There are areas in the story where the Dev calls a girl him, I would recommend he goes over the entire story to straighten these mistakes out, nothing worse then calling a guy her or a girl him
Also how far can the MC go with these women - romancing them before he has to make a choice - or does it matter at all?
Also how far can the MC go with these women - romancing them before he has to make a choice - or does it matter at all?