Ren'Py Witch Hunter [v0.23.3] [Lazy tarts]

[Saligia]

I played this when it was first released, and remember posting here what I thought of it, so I thought i'd do so for the new version as well.

Massively in the Pro list of things is still the art, I love it. It fits the setting, all the characters are recognizable and what little nudity and porn is already in leaves me confident that the maker could turn this into something awesome.

Second in the pro column is that he listened to the complaints and critique he got and actually changed things for the better. I remember being rather put off when it took Zero effort to start corrupting Elyon, and thinking that it would be way better if the corruption was more gradual, and I think this has been improved, though I'd recommend the creator that there are rather a lot more possible steps between having someone stick out her tongue to fully stripping her naked.

The only real issue i've got at this point are the spelling errors (not at all uncommon for a russian developer.) and the bugs. And this is version 0.2 people, as long as he keeps improving things I don't particularly mind, and the last complaint is the glacial pace of development. Which really just means that I like your work and would like to see more of it.

So keep up the good work, here's to hoping we see a 0.21 with the interaction bug fixed sometime soon.

 

[Mikklogic]

the "actions" seem to bugged when ever i click on them it brings me back to her menu...

me too

 

[dragonlord2222]

I do like how dark this route is since we are playing as a bad guy but the bugs do ruin it.

 

[Mikklogic]

no one now a metod for game? i click ok action and terun menu. no solution?

 

[nudesliker87]

I made a few local fixes in order to be able to see all the content in this version. Here is each fix and what it does, you can reproduce it yourself with a text editor. Lines with '-' at the start were removed and lines with '+' at the start were added.

game/scripts/bookshop/elion_action.rpy:
I removed two levels of indentation from the check_action() shown here. This seems to fix the bug where the 'Action' dialog options have no effect.

                 if brayanGuyEleon == 0 and complicate_life_elion > 0:
                     if not (label in can_use_actions_after_lost_brayan):
                         complicate_life_elion = 2
                         renpy.say(cedrick_sprite, "(Elyon doesn’t need that much money to help her parents. Perhaps it is necessary to figure out how to worsen her financial situation... Maybe it's worth to get rid of her parents .. I need to find someone to whom it can be assigned..)")
                         renpy.jump('dialog_elion')
-                        check_action()
+                check_action()
         renpy.jump('dialog_elion')

game/scripts/bookshop/elion_actions/blowjob.rpy:
I renamed a label, this fixes a crash when the blowjob scene starts.

label elion_blowjob_reject:
     "Elion has no mood"
     jump first_brayan
-label elion_blowjob_brayan_accept:
+label elion_blowjob_accept:
     show elion_norm
     cedrick_sprite 'Elyon..'
     hide elion_norm
     show elion_kosi_izv_2
     with Dissolve(.5)

game/sprites.rpy:
Some of the blowjob cg files are jpgs but the code was looking for pngs. This fixes a crash partway through the scene.

image cg_elion_blowjob_4='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_4.jpg'
 image cg_elion_blowjob_5='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_5.jpg'
 image cg_elion_blowjob_52='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_52.jpg'
 image cg_elion_blowjob_6='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_6.jpg'
-image cg_elion_blowjob_7='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_7.png'
-image cg_elion_blowjob_8='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_8.png'
-image cg_elion_blowjob_9='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_9.png'
-image cg_elion_blowjob_8s ='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_8s.png'
-image cg_elion_blowjob_9s ='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_9s.png'
-image cg_elion_blowjob_9vnez ='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_9vnez.png'
+image cg_elion_blowjob_7='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_7.jpg'
+image cg_elion_blowjob_8='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_8.jpg'
+image cg_elion_blowjob_9='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_9.jpg'
+image cg_elion_blowjob_8s ='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_8s.jpg'
+image cg_elion_blowjob_9s ='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_9s.jpg'
+image cg_elion_blowjob_9vnez ='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_9vnez.jpg'
 image cg_elion_podstol='scenes/cg_elion_podstol.jpg'
 image cg_elion_podstol2='scenes/cg_elion_podstol2.jpg'
 image cg_elion_podstol3='scenes/cg_elion_podstol3.jpg'
 image cg_elion_podstol4='scenes/cg_elion_podstol4.jpg'

