Ren'Py Whispers of Desire [v0.15] [Mr_Fable]

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

I was saying elsewhere earlier that it would be good to see a boss who is a nice guy for once... I mean, other than the fact that he's actively trying to fuck the employee's wife (who in this instance is also now an employee)! It always seems to be that it's a complete creep/sleazebag/scumbag boss always going in on the blackmail/corruption path rather than a seduction or even powerplay sort of path though.

Kind of reminds me of another boss Christian from another game right?

 

[Mr Fable]

Very good for a second update, hopefully the story will progress smoothly without any sudden jumps in the story. The only annoying thing was the frame rate of the animation, otherwise great!

Thanks for the feedback. I am new to animations and currently working on improving the quality.

 

[Mr Fable]

Kind of reminds me of another boss Christian from another game right?

I didnt realize it earlier but they share the same office too.

 

[Sparta158]

Considering you're not a professional and this is your first release, you're doing some truly impressive work. I'm very impressed.

 

[TonyMurray]

Kind of reminds me of another boss Christian from another game right?

I don't know why, but I don't find Christian to be in the slimeball/sleazebag category. He's a manipulator, and there's definitely an element of that in the sleaze mould, but I think it's different.

 

[blkcrow20]

I don't know why, but I don't find Christian to be in the slimeball/sleazebag category. He's a manipulator, and there's definitely an element of that in the sleaze mould, but I think it's different.

Which game?

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Kind of reminds me of another boss Christian from another game right?

yeah except this husband has a smokin hot intern working next to him as opposed to the wet noodle in mhb who'll never get action period.

 

[TonyMurray]

Which game?

My Husband's Boss.

 

[blkcrow20]

My Husband's Boss.

Oh. Bleh.

 

[Sparta158]

Kind of reminds me of another boss Christian from another game right?

I don't know why, but I don't find Christian to be in the slimeball/sleazebag category. He's a manipulator, and there's definitely an element of that in the sleaze mould, but I think it's different.

I don't want to interfere, but unfortunately there is only one true boss.

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[packard1928]

Kind of reminds me of another boss Christian from another game right?

yep !! Both are scumbaggs !!

 

[StrongEpsilon]

Yeah yeah, I am not gonna remove it from the story. Maybe a button to skip it for those who wanna do that. Because it's very simple to implement.

Hi, however just implementing a skip button doesn't make the story any better. I don't want to influence the story in any way, which is yours after all. But a relationship based at the same time on cheating (from fmc) and sharing (from mc), in my opinion is contradictory. Cheating is based on instability, while sharing is based on stability. The skip button is meant to hide what is actually happening. It doesn't help. It's more complicated, but if you want to keep both genres, then two separate, unrelated branches would be best.

 

[Yoru99]

promising

 

[Mr Fable]

Hi, however just implementing a skip button doesn't make the story any better. I don't want to influence the story in any way, which is yours after all. But a relationship based at the same time on cheating (from fmc) and sharing (from mc), in my opinion is contradictory. Cheating is based on instability, while sharing is based on stability. The skip button is meant to hide what is actually happening. It doesn't help. It's more complicated, but if you want to keep both genres, then two separate, unrelated branches would be best.

Thank you for the feedback.
I was talking about the cheating branch only (which is separate from the sharing branch ) . Because this is dual protagonist we see both perspective in the cheating branch too. I was considering adding a skip button for the fmc perspective on the cheating branch. But of course this is just thinking out loud. It all depends if it fits well with the story.

 

[NullVector]

It's totally awesome how many choices we get in this game, seriously, and that's a huge reason why I'm even on Patreon. Please just keep letting players have a lot of options like this. I was so happy when I saw Sarah could stop that Black person from sitting next to her
5 star

 

[Mr Fable]

It's totally awesome how many choices we get in this game, seriously, and that's a huge reason why I'm even on Patreon. Please just keep letting players have a lot of options like this. I was so happy when I saw Sarah could stop that Black person from sitting next to her
5 star

Thank you for the Feedback. Glad you enjoyed the update.

 

[Eleanorduval]

Now that I understand, I can maybe add this option for certain story lines and let the user skip FMC PoV.

I prefer have both pov,not all player looking for mysterie.Personaly i prefer having all the details.

 

[Neil2Raise]

pretty good start!

 

[TonyMurray]

I prefer have both pov,not all player looking for mysterie.Personaly i prefer having all the details.

I think it's a good technique, but only when that's the focus of the game and it's set from the start. IMO it wouldn't work so well added in to an existing game, and not one where it's only a singele path rather than the entire game.

 

[DrAddy]

Mr Fable
Good game, but I have a question.
Are you from Germany or a German-speaking region?
You have given German as a handwritten translation.
Unfortunately, the translation sounds too formal and too much like High German without dialect. in short, it sounds a bit artificial.
Unfortunately, I notice that with many translations into German.
If, for example, the dialects from Berlin, Hamburg, Bavaria, Saxony etc. were translated, it would be much more immersive and realistic, it could certainly be written that way.
Just a comment from me and not intended as a negative criticism.