VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Wicked Choices: Book One [Remastered v1.0.1] [ASLPro3D]

Great renders, perfect writing and all the family scenes are super hot. It would be perfect if not for the extended fantasy realm but that is just my personal preference. It is well worth the time if you are into male domination.

First sorry my english bad. Im from another country. This game is very bad. I love incest game but this is a worst incest game. %0 reality, easy sex, characters are very unfeeling. I dont like any character. They like npcs, no emotion. Im sorry but my think this game is bad. I want see sister but ı was see niece, uncle. I dont like it. Graphics are bad. Tits or womens body is bad.

Wow, This story is Fantastic and deeper than i was expecting.
While maybe not the best looking as far as rendered Art. What it lacks, Makes up 100 fold on well diverse ( Personalities ) cast of characters and deep intertwining story I found very griping.

The story that's available so far will end a leave you wanting more, Which is a great thing! The writer of this story has a great imagination and a way of putting it in a VN!

Will be watching this title!

P.S Put this on Steam it will sell well!!!!

Nearly everything about this game is a work of art. Most often, people tend to skip story in order to get to the sexual content, I actually found myself skipping one or two sexual scenes to get back to the story.

Graphics/Art: Damn near perfection. I was initially concerned that it would be low-res garbage when the download was only ~800mb, but absolutely not. These are good quality renders and obvious care taken with some touch ups. Scenes are well varied, good quality, and its obvious that lots of thought was put into them.

Audio: One of the key components of an engaging and immersive game, is audio. Sooo many devs fail to grasp this simple concept. This game does it right. The background music is well suited to the situations. Its subtle enough to enhance the gameplay, while keeping in the background.

Story: Holy mother of god, what a great story. Yes, it is heavily based on religion, but more along the lines of Stargate than anything else. The way it is told makes it all the better as well. Yes, there is a significant amount of narrative involved, but its good. Not only are you getting internal monologues for the character(s), but relevant history for the story. I'd honestly pay retail pricing for the story in this game to become a full fledged proper retail game!

Gameplay: Throughout the game, you'll be presented with options to choose from. Although each chapter will end up at the same point, HOW you get there matters. Your choices dictate the direction of the game overall, as well as what scenes you get. However, the dev has included an actual flowchart as an option in the game, so you can see the route you're taking in comparison to all available options. This is helpful in terms of replayability for scenes that you may want to go back and get, and how to get there.

One note of warning, which needs to be mentioned. There IS a scene of rape to one of the characters in the game. The scene starts out technically consensual, but ends up going another route. Its not NTR, because the person is not entirely significant to the game, nor are you romantically pursuing the person. You are not the person performing the rape. It IS part of the overall story however. If this is something that could cause you issues, please keep that in mind. To my knowledge, you cannot skip it, but you could just look away and rapid fire mouseclick/space bar (Although you do have to make a single "choice" during the scene) until its over. That being said, you do get to, somewhat, make things right later.

That all being said, great job by the dev, and I was more than happy to jump over and support his future projects.

Religion plays a big role without being preachy. There is no inherent good or evil. In this tale demons and angels are the same yet different enough for tribal mentality to kick in. They warred, history was written by the victor, and you are about to receive a crash course in what actually happened. Enter the main character, someone not particularly faithful or bias. There is both a feeling of 'larger than life' and 'down to earth' as you begin as a mere family man who is living his life.

This is indeed a novel and hinges very much on its story. That's not a good or bad thing. Some people like vanilla while others like strawberry and I'm just describing its flavor. Me, I enjoyed the deeper sentiments and mythos with a twist.

The storytelling could've done with less exposition. Tease me with mystery. Don't tell me, show me. In the same vein, large parts of conversations are filled with thoughts. Draw me in as an active participant by letting me fill part of that train of thought. The little FAP demon is a good example. At some point she simply sulks, "No" and "Good." You'll know what's on her mind without explicit narration, and that in itself is a powerful reminder of your bond with her.

This is PART ONE. I'm the type who only plays completed games and was hoping for it to work as a stand-alone. Despite a lot of content it really does feel like a part one so I'd rather have waited for the other parts.

There is some perverted stuff going on. Who'd a thunk it, in a porn game?! But seriously, there's explicit rape among other things. In some games it comes across as random emotional blackmail. In this it feels like a natural part of a mature story.


In sum, you'll like this if you're into deeper stories with a fantasy-rich universe. I'm looking forward to the sequels.

This is strictly my opinion.

Art is bad.

Writing is weird, and makes no sense.

"Relationships" make no sense, like every action is without consequence. And those that have consequences make no sense in their development. Like how is choosing something forces something completely unrelated and blocks off other choices? I won't give examples cuz if u wanna play this spoilers, so yea, but imagine saying your favorite color is blue, now this girl or this scene is blocked off which has nothing to do with colors.

