VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Who's the Father? [Ep. 2 v2.14] [mrvision]

this game is absolutely TRASH

do not bother to download and very likely developer is using some kind of bot viewing tools to increase its view ranking on this website.

How is it possible for a game with 4 million views has only 65 pages of discussion and 1.5 star rating and little content. Games with similar views has way more content and higher rating.

Don t waste your time here.

WTF? What the Fuk is a better name for this thing.
Good thing about this game?
Models
Bad?
Everything else
Bugs?
If its existence was a bug, then YES.

Its bad, its poor, choices matter? I don't know, seriously. There are some points to get and many dead end choices in which you automatically fail. Its like a mine field of myriard of choices that tell you choose or die. Literally sometimes. Besides that many of said choices won't tell you shit what you chose. There is a whole conversation behind them that almost has no connection with what you chose. Its hella confusing mine field. Which is why I hate playing this game.

Everything surrounding this game is shady af, and the dev selling hope is not helping it either. Doing everything to maximize profits and you can clearly tell about this if you visit his webpage on either his Patreon, Subscribestar, etc

I couldn't even imagine selling a few dozen photos a set for more than $10, let alone for $20 !! Ahh, I'm so jealous >,<

Joke aside, you people expecting to rub one off from this game, you'd be hella disappointed. High Resolution but poor quality, a nonsensical mess of a story that you can't follow. A fan of NTR? Idk what to tell you, the game looks like one, but the dev said that it's not, so... better turn off that lust and have your hope for another proper NTR game.

And that damn size, bruh... Let me tell you, the game size does not equal the amount of content that exists in this game. This ain't Being a DIK that is sitting comfortably there at the top of the food chain, NO, this is at the bottom of the barrel

The man behind this game has absolutely no passion for what he's doing and just doing it to get those lovely green juice you have in your pockets.

TL;DR

Game sucks, I wasted my time on it, got burnt from expecting anything from it, and my body went soft for 3 days not touching the site because of this pile of garbage...

Such a shame, I had quite the expectation for it.

The file is way to large and there is entirely too much build up to the possible good parts...the cinematics are not clear and poorly executed in my opinion. This may be a good game for someone else but for me is was a waste of time and download space.

The 'gameplay' is boring, tedious, and unforgiving. You can navigate through an entire conversation only for it to end because you didn't choose the exact choice the author wanted you to choose among a myriad of other choices. I've yet to successfully finish a scene, as I keep getting cockblocked and having to start over. At this point, I'm not even sure if it's possible to succeed. The only redeeming feature is that the scenes and models are pretty good.

Plot and characters are incomprehensible. Massive download for very little actual lewd content, Only play If you are desperate for muscle girl content, and even then download the walkthrough mod and just skip everything and click the green choices to see what few scenes there are..

The characters look nice but that's where it ends, the game looks like it could be funny with the kung fu guy and all that but the dialog is just so bad and I don't think it's a translation problem either, just really bad writing. Multiple choice questions and all the answers to choose from don't make sense so you don't even know if any are a "yes" or "no", just a n "uhhhh yeah" "oooooh yes" "uhhh eh huhh" etc, like what the heck is that. And so many small lines of text to get to a point is testing your patients, same with trying to get to the erotic parts then they are so short or just bad.
Also the screen flashes and random colors in the text is just strange.

Terrible writing, uneven photo quality (I'm being nice here...), obnoxious, edgy wannabe, heavy in size that isn't reflected in picture quality...

There is much much beter VN than this thing.

Save yourself 8 Gb worth of bandwith !

This game is honestly just a mess, the writing is most likely the worst i have ever seen. There are at times about 10 "choices" given in a single dialogue where all but one of them lead to a game over, and if that is not enough you have to pick the right answer about 8 times in a row to go further. The only thing that this game has is nice looking 3d models, but that is about it.

TL;DR:
A visual novel is the wrong medium for the dev's artistic vision. He's trying to control... the way... you... should read... AND perceive... every phrase, or... every... word... and it's not legible, not immersive and quite annoying. Also very inefficient programming and resource management. Overall bad experience. 1/5

I hate writing 1 star reviews. Unfortunately this VN has very few redeeming qualities in my opinion.
First, after playing about 20 minutes, I stopped, deleted and was done with the game. Yesterday I was in the mood to give it a second chance. Again, frustration and deletion was inevitable. And this time it's time for a review.

Let's start with the boring part: Game resource management.
It's a whooping 7.5GB to download. Unpacking with UnRen I snooped around and much of it is a) a huge mass of ambient mp3 files and b) videos that are about 30x larger than they need to be. There's a 3 minute video consisting of a 1 second loop, repeated for said 3 minutes with 3 min unlooped moaning. 300MB. That is exemplary of the inefficient programming and resource management.

Onto the only partial redeeming part: Graphics
The renders and videos are not bad. They're not top tier, but they're all right. They are very grainy though.

And now the terrible part: Lack of immersion and bad legibility due to the dev's vision
First: I can absolutely respect the dev's decision to say "That is exactly what I want and how I want it. It's artistic licence and I think it's good." - My response however would be "That's great for you, do your thing, but I don't like it. I think it's poorly crafted and I will not waste my time any more."
The dev tries to control exactly the way you - the reader - should!!! read... AND perceive... every phrase... and!!! every... WORD!!!!! (trying to emulate his style here) He's trying to control the speed, intonation and emphasis you should have/hear while reading it. That doesn't work. Wrong medium. It's a virtual novel, not a movie or audio book. I'm not a native English speaker, so I like to set text speed to max (instant) so I can read and understand it the way I can and do the best. WTF doesn't give me any chance of immersion by trying to control my immersion.

