VN Ren'Py Wrestling Dynasty [v0.3] [UniSeven Studios]

[Unreality]

The only question I have from there is if the trans/futa/femboy character(s) would have scenes where they get with the female LIs? Like MC+LI+Trans threesome where the trans character engages with the female LI. This I think is the real concern that people (myself included) have when trans/futa characters are introduced into a harem.

Can you name VNs where such interactions happened? Harem game with trans LI interacting with other LIs. for those interested.

 

[Shabrani_Goudou]

I may have to replay from the begining because I don't remember exactly, but what was the deal with some visual effects regarding the MC (you know the "spooky" stuff) and schizo persona (?) of a lot of characters ? Is this like MC imposing/enforcing his maledom tendencies via some power and creating submissive personas for the ladies or something ? Basically, wtf's going on with that stuff ?

 

[Beerus]

I may have to replay from the begining because I don't remember exactly, but what was the deal with some visual effects regarding the MC (you know the "spooky" stuff) and schizo persona (?) of a lot of characters ? Is this like MC imposing/enforcing his maledom tendencies via some power and creating submissive personas for the ladies or something ? Basically, wtf's going on with that stuff ?

If you're asking questions and are a bit confused... good. That's intentional. Something weird is going on when you look under the surface. Or is there(?)

 

[Jack Townsend]

There's no any futa/trans character yet, you sensible prick.
Also almost in every game here ANY secondary content is optional.
Lol, do you even understand that you're making yuck face while jerking off to incest? Do you think that's normal?

This reminds me that vegan shiet where people everywhere were like "You know, I am a vegan!!! And I don't like you because you're buying steak!"

Actually, the futa/trans character has already been introduced in the game. When you free roam and head to the main gym area, Serena Jefferson introduces you to the twin ring technicians: Quinn and Robin Sanders. Robin is the futa/trans character.

 

[LordRUEZ]

If you're asking questions and are a bit confused... good. That's intentional. Something weird is going on when you look under the surface. Or is there(?)

Firstly, you have crafted such a great story, with drama, romance, and passion! Just please don't let it end with the MC just dreaming about the whole thing after discovering his mother and sister dead, or even worse he was in a coma beat down from his dad, and dreaming the whole thing. Also, if not a dream, please do not hurt the mom (or sister) again (maybe beat down to the MC since he's strong and will recover), and don't let the mother sacrifice herself for her kids, which all mothers should or would do. A VN does not have to end in tragedy to be different. You've already shown yourself to be an excellent English writer, and I can't wait to read more (the DAZ chapters were most excellent)!

 

[Caranthral]

Some of the best shit to come out since sliced bread. Story telling and vibe is extremely engaging, certain moments can hit like Truck-kun trying to send you into an isekai world while simultaneously giving you heart melting moments that make you smile like Smeagol when he's holding The Ring, main menu song is amazing, the dev is The Dude, and I can't wait to see where the story goes from here.
10/10 game.

 

[GibboBtw]

I just picked this one up to try and didn't pay attention to the families last name. So Imagine my surprise after I pick one of the random names I use sometimes and then see this.

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TB couldn't stop this man! My GOAT IS BACK!

 

[Beerus]

I just picked this one up to try and didn't pay attention to the families last name. So Imagine my surprise after I pick one of the random names I use sometimes and then see this.

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TB couldn't stop this man! My GOAT IS BACK!

Spoiler: Arthur, I've got a plan.

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[kibaris]

I realy tried to like this game, and the girls realy were adorable at first but there just so much things that put me out of the story...


Veda son is a huge fan of Franco but cant even recognize Franco's wife or one of his kids? it's feel really forced and not realy believable to be honnest, i mean when someone is famous like that, it's even possible to know those things without being a fan, so for a huge nerd who's obsessed with the guy to not knowing?

The mc doesnt even have to do anything to seduce the girls, he barely meet them 2/3 days ago, barely exchanged a few word with any of them (exept for his family) and yet all of them are immediatly trusting him and showing how desparate they are to become his submissive bitches and how they crave to be fucked by him , there is no need for the game to be a slow burn or anything, but it still feel extremely rushed to me on that front when barely a few days have passed since the begining of the game..

and the worst, Not sure what's it's about all these "?" and the character talking to themselves most of the time either.
I understand that they all have serious problems and that it weighs heavily on them of course , and showing some of their though sometimes to help to understand them better isnt a bad things,but maybe a middleground should be found here because, it's not even possible to have a single talk between two character without having those huge cringy monologues every two sentence. It completly break the rythm of the story and it make it so easy to loose track to what the character were even talking in the first place on top of making it look like every character in this story are completly crazy teenager and not adult .... (like when he was texting them in this chapter 5, at some point i just started to skip it, it was just far too much )

 

[Beerus]

I realy tried to like this game, and the girls realy were adorable at first but there just so much things that put me out of the story...


