Ren'Py Whispers of Desire [v0.30] [Mr_Fable]

[redoubt27]

normal loving relationship .

That's the real fantasy...

Are there any games with a normal happily married couple without any ntr or swinging or even harem for that matter? Seems like every married couple game is ntr or swinging lol. GL!

There are the occasional rare ones where there is at least a "loyal" couple path in them, usually referred to as the "vanilla" route.
I don't know of one off the top of my head where "normal happily married couple" is the focus.
This one, so far, has a pretty good loyal couple path. Just have to navigate through the other stuff and keep the couple on track.

 

[Mr Fable]

That's the real fantasy...


There are the occasional rare ones where there is at least a "loyal" couple path in them, usually referred to as the "vanilla" route.
I don't know of one off the top of my head where "normal happily married couple" is the focus.
This one, so far, has a pretty good loyal couple path. Just have to navigate through the other stuff and keep the couple on track.

The loyal path in this one will be exciting too, trying our new kinks and such.

 

[Mr Fable]

He's asking if the MC is pissed off or acts like a good little cuck.

If he has enough dom points he can push back.

 

[Mr Fable]

Work that he has already begun, and seems very well set up to continue.
Don't forget too, that "an enormous amount of work", usually leads to a high-quality, long, and ultimately satisfying game.
Surely a good objective, rather than wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am....
And I am a patient man, don't care how long it takes really.

I am trying my best to create a memorable game. But lets see how it goes.

 

[Grumpybum]

And plenty fantasize about a normal loving relationship .

Very true, for some the ultimate fantasy.

 

[redoubt27]

The loyal path in this one will be exciting too, trying our new kinks and such.

It's already exciting.
While Alex & Sarah just need to talk it out, I get the plot deciding/needing them to work it out individually first, and Eva, of course others, adding tension, temptation, etc. There's going to be overlap in a story with multiple routes.
Exhibitionism/Voyeurism is enough for most to trigger lustful desires, they don't need to go full on swinging, hotwife, etc. They can even play around a bit with those ideas, without actually doing them. Sarah's modeling path has excellent potential to be really exciting for a "loyal" couple route. And goodness, what if they decide to have a couples shoot, or post pics online, or a cam show or something... There's so many "exciting" things they can do as a couple without having to bring in other sexual partners. For example, they decide to let others watch them, or they just watch others, but they decide to only have sex with each other. Yeah, many, who want to see swinging, NTR, etc, won't think just "couple" stuff is as exciting. But, a story can have more than one route, and that's what you're doing.
Just a fun thought, Neil commissioned the photo shoot to entice Sarah. Could you imagine Neil's reaction if Alex & Sarah do a couples photo shoot, and Neil sees those pics... It's kind of fun (and yes silly) thinking of Neil in a reverse "NTR" type situation... He wants Sarah, but Alex, as the husband, keeps "cucking" Neil...
Any way...

I am trying my best to create a memorable game. But lets see how it goes.

You're doing well with this one, keep cooking as they say...

 

[john059]

Well done Mr Fable excellent game, great story & well paced. I like the slow burn for me thats realistic, I get that pace will quicken as Sarah explores & gets comfortable with new boundaries. Hopefully the great writing continues as that will dictate how quickly Sarah is corrupted, as for me thats the real magic in this game.

 

[Zang]

I don't think a game like that would do well, games are about fantasy.

There are however plenty of games on here that have the NTR tag but players are waiting an eternity for it to happen lol

And plenty fantasize about a normal loving relationship .

Very true, for some the ultimate fantasy.

Indeed, its a feelsgoodman fantasy for me at least. I realize its probably definitely harder to come up with exciting scenarios and plot for more vanilla just loving couple relationships, but I feel like it could be done and would be nice to see.

Often times the majority of games are either a single person trying to find a relationship and the game ends once that's established, or its a person who is in one but its rocky for one reason or another and the story is about the drama rather than just being a couple if they are still together at all. Just things I've noticed over the years, but I guess that applies to any story, movies and books included, the tumultuous drama points are what make it worth telling, because just being in love is...boring I suppose?