And last but not least, the cardinal sin of this.
Forced NTR Rape.

I played through this game when the remaster was completed. With so many games that have great potential, occaisionally, you'll find a gem. This is one of them.

Pluses: The graphics are excellent. Sex scenes were very good. The story was very creative, fun and interesting...with some real stakes involved. The characters were also interesting...you'll find you'll like some characters and really dislike characters. The female characters don't all suffer from BTS (Big Tits Syndrome). Variety is a good thing.

Minuses: I honestly can't think of one other than we'll have to wait awhile for Book Two.

Overall: This was a very enjoyable game to play. The story was engaging and creative, the author really deserves some credit here for the story. The characters were interesting, amusing, and they go through some development...and you'll come to root for characters and hate others. It was a fun ride. I highly recommend this game.

Ratings:
Sex Scenes: 9/10
Characters: 10/10
Story: 10/10
Graphics: 10/10
Fun: 10/10

Where can I even start with this one? I didn't really know what I was getting into when I opened it because I had downloaded a few games in a short period of time and was playing through them individually.

It started off in a fairly standard (for this forum) manner and then slapped me across the face with a huge shift in the reality of the game. Cheers for that. I was not ready for it when it happened.

This is quite an innovative line with a very in depth story and its own mythos. As a big fan of H.P. Lovecraft, I am always interested in stories that twist and turn belief and religion. Nicely done.

The writer or writers create an interesting universe and chuck you into it. If you start this game unprepared, you will be in for a serious WTF moment shortly into the game.

Aside from the creative universe, we are offered a decent amount of sexual content. The split screen on some of it was not my favorite thing, but could be overlooked. There is a fair amount of lesbian content and trans offerings as well. I skipped on the latter, but to each their own.

All in all, it's a pretty solid adventure and I am looking forward to the completion of the second book with hopes of more sex for the male lead.

TLDR: Was going to give this a 4 stars but then reach the ending. Weirdly interesting story and quite good writing. Decent characters. Lack of focus on delivering main story and fantasy. Conflicting kinks.

This game feels like a very good writer decided to make a porn game alone. Without any knowledge about general game design, porn game design or project managing. This leads to a game with good story and writing but lacks focus and ultimately unsatisfied to play. Here is a list of pros-neutrals-cons that I see:

Pros:
+ Strangely absorbing story and writing. This is a big pro because it is a VN, where writing and story is the most crucial.
+ Showing what kind of kinks is going to show up before making a choice, help you to avoid the kinks you don't want.
Neutrals:
~ Two separate point of views give you more insight into the world (I personally hate this multiple point of view writing and feel like the time I control the princess is wasted, but I understand some people like it)
~ Spend a lot of time exploring many kinks, side characters, side story. This is a pro once the main story is finish but right now I hate it.
Cons:
- The biggest con for me that this is not a story. It's the beginning of a story. Imagine watching A New Hope, Luke's family is killed, he now starts to travel with Obi-wan on an adventure, starts to learn the force. Then bam, end of the film. Continue in the future. That's frustrating as hell, and that's what this first book is. Maybe they will have the resource to deliver a full story if they didn't:
- This leads nicely to the second big cons, lacks of focus. There is so many parts of this game, that, in hindsight, would be better cut to spend more resource on the main story. For example, the lengthy scene at the beginning about how the MC's younger daughter has fantasy for him. It's nice to have, but not in the expense of the main story. When playing this game, I find myself skip a lot of text, usually fluff, kinks that i'm not interested in, useless side tidbit. Combine that with the fact that the main story is actually quite short, I find that including so many side stuffs is detriment for the game.
- This game has some kinks that actually conflict with each other. I strongly believe that for porn game, you should go niche instead of go wide because everybody's kinks are different and it quite easy to turn off people with kink they don't like. I go into this game expect a power fantasy for the MC, with male domination stuff. The game did deliver some of that, but it also includes one NTR scene, imply NTR, the MC's wife cheating on him and the MC acts as a pathetic pussy. Some kinks just don't go well together guys, stop trying to get everyone and focus on one vision for your game.

Edit: To quote Condemned77 below: "this is not a game but a really long prologue ", yep, sum it up quite nicely.

[Rev @ v 1.0.1]

Very nice!

Love the art.

Writing's good, narrative's good, dialog's fine, voice is enjoyable. Might be a bit windy but I'm often told I'm too tits-oriented and impatient.

Didn't run across any porn I didn't like.

TLDR: Would like more please <3

This game was awesome, the best art in any game I've played. All of the women are gorgeous but for me the best part of the game is the epic fantasy story line. I can't wait to play Book 2 and hopefully beyond.

