I just want to say to the developer that this has quickly become one of my favorite games I've played from here or TF. Most of the girls look amazing and I will admit when I first started the game that I was taken aback that Shawna was so much prettier than the LI (I'm using LI become I renamed her.) On top of that, the connection between her and the MC was so deep and believable. I could easily see the MC and Shawn considering themselves brothers if Shawn had not become Shawna. On the topic of transitioning, Skye. With those looks and that body, and with what was said in the back story, I can't see her as anything but a tomboy like the girls I grew up with. Running around with the guys, playing sports against the guys, working on cars, wrestling, throwing punches instead of slaps, a ribald sense of humor, just one of the boys, but that didn't mean they weren't girls. Skye strikes me as a girl that is just an extreme tomboy that is terribly confused by all the changes in current society that tell her that a girl that likes boy things is really just a boy in a girl's body, instead of just a girl that happens to like boy things more than girl things. If she were more manly or had a less bodacious body, maybe I could see it, but currently I just can't. In fact, if she looked more like Penny, I could easier believe it, because Penny... well, Penny...
Now to my few gripes. The grammar has some spelling issues that repeatedly pop up. They're minor, but as a writer myself, they leap out at me and slap me across the face.
I think the phone with the social media app should be a player controlled function so you can access your social media and see what others are saying about you. Also, the ability to choose where to go in the house and at school would be appreciated, but don't take these wants as demands, I know that getting the quality found in this game takes time, effort and inspiration. Keep up the good work, Dev, you rock!
Now to my few gripes. The grammar has some spelling issues that repeatedly pop up. They're minor, but as a writer myself, they leap out at me and slap me across the face.
I think the phone with the social media app should be a player controlled function so you can access your social media and see what others are saying about you. Also, the ability to choose where to go in the house and at school would be appreciated, but don't take these wants as demands, I know that getting the quality found in this game takes time, effort and inspiration. Keep up the good work, Dev, you rock!
