- Nov 7, 2017
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I just uploaded new version... link it now includes EP12 incest and made Zarah optional, and fixed the textbox naming wasn't changed (i copied base code over mine doh)
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- Aug 22, 2018
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So many red herrings, Monica's money problems, Zarah getting her claws in, Angel's story, Bella being too friendly and Joline.
I only care about Katie, Lily and Deb so i'ts all good for me.
I mean, i'd love Deb alone, makes me want to be Lily.
I only care about Katie, Lily and Deb so i'ts all good for me.
I mean, i'd love Deb alone, makes me want to be Lily.
Clearly you are a person of fine taste. Though I will say I also like Angel a fair bit as well.
- Nov 22, 2018
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This might be the 1st time we agree on who the true waifu is. Debbie is a hot ass bomshell
- Jun 30, 2018
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Going with Avaron's wrestling analogy [I only watched the kickoff and the Women's Ladder Match as of now, so I hope you didn't spoiler me too much] there are too many faces around and there needs to be a heel turn soon.
I have a feeling we are slowly approaching the stage in the game when we have had enough fun and have to start eliminating love interests one by one like in Melody. The choice for me is pretty easy and I just hope that Jenna won't turn out to be the culprit.
So, this update had a lot of nice action with the girls (although I would have preferred Round 2 with Bella not just a repeat of the same position of the first merry-go-round) but unfortunately we didn't get anything but a vague description off Jolina and some shade on Monica regarding the main plot. Meaning, we still did not upload the spyware on Elaine's PC or gather any intelligence on others' tasks.
Still liked the update very much and am looking forward to the next chapter.
I have a feeling we are slowly approaching the stage in the game when we have had enough fun and have to start eliminating love interests one by one like in Melody. The choice for me is pretty easy and I just hope that Jenna won't turn out to be the culprit.
So, this update had a lot of nice action with the girls (although I would have preferred Round 2 with Bella not just a repeat of the same position of the first merry-go-round) but unfortunately we didn't get anything but a vague description off Jolina and some shade on Monica regarding the main plot. Meaning, we still did not upload the spyware on Elaine's PC or gather any intelligence on others' tasks.
Still liked the update very much and am looking forward to the next chapter.
- Aug 7, 2018
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Loved the beach scene, great dynamic between the girls. Lily was delightful as always and it's a joy to support Debs' crush. It actually gave me a little pause whether to pick Lily+Debs or bring up the idea of a foursome at the end.
But a strong contender for my favourite render is
Cheers and thanks as always Cheeky!
But a strong contender for my favourite render is
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Cheers and thanks as always Cheeky!
- Jan 10, 2018
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Ah well just to put an extra spammer in the works concerning Elaine and possibly Monica, Joline and/or Bella whoever are the other two.
Remember Elaine kept on saying a few times MC looked so much like his dad and gave signs of being attracted to that. Now what if she is not the only one under the influence of that, having the man she loved in a younger, very fit form and not such a complete controlling asshole. This might make MC pretty attractive to a few ladies and even without the inheritance he will have a nice car, a beach house and 200K to spend and possibly some money making talents as well. This might well have a part in the attraction of Bella and possibly Monica as well besides the change of heart of Elaine.
Remember Elaine kept on saying a few times MC looked so much like his dad and gave signs of being attracted to that. Now what if she is not the only one under the influence of that, having the man she loved in a younger, very fit form and not such a complete controlling asshole. This might make MC pretty attractive to a few ladies and even without the inheritance he will have a nice car, a beach house and 200K to spend and possibly some money making talents as well. This might well have a part in the attraction of Bella and possibly Monica as well besides the change of heart of Elaine.
- Jul 6, 2018
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Awesome update, can't get enough of Katie, Lily and Debbie.
- Aug 2, 2018
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- Aug 22, 2018
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Grrrrrrrrbesides the change of heart of Elaine.
What change of heart?
Did you not listen to the dads recording?
Elaine wanting to care for him, she wanted to be a motherly figure but the dad wouldn't allow it. She was playing the role her man pushed her into.
