- Jul 21, 2017
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As an obvious work in progress this is already amazing. Art, facial expressions, voiceover... Great! Gameplay is too easy and too slow at the same time, but most rewards are worth it.
One thing I'd change is the point of spells story-wise. Magically shorting the skirt lenght is a ridiculous concept. I'd propose to make it into a mass-hypnosis spells. Like, rules in Hogwarts force everyone to always wear strict uniforms, but putting spell on Hermione allows her to walk around in more and more revealing (or even simply stylish) clothes with everyone around being utterly fine with it because of how magic forces them to see less and less normal attire as something that is quite normal and up to school standards (while not really understanding why Hermione looks more and more attractive each day with - quickly becoming the hottest girl in school by a mile). And the teacher could get on it after a few successful experiments proving the spell's usefulness - thus explaining why her clothes start to change as well.
I'd make Harry, Hermione and their teacher to be the only one's aware of the reality. The way Hermione can dress sexier and sexier without reprocutions or anyone noticing would naturally break down her ingibitions and make her open to other sexual experiments.
One thing I'd change is the point of spells story-wise. Magically shorting the skirt lenght is a ridiculous concept. I'd propose to make it into a mass-hypnosis spells. Like, rules in Hogwarts force everyone to always wear strict uniforms, but putting spell on Hermione allows her to walk around in more and more revealing (or even simply stylish) clothes with everyone around being utterly fine with it because of how magic forces them to see less and less normal attire as something that is quite normal and up to school standards (while not really understanding why Hermione looks more and more attractive each day with - quickly becoming the hottest girl in school by a mile). And the teacher could get on it after a few successful experiments proving the spell's usefulness - thus explaining why her clothes start to change as well.
I'd make Harry, Hermione and their teacher to be the only one's aware of the reality. The way Hermione can dress sexier and sexier without reprocutions or anyone noticing would naturally break down her ingibitions and make her open to other sexual experiments.