game/scripts/fight/fight.rpy:
In order to complete the new branch, you need to:
Get 200 gold by clicking the area on the horizon in Meridian to the far left to fight bandits and slowly get gold
Talk to the creature at the inn
Get 200 more gold
Talk to Miranda and ask for her panties. She asks for a scorpion tail.
Click the area on the horizon in Meridian just left of the castle to fight monsters. Run away until you fight a scorpion. If you are lucky, you will only need 3 potions (bought for 100 gold each from Miranda) to win the fight. If you win the fight, there is a 1/5 chance of getting a tail...even if you cheat to get infinite gold this takes so long I decided to change it so the tail always drops:

         jump send_brayan_to_meridian
     else:
         'You won'
         if (rEnemy['item']):
             if (rEnemy['name'] == 'Morpion'):
-                $ giveItem = renpy.random.choice([0,0,0,0,1])
+                $ giveItem = renpy.random.choice([1,1,1,1,1])
                 if (giveItem):
                     $ inventory.items.append(rEnemy['item'])
                     $ hasHvostScorp = 1
                     "You got the tail of a Morpion"

Hope this helps somebody.

Edit: I've made a zip of the modified files, you can extract it into the directory with the .exe
Edit2: Since people are still referencing this post and missing Semiguacamole's post below, I have updated the patch to include Semiguacamole's fix and also translated a few missed lines of Russian into English.

 

[Mikklogic]

I made a few local fixes in order to be able to see all the content in this version. Here is each fix and what it does, you can reproduce it yourself with a text editor. Lines with '-' at the start were removed and lines with '+' at the start were added.

game/scripts/bookshop/elion_action.rpy:
I removed two levels of indentation from the check_action() shown here. This seems to fix the bug where the 'Action' dialog options have no effect.

                 if brayanGuyEleon == 0 and complicate_life_elion > 0:
                     if not (label in can_use_actions_after_lost_brayan):
                         complicate_life_elion = 2
                         renpy.say(cedrick_sprite, "(Elyon doesn’t need that much money to help her parents. Perhaps it is necessary to figure out how to worsen her financial situation... Maybe it's worth to get rid of her parents .. I need to find someone to whom it can be assigned..)")
                         renpy.jump('dialog_elion')
-                        check_action()
+                check_action()
         renpy.jump('dialog_elion')

game/scripts/bookshop/elion_actions/blowjob.rpy:
I renamed a label, this fixes a crash when the blowjob scene starts.

label elion_blowjob_reject:
     "Elion has no mood"
     jump first_brayan
-label elion_blowjob_brayan_accept:
+label elion_blowjob_accept:
     show elion_norm
     cedrick_sprite 'Elyon..'
     hide elion_norm
     show elion_kosi_izv_2
     with Dissolve(.5)

game/sprites.rpy:
Some of the blowjob cg files are jpgs but the code was looking for pngs. This fixes a crash partway through the scene.

image cg_elion_blowjob_4='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_4.jpg'
 image cg_elion_blowjob_5='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_5.jpg'
 image cg_elion_blowjob_52='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_52.jpg'
 image cg_elion_blowjob_6='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_6.jpg'
-image cg_elion_blowjob_7='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_7.png'
-image cg_elion_blowjob_8='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_8.png'
-image cg_elion_blowjob_9='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_9.png'
-image cg_elion_blowjob_8s ='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_8s.png'
-image cg_elion_blowjob_9s ='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_9s.png'
-image cg_elion_blowjob_9vnez ='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_9vnez.png'
+image cg_elion_blowjob_7='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_7.jpg'
+image cg_elion_blowjob_8='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_8.jpg'
+image cg_elion_blowjob_9='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_9.jpg'
+image cg_elion_blowjob_8s ='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_8s.jpg'
+image cg_elion_blowjob_9s ='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_9s.jpg'
+image cg_elion_blowjob_9vnez ='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_9vnez.jpg'
 image cg_elion_podstol='scenes/cg_elion_podstol.jpg'
 image cg_elion_podstol2='scenes/cg_elion_podstol2.jpg'
 image cg_elion_podstol3='scenes/cg_elion_podstol3.jpg'
 image cg_elion_podstol4='scenes/cg_elion_podstol4.jpg'