Now think about the fact that Bella would have known that yet still played up that her sister was a bitch. Bella 2 faced.
- Aug 23, 2017
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- Oct 23, 2016
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Okay.... here's my thought about the episode.
Sexual content.
Bella was alright. IDK, she's stunning and some renders with her are downright hot, but overall compared to other characters, she's definitely not even among my top five... tbh she's about as far down the list as possible, only Jolene comes after her.
Yeah, that's right. I love me some milfs and despite not completely trusting her change of heart, that almost nude Elaine definitely jumped at least before those two and probably Wanda and definitely Katie's bitchy enemy whose name I completely forgot.
Jenna was only so-so. She's the most sexy when she isn't aware of it, with that almost rubenesque curvaceous body she reminds me of Kat Denning, just with even bigger tits. But when she's actually doing something sexual, it doesn't get me running quite as hot as some other ladies.
Which brings me to the absolute fantastic pornographic highlight of the update and that is of course the beach with our three stunning girlfriends (who I plan to actually make the MC's girlfriends as well. I simply won't settle for less)
The lotion/massage bit, the teasing, the kissing between MC and the girls and the girls and the girls. And then the crowning achievement of first fucking my cute, little bisexual tomboy Debbie and then getting a boobjob by the hottest ass in the game Lily.
If anything I would have liked a bit more kissing and cuddling with Lily, she deserves it, because all the boys just want to fuck her, while my MC wants to fuck her, but also likes her bubbly personality.
But honestly, nothing was better than Debbie in this episode, from her kisses with her besties to the sex, it was my favourite part.
And I think if you don't make the stupidest mistakes possible not getting the threesome with the girlfriends is not avoidable.
Now, I seriously missed Monica and (I almost can't believe I'm writing this, also Zarah, I really like her new hair-cut) no amount of other ladies can quite make up for that.
If next update doesn't turn into the MC and Monica fucking like rabbits for a whole night, then I don't know what will happen.
I know that anything is possible and that even Monica could be the second gold digger, but I don't see it.
If the affection we see between her and the MC isn't real, where's the point in the whole game? It would be even more fucked up then one of the girls dying in Acting Lessons.
I also don'T think it's Zarah. She's horny and sexually aggressive, but she's also such a true friend to Monica that it seems impossible for her to be the bad girl. Not to mention that her vulnerable side last update was far more convincing that anything we saw of Elaine in this chapter.
Right now I have two theories.
Number one would be that the second gold digger is a character we haven't even seen so far and number two is that Jolene is, but probably not completely evil, just desperate enough for the money from the testament to save her coffee shop that she will do basically anything to save it.
And while I liked Elaine and like I posted before, could certainly see what she said as the truth, I do have my doubt. It's just too convenient to explain kicking the MC out AND the aggressive messages with grief, but if she really had a problem with how she treated the MC due to psycho-dad's wishes, that does seem like a weird, weird form of grief.
Sexual content.
Bella was alright. IDK, she's stunning and some renders with her are downright hot, but overall compared to other characters, she's definitely not even among my top five... tbh she's about as far down the list as possible, only Jolene comes after her.
Yeah, that's right. I love me some milfs and despite not completely trusting her change of heart, that almost nude Elaine definitely jumped at least before those two and probably Wanda and definitely Katie's bitchy enemy whose name I completely forgot.
Jenna was only so-so. She's the most sexy when she isn't aware of it, with that almost rubenesque curvaceous body she reminds me of Kat Denning, just with even bigger tits. But when she's actually doing something sexual, it doesn't get me running quite as hot as some other ladies.
Which brings me to the absolute fantastic pornographic highlight of the update and that is of course the beach with our three stunning girlfriends (who I plan to actually make the MC's girlfriends as well. I simply won't settle for less)
The lotion/massage bit, the teasing, the kissing between MC and the girls and the girls and the girls.
