Trust me, its very obvious when you will go to a bad end at present. Wouldn't worry about it.
- Jun 26, 2018
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Doesn't matter. After trying the game I have to say that I didn't like the MC too much, nor did the first LI that appeared, so I think I'll pass.
Good start. My only real complaint: I'd like more POV in the sex scenes (I pretty much always say that). Also, the bad endings should have a sad ending screen of some sort. I'm assuming the renders will improve over time. They're not bad for a start, but they could definitely be better.
- Mar 22, 2024
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Really good first chapter. A solid, coherent narrative with varied characters facing personal challenges places it well above the average in the medium as far as story. An engaging read. Good balance of the dark and light stuff too, some moments of real good humour. A handful of typos and slightly incorrect phrases but nothing too bad.
Game looks decent. Not amazing, but good. The animated intros for the girls were a nice flourish. And of course as is incredibly important, the girls are cute. At the moment I'm thinking I'm an Eve enthusiast.
When I see a dev insert intro at the start of a game forewarning narrative content my natural instinct is to roll my eyes out of my head but then I think about some of the people who play these games and I kind of get it. Still dumb though.
Looking forward to ch2, good luck.
Game looks decent. Not amazing, but good. The animated intros for the girls were a nice flourish. And of course as is incredibly important, the girls are cute. At the moment I'm thinking I'm an Eve enthusiast.
When I see a dev insert intro at the start of a game forewarning narrative content my natural instinct is to roll my eyes out of my head but then I think about some of the people who play these games and I kind of get it. Still dumb though.
Looking forward to ch2, good luck.
- Jan 5, 2020
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