Veda son is a huge fan of Franco but cant even recognize Franco's wife or one of his kids? it's feel really forced and not realy believable to be honnest, i mean when someone is famous like that, it's even possible to know those things without being a fan, so for a huge nerd who's obsessed with the guy to not knowing?

The mc doesnt even have to do anything to seduce the girls, he barely meet them 2/3 days ago, barely exchanged a few word with any of them (exept for his family) and yet all of them are immediatly trusting him and showing how desparate they are to become his submissive bitches and how they crave to be fucked by him , there is no need for the game to be a slow burn or anything, but it still feel extremely rushed to me on that front when barely a few days have passed since the begining of the game..

and the worst, Not sure what's it's about all these "?" and the character talking to themselves most of the time either.
I understand that they all have serious problems and that it weighs heavily on them of course , and showing some of their though sometimes to help to understand them better isnt a bad things,but maybe a middleground should be found here because, it's not even possible to have a single talk between two character without having those huge cringy monologues every two sentence. It completly break the rythm of the story and it make it so easy to loose track to what the character were even talking in the first place on top of making it look like every character in this story are completly crazy teenager and not adult .... (like when he was texting them in this chapter 5, at some point i just started to skip it, it was just far too much )

It's very clear this game is not and will never be for you then, and it's a bit odd to hear you made it all the way to Chapter 5 (which is many hours in) just for an experience you didn't seem to like from early on. Regardless, thank you for trying the game. I hope you enjoy the next AVN you play instead! See ya

 

[kibaris]

It's very clear this game is not and will never be for you then, and it's a bit odd to hear you made it all the way to Chapter 5 (which is many hours in) just for an experience you didn't seem to like from early on. Regardless, thank you for trying the game. I hope you enjoy the next AVN you play instead! See ya

Well to be fair it's mostly in this update with those text , that excluded it was mostly a pleasant experience and like you said i wouldnt have reached chapter 5 if i didnt like the game, but i dont know it felt realy disturbing to see all the girls (and the mc) going crazy, and being so desperate all of a sudden for a random guy they barely exchanged a few word with.., it felt overly exagereted, when until now it was nice to interact with them.

 

[Jack Townsend]

Well to be fair it's mostly in this update with those text , that excluded it was mostly a pleasant experience and like you said i wouldnt have reached chapter 5 if i didnt like the game, but i dont know it felt realy disturbing to see all the girls (and the mc) going crazy, and being so desperate all of a sudden for a random guy they barely exchanged a few word with.., it felt overly exagereted, when until now it was nice to interact with them.

Good looking teenager trying to protect his mother and sister from an abusive father and husband. What woman wouldn't instantly fall in love with a guy like that?

 

[Beerus]

Good looking teenager trying to protect his mother and sister from an abusive father and husband. What woman wouldn't instantly fall in love with a guy like that?

Veda is initially drawn to MC because of his looks. And then turns out MC is actually a really sweet, caring kid. And then Veda learns how much family is important to him. And then Veda sees how much MC is willing to help Zahir out and be his friend, always try to include him and her together, like for the movie, etc. And then Veda sees how stubborn and persistent the MC is, wont give up on her no matter how hard she tried pushing him away (especially right before the horror movie in Chapter 4). And then Veda sees herself how much the MC cares with the MC promising her all these things she wants to be promised. And then it continues in Chapter 5 with researching Dani and the MC's continued efforts to include Veda in activities not only with him but with her own son together.

So in other words, yeah it's a complete mystery why Veda might EVER fall for someone like that and instead it's weird overnight mind control that makes no sense and MC did absolutely nothing and now Veda wants him. Yeah, that's how it went.


Dani is initially drawn to the MC because of his heritage. We learned in the text chain with her that she doesn't WANT to but she does find the MC very attractive. Dani then learns how family orientated he is, how much he sacrificed for his family and went above and beyond to protect them. And then we learn Dani went through something similar where SHE had to take her family and run away. And then Dani learns and sees how MC interacts with Melissa and Abby, how happy they seem together despite all the obstacles. And despite all of this, Dani STILL does not send MC a topless selfie, signifying there is still restraint and "route to travel" with Dani before you can even get any topless photos from her.