And then the crowning achievement of first fucking my cute, little bisexual tomboy Debbie and then getting a boobjob by the hottest ass in the game Lily.If anything I would have liked a bit more kissing and cuddling with Lily, she deserves it, because all the boys just want to fuck her, while my MC wants to fuck her, but also likes her bubbly personality.
But honestly, nothing was better than Debbie in this episode, from her kisses with her besties to the sex, it was my favourite part.
And I think if you don't make the stupidest mistakes possible not getting the threesome with the girlfriends is not avoidable.
Now, I seriously missed Monica and (I almost can't believe I'm writing this, also Zarah, I really like her new hair-cut) no amount of other ladies can quite make up for that.
If next update doesn't turn into the MC and Monica fucking like rabbits for a whole night, then I don't know what will happen.
I know that anything is possible and that even Monica could be the second gold digger, but I don't see it.
If the affection we see between her and the MC isn't real, where's the point in the whole game? It would be even more fucked up then one of the girls dying in Acting Lessons.
I also don'T think it's Zarah. She's horny and sexually aggressive, but she's also such a true friend to Monica that it seems impossible for her to be the bad girl. Not to mention that her vulnerable side last update was far more convincing that anything we saw of Elaine in this chapter.
Right now I have two theories.
Number one would be that the second gold digger is a character we haven't even seen so far and number two is that Jolene is, but probably not completely evil, just desperate enough for the money from the testament to save her coffee shop that she will do basically anything to save it.
And while I liked Elaine and like I posted before, could certainly see what she said as the truth, I do have my doubt. It's just too convenient to explain kicking the MC out AND the aggressive messages with grief, but if she really had a problem with how she treated the MC due to psycho-dad's wishes, that does seem like a weird, weird form of grief.
- Jan 10, 2018
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Well you do not always have to do what your man wants, just as we males also can think with something else as our second head, even if we most of the time won't.
Do have some reservations about Bella as well, even if she is hot.
- Oct 23, 2016
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You are letting Elaine off far too easy. The MC remembers that she was an outright bitch to him, she even continued after dad's death.
Yes, she did what the father wanted, but she sure as hell did a very convincing job of it.
What, did he monitor them for 24 hours a day? She had no chance to show a bit of kindness to the MC , not at all? For all the time she was basically his stepmom?
And like I just posted if that was all just forced, how weird is it that she expressed her grief by being a completely ruthless bitch to the MC?
It's not impossible, because grief can lead to weird behaviour, but it sure is convenient, isn't it?
- Oct 23, 2016
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Also @CheekyGimp even if you didn't plan on a complete harem route before, think about it now.
Of course I don't know your plans, but you could always do what many Japanese VNs do and create all the endings you want, but when the players has done every single one of them, offer a "true/perfect ending" where the MC gets ALL the ladies he wants, no matter how unrealistic it is.
I don't mean to tell you what to do, but we are 12 episodes in and so far the MC could manage getting all the girls to fall for him so well, if you picked the right choices, it would be such a waste if there was no other way than for everything to fall apart in the end.
Of course I don't know your plans, but you could always do what many Japanese VNs do and create all the endings you want, but when the players has done every single one of them, offer a "true/perfect ending" where the MC gets ALL the ladies he wants, no matter how unrealistic it is.
I don't mean to tell you what to do, but we are 12 episodes in and so far the MC could manage getting all the girls to fall for him so well, if you picked the right choices, it would be such a waste if there was no other way than for everything to fall apart in the end.
- Aug 2, 2018
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I heard the Dad's recording about he told Elaine not to baby his son. But that doesn't explain why she kicked him out after his Father passed. Why she didn't think about letting him move to the beach house instead of throwing him on the street and everything he owned. That was a pitiful excuse that he reminded her of his Father and she was in a bad state of mind. What state of mind does she think the MC was in and now to be homeless without any place to go. Yes Bella was right Elaine was very cold hearted . What legal right did she have to even be able to throw his only child out on the street. Fuck Elaine HELL NO !! Call Leah HELL YEAH !!
- Jun 14, 2018
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