The finished version is actually a further improvement over the beta.
I like the Monica scene more now, though I still think it ends too abruptly.
After all this waiting it didn't seem to last long enough. At least a second go should have been in there. Apart from that it was well done.
The Katie scene... I'll be honest here, it was a bit too much. If Katie really wants to work on how she behaves, it's about time it actually showed.
I don't mind her being a potty-mouth, I don't mind her cursing, but not all of the fucking time.
For me, that she couldn't keep from sounding like a drunk sailor for one evening made her less attractive.
And that's a pity, because she looked so gorgeous with her hair down and she was sweet whenever she let her real emotions through.
I don't want her to become a sweet-talking demure princess, but I would really appreciate it if she didn't run her mouth all the fucking time.
A romantic dinner should be romantic, not just about messing with the waiter.
I don't want to be too critical, I really liked the episode, both the scenes with Wanda and Angel and the Monica photo-shot, I liked the morning after with Jenna and I liked the Katy parts, but I would really have liked them more if she had a little more restraint.