So in other words, yeah it's a complete mystery why Dani might EVER fall for someone like that and instead it's weird overnight mind control that makes no sense and MC did absolutely nothing and now Dani wants him. Yeah, that's how it went.


Either he's speedreading, skipping, entirely just not understanding or "getting it" or otherwise flat out just not paying attention. Oh well, his loss. Anyway, it's time to watch more NFL

 

[GibboBtw]

Damn, how have I only just found out about this VN as a massive incest harem enjoyer. It's fucking amazing.

Keep up the good work Beerus. You're cooking something special here IMO.

Can't wait to see some action with Veda and Beverly the Bank Manager especially...

 

[Beerus]

Damn, how have I only just found out about this VN as a massive incest harem enjoyer. It's fucking amazing.

Keep up the good work Beerus. You're cooking something special here IMO.

Can't wait to see some action with Veda and Beverly the Bank Manager especially...

I was having a rather down night and can't tell you how much this means to hear. Thank you so much for enjoying Wrestling Dynasty. There's so much more to come too, as I don't think I've even told 5% of the entire story so far. We're in for a long, wild ride. Thanks again!

 

[Azsouth]

damn, really wanted to see what the whole family was going to talk about at the end there.

 

[hrfssfjlurzd]

so how is the female domination like ? Since it is a harem game ? Also what is the futa content right now , there is one character that you interact with , do you have sex with her is she dateable ? Saw the answer the forum site before this one : there will be no femdom. Question answered

 

[Aegon76]

how much futa content is there? worth downloading if im only interested in it?

 

[ZaneAsbjorn]

The feedback/discussion is not just for you. Its a public forum and discussions can help players too. I have not played the game so I often come to the forum to see what peoples impressions are whether they be positive or negative. I often end up subscribing on patreon so I want to see what I am getting into. Especially the stuff you dont see just by playing the game such as update velocity, general attitude of the community towards the game/developer, dev's responsiveness etc just to get a feel for the type of person I will potentially be supporting.

I'll be honest - personal attacks, insults and name calling is a bit off putting to me. Doesnt mean that you should just sit there and take it of course but I do think the same point could have been made politely. Reading the post, I get the impression that the intent was to help. My interpretation of what the guy said was that the initial parts of the game could benefit from being reworked a bit and it is perfectly reasonable for you to say no to that - the insults though are unnecessary.

The reason I find it off putting is if I end up playing/supporting the game and I share an opinion, I might be similarly insulted. Of course I do not expect anything I say to influence development if that goes against a developer's wishes. I strongly believe developers should follow their vision and letting players dictate development will result in a ruined product. But I would at least hope that a developer reads what I have to say and dismisses it politely. I am fully aware that you probably do not care if I play your game. But just know that this comment was made in good faith as well.

Yeah idk what the dudes problem is. Anything that can even be taken as negative and it seems he is rudely dismissive at best and intellectually holier than thou on the worse side based on the replies i've seen(of which I hope I have just seen the worst of them and they can actually take feedback positive and negative in stride). Just don't respond at that point, you are doing more damage to yourself and your game with that response than the comment being mildly ignorant is.

That being said I both agree and disagree with what the original dude said. I think the amount of words for the most part isn't an issue and I definitely agree with another comment here about the portrayal and depiction of abuse, trauma, and ptsd is really good, great even. But the writing can absolutely also start waxing poetic and that can give the story and individual paragraphs a bloated feeling as well as a feeling of who the heck talks like that and also pull you out of any immersion. Specifically when it's a character directly speaking that way. So I definitely think bringing up issues of what could be considered bloat is perfectly reasonable. But if the guy is solely complaining about word count than being ignored is deserved but being talked down to and insulted is still not. Albeit he also came across as whiney a bit to me as well.

Other than that I actually like a decent amount of what I have seen and I basically just finished the night after the initial testing. There are a few things I would prefer to be different but that is creators prerogative and not an issue for me. My main "issue" is, coming from a gamer, when I see the words "career mode" I had super high hopes of forming the mc as a wrestler through my choices so when I got to the tests and had no input of what he is good or bad at that was a downer.

So a question at the end of this, if you haven't already decided I should also be insulted and don't finish reading this, (half joking lol no offense but come on man/woman) Will this be very much novel based and the stated career mode is the narrative device solely or will we end up having a decent amount of input into the mc to show what kind of wrestler he is? Whether that's limited to maybe promo options or something or even large input with more decisions to at least guide the career mode even if we don't change much from a story aspect.

 

[Jungles70]

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