personal sacrifice or major annoyance. Why would Dizzy's condition be so different from the others?
A treasure in the beach house makes no sense. What kind of anticlimactic will condition is that? A tech savvy Jolina may even find ways to fool the security system and just break into the house. It stood empty for a long time, there is no real need to get the MC to let anyone stay inside the house.
Also, the MC actually works at the coffee shop and can see that it is indeed getting no customers, so the bankrupty does seem real. And why risk so much money to begin with? Jolina would need to be quite rich to be able to burn so much money on some scheme that she actively sabotages. Monica + the girls? She gets SO close to the MC that he might leave everyone and choose her. Make him fall in love as part of her will condition... why crush his advances when he first wants to go on a date?
if MC's friendship or trust could help Jolina or whoever for her to reach her own third of the inheritance, why should she give it up? for the chimera of being able to get half?
Elaine is also on the hook for the inheritance, yet she badmouths Monica and doesn't shy away from being seduced by MC, apparently because somehow she needs the house, and to get it she needs MC to be on her side
also in my opinion simply staying at the beach house may not be the condition itself, but it may be a necessary step to achieve the condition, which could also be simply making Mc lose all faith in love, which would be quite in Donald's wheelhouse, but in general any condition involving MC would push the third heir to stay as close to him as possible, even in a love affair if the opportunity arose.