game/scripts/fight/fight.rpy:
In order to complete the new branch, you need to:
Get 200 gold by clicking the area on the horizon in Meridian to the far left to fight bandits and slowly get gold
Talk to the creature at the inn
Get 200 more gold
Talk to Miranda and ask for her panties. She asks for a scorpion tail.
Click the area on the horizon in Meridian just left of the castle to fight monsters. Run away until you fight a scorpion. If you are lucky, you will only need 3 potions (bought for 100 gold each from Miranda) to win the fight. If you win the fight, there is a 1/5 chance of getting a tail...even if you cheat to get infinite gold this takes so long I decided to change it so the tail always drops:

         jump send_brayan_to_meridian
     else:
         'You won'
         if (rEnemy['item']):
             if (rEnemy['name'] == 'Morpion'):
-                $ giveItem = renpy.random.choice([0,0,0,0,1])
+                $ giveItem = renpy.random.choice([1,1,1,1,1])
                 if (giveItem):
                     $ inventory.items.append(rEnemy['item'])
                     $ hasHvostScorp = 1
                     "You got the tail of a Morpion"

Hope this helps somebody.

i love u xD

 

[jason007]

goblin wont let me buy the phone even though ive got the money.

 

[Saber1995]

question.. will this game be another summertime saga aka each update= save wipe?

 

[Saber1995]

goblin wont let me buy the phone even though ive got the money.

you need to buy a hat for him the house is by the train

 

[Ashtahar]

I am unable to improve the mood of Elyon (so I can't corrupt her), it is a bug ? or is there something specific to do ?

EDIT : probleme solved

 

[Big.Joe]

I am unable to improve the mood of Elyon (so I can't corrupt her), it is a bug ? or is there something specific to do ?

wait a few days

Are the blowjob scenes, that were in the previous version, still in ?

 

[one who faps]

Damn man this game looks good and the reveiw say it is good to sl make a android verion then man i would love to play it and keep working on the game

 

[Irischan]

why i the hand and blowjob only when you take help from meridan(sleep potion) and the footjob when you fight the bf
or do i something wrong?

 

[Saber1995]

hmm how do you attack people?

 

[Irischan]

you need to talk with the goblin in the city.then go to meridian in the tavern and talk with his brother(other goblin) he want 200 gold and panties from you.the panties give you the girl in the castle after you bring here a item from a scorpion(hard fight) you should farm 500gold (300 for potions) and 200for the goblin on thiefs.its need time but thats the way

 

[Saber1995]

hmm is it a bug I don't have any options for the sleep potion?

 

[Irischan]

sleep potion you can only take if you let meridian deal with the bf but then the game end after the blowjob (like v0.1)

when you deal with him(fight) then you there who you play right now

 

[Semiguacamole]

I made a few local fixes in order to be able to see all the content in this version. Here is each fix and what it does, you can reproduce it yourself with a text editor. Lines with '-' at the start were removed and lines with '+' at the start were added.

game/scripts/bookshop/elion_action.rpy:
I removed two levels of indentation from the check_action() shown here. This seems to fix the bug where the 'Action' dialog options have no effect.

                 if brayanGuyEleon == 0 and complicate_life_elion > 0:
                     if not (label in can_use_actions_after_lost_brayan):
                         complicate_life_elion = 2
                         renpy.say(cedrick_sprite, "(Elyon doesn’t need that much money to help her parents. Perhaps it is necessary to figure out how to worsen her financial situation... Maybe it's worth to get rid of her parents .. I need to find someone to whom it can be assigned..)")
                         renpy.jump('dialog_elion')
-                        check_action()
+                check_action()
         renpy.jump('dialog_elion')

game/scripts/bookshop/elion_actions/blowjob.rpy:
I renamed a label, this fixes a crash when the blowjob scene starts.