 

[Joshy92]

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[Eleanorduval]

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Fuck not this scene again Good thing I luv u bro otherwise u will finish roasted (with some potatoes)

 

[SomeOldFart]

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[Gicoo]

Neat that the husband can cheat on his (potentially faithful) wife as well, though the sharing/swinging indication over the cheating one unmistakable. Jessica would only want him for swinging and wouldn't want to hurt her best friend. Abigail seems taken with Neil and Rachel committed to her fiance, so that would be just swinging as well. Eva and Abigail may just string Alex along on Neils order, rather than being interested in him. So all is burdened on poor Emma, who is likely not mean spirited enough.

Want the game to be good, but way too many characters are introduced. Coupled with the many variables, I don't see this game developing fast. It either stalls for years or will be flat out abandoned.

 

[blkcrow20]

Agree to disagree.

 

[Eleanorduval]

Agree to disagree.

I think he is over reading,Abigail have no feelings for Neil and she knows his intentions.
Second 1st she saw Alex,she was thinking he is cute.

 

[Eleanorduval]

Neat that the husband can cheat on his (potentially faithful) wife as well, though the sharing/swinging indication over the cheating one unmistakable. Jessica would only want him for swinging and wouldn't want to hurt her best friend. Abigail seems taken with Neil and Rachel committed to her fiance, so that would be just swinging as well. Eva and Abigail may just string Alex along on Neils order, rather than being interested in him. So all is burdened on poor Emma, who is likely not mean spirited enough.

Want the game to be good, but way too many characters are introduced. Coupled with the many variables, I don't see this game developing fast. It either stalls for years or will be flat out abandoned.

Strange to say there is a lot characters,u playing ORS where there is more characters.

 

[PaxHadrian17]

Neat that the husband can cheat on his (potentially faithful) wife as well, though the sharing/swinging indication over the cheating one unmistakable. Jessica would only want him for swinging and wouldn't want to hurt her best friend. Abigail seems taken with Neil and Rachel committed to her fiance, so that would be just swinging as well. Eva and Abigail may just string Alex along on Neils order, rather than being interested in him. So all is burdened on poor Emma, who is likely not mean spirited enough.

Want the game to be good, but way too many characters are introduced. Coupled with the many variables, I don't see this game developing fast. It either stalls for years or will be flat out abandoned.

It's easy to judge a dev by the performance (or lack of it) by other devs with similar AVNs - including a large cast with a handful of paths.

I choose to give this dev the benefit of the doubt (and I became a $ supporter) because of the promise I see.

Only time will tell but I'm patient and I like a slow burn story that is well told.

I am interested in a few variations of different paths but understand that telling a compelling story with 4 paths and some crossover (path 4 can lead back to path 2, for ex.) will take time and involve some writing and plot reveal talent.

I like both Sarah and Alex and think that the supporting cast has enough variety to provide interesting partners for both Alex and Sarah, depending on how you choose to play this AVN.

It is a given though that it will take time to advance all the paths with all the potential LIs introduced.

This is, however, no guarantee of stalling for years or outright abandonment.

I'm hoping that the dev enjoys this project enough that he sees it through to completion.

Beyond that - it is like all works in progress -- we wait and enjoy new revs as they reach us.

Cheers!!

 

[Mr Fable]

Neat that the husband can cheat on his (potentially faithful) wife as well, though the sharing/swinging indication over the cheating one unmistakable. Jessica would only want him for swinging and wouldn't want to hurt her best friend. Abigail seems taken with Neil and Rachel committed to her fiance, so that would be just swinging as well. Eva and Abigail may just string Alex along on Neils order, rather than being interested in him. So all is burdened on poor Emma, who is likely not mean spirited enough.

Want the game to be good, but way too many characters are introduced. Coupled with the many variables, I don't see this game developing fast. It either stalls for years or will be flat out abandoned.

I am not even done introducing all characters .

 

[Eleanorduval]

I am not even done introducing all characters .

Do what u have to do,if u need more characters let it be.Anway I love the game and how open to suggestions u are.

 

[Pdr602]

Neat that the husband can cheat on his (potentially faithful) wife as well, though the sharing/swinging indication over the cheating one unmistakable. Jessica would only want him for swinging and wouldn't want to hurt her best friend. Abigail seems taken with Neil and Rachel committed to her fiance, so that would be just swinging as well. Eva and Abigail may just string Alex along on Neils order, rather than being interested in him. So all is burdened on poor Emma, who is likely not mean spirited enough.

Want the game to be good, but way too many characters are introduced. Coupled with the many variables, I don't see this game developing fast. It either stalls for years or will be flat out abandoned.

 

[theerage1]

rlp meaning?
and variable