Summary [ep1]
I am really sorry to say, but it's a clusterfuck of great ambition, paired with lack of skill and ability. This is my first review in which I actually advise people to not see for themselves. Do something worthwhile with your time, give WTF a pass.

Renders are grainy, and despite some seeing this as giving it character, it appears this isn't film grain at all, just noise. Dev needs to learn a bit more on how to render and denoise images and videos.

While the concept may be redeemable, the story is a mess, writing is terrible, and the coding seems to be of a similar quality as the writing. There are so many interrupts mid sentence for speaking characters, which isn't coded very well.

The massive size of this game isn't because it contains lots of content, instead, it's due to poor management of the assets used in the game, which aren't the quality you'd expect given the size of the files.

This game is such a mess, the characters and animations are top quality but the story is such a chaos that is really hard to keep track of the good answers or what gives you the most points, the responses sometimes are too similar and gave two different scenarios thats is just... not good, this COULD be a average game if it had a free walkthrough. who should be because how chaotic is the game, but is behind a paidwall that could make EA and Activision proud, first episode only 1 sex scene and asking that type of paidwall... nope.

The intro is too long.

The sounds, oh god, the sounds, I almost always put very low music volume for most of the games and that's it, but NEVER a game gave me a reason to mute all sounds, until now.

Too many unnecessary choices TOO MANY!

CHOOSE JUST ONE DAMN COLOR FOR THE TEXT GODDAMMIT! AND I SHOULDN'T BE SAYING THIS BECAUSE IS NORMAL, STICK TO ONE LETTER SIZE PLEASE.

I would give it 2 stars only for the design of the main characters, but holy, all the downsides really make this game deserves 1 star.

I tried, I really did...there are so few redeeming qualities I'm not sure I should even be posting a review.

I read the other reviews because I felt like I was missing something, like I was on the outside of an inside joke - I mean, that would explain a lot, wouldn't it? If there was something funny like a long overdue April Fool's prank or some sort of long lost Online "Punk'd" episode where, just as I was completely losing my shit trying to decipher the dialogue, without my secret gibberish decoder ring in order to make the proper choices just so I could glimpse a nipple or two - BANG!! Out pops the host and screams, "YOU'VE BEEN PUNK'D!!!" At first I'm shocked and a bit upset at being deceived, and then we are laughing at the great joke played on me

Except, that's not what happened. There is no laughter, only the bitter realization that while there may be character models that are not the norm and a promise of a decent story, everything seems to get thrown into a Ninja blender and set on baffling before being poured into Ren'Py for a spin around the psychadelic block.

Incoherent, random, time dump is the best I can come up with.

I will reiterate: The models looked promising, (at least as a departure from the standard smooth bodied, soft looking MILF or teen girls), although if it were just about the models in a game or VN, then I would just create my own, tell the story in my head (with actual conversations, not the abusive use of Onomatopoeia like I'm watching some old Batman rerun on Prime), and get my fapping fix.

I cannot, in good conscience, recommend this VN to anyone.

On a side note: I do find it interesting that there were so many votes on the poll for which characters people would like to see. Really? Is it worth the pain and suffering to try to find them in the process? Just RPATool this sucker and look for the images you want - save yourself from the mental anguish...

I tried to really like this game because i love muscular/fit women and milfs so this should of been a dream come true for me right? Nope, the dialog was so cringe i uninstalled it within the first 10 minutes.

BTW that has been the most "HEHEHE" and "HAHAHA" i have ever seen in my life.

The womans are nice and the story could be good ... but the dialogs are a mess (with color, points etc.).
The one sex scene is ok, good animations but the backround wasnt so nice. Too much pixels for the renders and than the dev zoomed in in this pixel mess.

Honestly, that was waste of 7gb download.

Way too much choice about every single damn thing, things that doesnt even make a difference in the end. Writing is very poorly done.
And seriously WHATS up WITH fonts KEEP changing AND their COLOR too.. Seriously annoying.

Also the sounds, oh god the sounds. Seriously....Muted at the very start.

Personally I love the whole muscle thing so I was into the game at the start but even then I couldnt bear myself to keep going after the initial 5 minutes.
Really a shame...

I believe a begger can't choose, and since this one has the "pregnancy" tag all over it on multiple platforms, I must endure it.
First the musics are intrusive at some points, and the sound effects and insert voices are not entertaining at all, and they are way too loud.
Then there sometimes are unnecessary text boxes in for example the disclaimers and important informations, and the font is sometime confusing.
Lastly, the static renderings are fine but the opening where the MILF excercise in motion is so lame that it killed my boner, and then all the flashes after choices and other points almost gave me a seizure.
Seriously, as mush as I crave preggo porn, this shit requires a plumber.

For me, the most annoying thing about the game is the dialog text boxes. There are so many font sizes and colours, randomly changed, that they look like ransom notes. Besides, the information contained is too strung out. More info per box make the endless mouse clicking a little less tedious.

The plot is pretty chaotic, and the choices sometimes appear to be random.

Nice renders and animation though.

Poor use of choices, required save scum to move forward through the portion of game overs behind wrong arbitrary response. Ended up losing track of what story is there while figuring out which option was correct. Might be better if this was made as a simple VN without choices, instead of continuing with game over behind every choice except the single correct one.

This was a waste of time.

7 GB download for chapter 1, and it gave only a couple of peeping scenes, one sex scene (not with the MC), and an unnecessary amount of nude scenes of the MC.

Crazy long dialog strings with a majority being not pertinent to the story. Ended up just speed clicking halfway through. Annoying amount of decisions/choices where most didn't have any viable impact.

Renaming feature that implies an ability to define the relationships in the household, but was done poorly, where All characters refer to redefined characters as the change being there name.

Would not recommend for a play through.