label elion_blowjob_reject:
     "Elion has no mood"
     jump first_brayan
-label elion_blowjob_brayan_accept:
+label elion_blowjob_accept:
     show elion_norm
     cedrick_sprite 'Elyon..'
     hide elion_norm
     show elion_kosi_izv_2
     with Dissolve(.5)

game/sprites.rpy:
Some of the blowjob cg files are jpgs but the code was looking for pngs. This fixes a crash partway through the scene.

image cg_elion_blowjob_4='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_4.jpg'
 image cg_elion_blowjob_5='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_5.jpg'
 image cg_elion_blowjob_52='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_52.jpg'
 image cg_elion_blowjob_6='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_6.jpg'
-image cg_elion_blowjob_7='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_7.png'
-image cg_elion_blowjob_8='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_8.png'
-image cg_elion_blowjob_9='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_9.png'
-image cg_elion_blowjob_8s ='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_8s.png'
-image cg_elion_blowjob_9s ='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_9s.png'
-image cg_elion_blowjob_9vnez ='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_9vnez.png'
+image cg_elion_blowjob_7='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_7.jpg'
+image cg_elion_blowjob_8='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_8.jpg'
+image cg_elion_blowjob_9='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_9.jpg'
+image cg_elion_blowjob_8s ='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_8s.jpg'
+image cg_elion_blowjob_9s ='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_9s.jpg'
+image cg_elion_blowjob_9vnez ='scenes/cg_elion_blowjob_9vnez.jpg'
 image cg_elion_podstol='scenes/cg_elion_podstol.jpg'
 image cg_elion_podstol2='scenes/cg_elion_podstol2.jpg'
 image cg_elion_podstol3='scenes/cg_elion_podstol3.jpg'
 image cg_elion_podstol4='scenes/cg_elion_podstol4.jpg'

game/scripts/fight/fight.rpy:
In order to complete the new branch, you need to:
Get 200 gold by clicking the area on the horizon in Meridian to the far left to fight bandits and slowly get gold
Talk to the creature at the inn
Get 200 more gold
Talk to Miranda and ask for her panties. She asks for a scorpion tail.
Click the area on the horizon in Meridian just left of the castle to fight monsters. Run away until you fight a scorpion. If you are lucky, you will only need 3 potions (bought for 100 gold each from Miranda) to win the fight. If you win the fight, there is a 1/5 chance of getting a tail...even if you cheat to get infinite gold this takes so long I decided to change it so the tail always drops:

         jump send_brayan_to_meridian
     else:
         'You won'
         if (rEnemy['item']):
             if (rEnemy['name'] == 'Morpion'):
-                $ giveItem = renpy.random.choice([0,0,0,0,1])
+                $ giveItem = renpy.random.choice([1,1,1,1,1])
                 if (giveItem):
                     $ inventory.items.append(rEnemy['item'])
                     $ hasHvostScorp = 1
                     "You got the tail of a Morpion"

Hope this helps somebody.

Edit: I've made a zip of the modified files, you can extract it into the directory with the .exe

Does nobody test their games even slightly before they release them anymore?
the file
game/scripts/bookshop/elion_actions/blowjob.rpy
still needs more fixes, the character name "Will" must be spelled with a lower case "w" on line 135 and 136

-    Will "Hello.."
-    Will "Do you sell frog toys?"
+    will "Hello.."
+    will "Do you sell frog toys?"

otherwise it will cause an exception, still the end screen at this path is bugged out even further

 

[Saber1995]

well I cant do any actions or anything atm... I got rid of everyone in the way even the fairy , elyon now lives in the shop but been days and nothing new is that the end of the update? also the action don't work

 

[Bellyk Franck]

Got "footjob" as highest action available so far... What to do ?