The game has a genuinely interesting story that should not be skipped through. Although the renders may be outdated its still enough for a turn on if your engaged in the game and not just skipping, cant wait for book 2

Holy shit, this is such a gem. Can't believe I just now found out about it. That prologue scene was amazing and I expected it to go downhill from there but daaamn. Maybe it's not the best quality but the characterdesign is stunning (at least definately for my favourite characters: paige and claire). Can't wait for the next part!!!

Don't waste your time with this one folks.

Pretty visuals in some cases earn a star, even if the majority of the time the environments look like poorly lit renders from the early 1990s.

The characters and storytelling aren't very good at all. If you want a story that feels like it's straight out of a high school creative writing exercise though, look no further.

Great story well written, The writer IMO has done a great amount of research to make this story what it is, I think I could chat to him for hours about some of the things he writes about. The Characters are very good and the artwork is fantastic, I did not get any animations during my game play but that could be because there are none, or I am missing a relevant CODEC. My only criticism is that I am going to have to wait for the next book but and i tend to be impatient but really look forward to it.

Absolute garbage...

no wait, APRIL FOOL!

Thank you so much for an inspiring game. The story is fabulous: such a creative and inspired work is a rare and beautiful thing.

I am a believer! (just don't call me "pet"). Looking forward to the next book, Master.

Very well written, though, I admit, at first I was skeptical. The storyline became very addicting as time went, especially with mini FAP. I very much enjoy the idea that there is no 'Good versus Bad' in this, that one side is just as much a culprit in Human affairs as the other. I anxiously await Book Two!

Well first things first, this is not a game but a really long prologue so its hard to judge without the rest of the game.

As it stands the story is very very good, i am hooked(cant wait to read the rest), the art is also very good each person feels unique and it had no errors or problems while i played but its biggest weakness is its size.

Most games dont make it this far and i fear this game wont make it to the end, even now they have decided to focus on a side story next instead of the next part of this one and given how complicated the story is plus the amount of choices for so many characters it would take a game at least twice the size of the first book to really finish well.
I really hope i'm wrong and they get through it as i really like the story.

This part alone has some great scenes but the choices are surface choices only(do you want to see a sex scene or not) as any real story choices dont matter as there is not enough story to see any influence of the choices you do make.

In conclusion if this game is fully completed it will be one of the best adult games but thats a big if and please for the love of god take out the constant "chapter 4 part 1", "chapter 4 part 3", "chapter 5 part 4" etc... we get it it has a lot of chapters and parts.

I'll give you a 5 because I respect your balls. This game is a bit of a mess, but you do one thing right that makes you quite unique: You dare touch the "forbidden" themes. Going the evil route makes me feel really fucking evil and depraved. Most other devs wouldn't dare depict the scenes you show. Well done! Nobody does that quite like you. The content is fairly fappable, this is also a plus. I would love it if you could get the defects sorted though. The potential for something great is here.

Which leads us to the negatives:
The storytelling is actually done completely wrong and quite lacking in quality, making this a too-much-exposé-fest and I ended up clicking though dialogue because I couldn't be bothered to read it.
Man, you need to realize the power of telling things with your images and using as few words as possible. It is fucking 100 % redundant to have a bit of text saying "she looks out the window" when I can clearly see her looking out the window! Also don't feed us straight facts! Make us wonder what the fuck is going on! Shit the statue turned alive! Why could this be? - Well don't fucking tell us exactly why in the very next scene! Use the reader's imagination. Make us wonder why that shit happens. Making us go all like WTF!? for a while is a very good thing. You can create a much more interesting story by using a lot less!

I don't want to be spoon fed the lore. Make that optional (For example don't tell the history of family X until I actively seek this out by asking a character to tell me).
This could have been really cool as a story told in pictures with wayyyyy less text. I would certainly have had many good WTF moments. Much of the text wasn't interesting and I felt it was forced upon me. When in doubt, only use text for dialogue and don't feed the player facts in text unless he asks for it. Make the option to not ask for clarification and just get on with it available. Making the player feel free to make his own choices is important when creating a game!

The art is a solid 4. Sometimes I get quite annoyed by how well I can see into the character's mouths, making the lighting seem unrealistic. The lewds are decent and I like the fact that there are no unrealistic booberellas.

This game is interesting because of the author's dirty, dirty mind. But as a game, it has severe defects. I recommend this game if you want to see how evil and depraved you can really become, but be warned, you enter the world of too-much-exposé and you'll fight the walls of text on your journey.

[Edited for remastered 1.0 - removed a section where I complained about something that's now been fixed]

As the rating says, one excellent piece of art! New to this community and have been going through a punch of games and this is the first one, that I really enjoyed and is the first one that I might even give money to just to one day see the rest of books done and story finished as it rightfully should. Author and all who help him deserve standing ovations.