rehiols

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Sep 27, 2018
35
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I love this game and I really would like if you update this weekly or monthly as I read on 1st page but don't leave this uncomplete ever. Please complete it for sure.
Thanks for the amazing work.
 

rehiols

Newbie
Sep 27, 2018
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You have included a lot for a 2 days in game and for starting it have sex scene as well with development to the story. That's great keep it up.
 

Captain Kirk

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I love this game and I really would like if you update this weekly or monthly as I read on 1st page but don't leave this uncomplete ever. Please complete it for sure.
Thanks for the amazing work.
His plan is to update the game once every month with about the same amount of renders in each update. I would follow his patreon if you truly enjoy his work.
 

Captain Kirk

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What's not to like about this game we can have all the girls that we like and we even have Azel boss setting us up with the more mature women ;) another game where I keep finding it hard to turn any of the girls down, Coach Harper and her daughter I do hope we get some of that loving how all the girls fuss over the MC as well he really is spoiled for choice, Interesting to see where the story goes with the Mom and Sister coming back
Yes, a game that has everyone fussing over the MC feels like fresh almost. Every game now a days you either start off as the son returning home from abroad or the nerd who’s addicted to porn and games. One of thr reasons this game is so fantastic.
 

Mormont

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Nov 30, 2018
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Yes, a game that has everyone fussing over the MC feels like fresh almost. Every game now a days you either start off as the son returning home from abroad or the nerd who’s addicted to porn and games. One of thr reasons this game is so fantastic.
Yeah, that's another thing this time we are the star athlete which certainly makes a change if only other games would follow suit hate playing as the shy weak MC types.
 

Triple OG

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Aug 28, 2019
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Yeah, that's another thing this time we are the star athlete which certainly makes a change if only other games would follow suit hate playing as the shy weak MC types.
Love the athlete approach they took with this game and hopefully it all works out. Household full of women that all seem to want the same thing makes for great entertainment.
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Ignatz

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Welp, I said I would and I did. Second installment was enough to convert me to a patron.

It's a light, airy style but also with some impending dark elements. Nothing too "classic trope" yet (if you exclude the fire hose). Remains to be seen if the developer makes it more real (multiple girls leads to serious trouble) or more fantasy (one big, happy, extended and sexual "family").

Really enjoying the morphed lips for close-up kisses and tweaked expressions. Emotional depth is there for the readers and, good gosh, plenty of easy sex there for the Kleenex crowd.
 

DD0

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Jan 13, 2018
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My comments are a mixed bag that usually lean negative. I mean, no one speaks up when all's right with the world, right? When the rock hits you, holler. Don't judge me.

So when I come out with praise, it isn't like the reflexive praise from some of the youngsters that veer away from criticism. I am super critical and my praise is earned.

This is excellent in almost every respect. The artwork is decent, the lack of actual incest is a plus in my book (PRAISE GOD it's not another shitty incest clone...yet?), and I like the characters. The animation is not the best ever, but it's pretty good for this genre. Some of the situations are OTT, which is par for the course, but it isn't absolutely crazy. We've all seen stranger stuff in the news.

I'm most impressed with how much content, including sex, is offered in this early incarnation, with half a gig of memory. Devs do have to be careful with how quickly and how much sexual content is included in early versions. More sex actually means LESS support early on, as potential patrons can get what they came for right away without paying. At the same time, it is dickish of devs to drag things out with grind or tedious bs like "sleep sex" and childish peeping. I think this guy is striking the right, near perfect balance. It's really working for me.

My one big complaint is the tired "nervous virgin" bit. I mean, it does happen like that irl, though the average person loses their virginity before college. But it is such a cliche in media featuring highschool and early college students. It's like they are supposed to be young adults but are still acting like kids.

OTOH, dragging things out with the gf is probably a necessary component of striking the balance of too much up front sexual content and not enough.

And it's early days, so lots can be improved upon. I no longer have the wherewithal to fund fund fund indy games, but this is definitely a dev who deserves a little coffee. I look forward to what comes next.

Will copy part of this post into a positive rating and review.
 

Antuuthu

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Nov 2, 2018
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I get this error when I get to the second dream of the mc's biological mother. where he sees a cement side walk and asks why is it so dark. then the scene changes to a diff place and the mc says something like how did i get here. The next scen shows the bio mom in a kitchen I think it is. then right after that i get the grey screen that shows the error log below. if i ignore it it skips a scene then does another error.

EDIT: I just found out i get the error when I chose not to try to find the mc's biological mother. If I choose to contact the mc's biological mother, I get no error.

Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
KeyError: u'rmom'

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "script.rpyc", line 6570, in script
  File "D:\Craig's Stuff\Hentai\[1]Keepers\1Favorites\WVM-Day1-2-1.0-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 694, in execute
    renpy.exports.say(who, what, *args, **kwargs)
  File "D:\Craig's Stuff\Hentai\[1]Keepers\1Favorites\WVM-Day1-2-1.0-pc\renpy\exports.py", line 1322, in say
    who(what, *args, **kwargs)
  File "D:\Craig's Stuff\Hentai\[1]Keepers\1Favorites\WVM-Day1-2-1.0-pc\renpy\character.py", line 1108, in __call__
    who = who_pattern.replace("[who]", sub(who))
  File "D:\Craig's Stuff\Hentai\[1]Keepers\1Favorites\WVM-Day1-2-1.0-pc\renpy\character.py", line 1103, in sub
    return renpy.substitutions.substitute(s, scope=scope, force=force, translate=translate)[0]
  File "D:\Craig's Stuff\Hentai\[1]Keepers\1Favorites\WVM-Day1-2-1.0-pc\renpy\substitutions.py", line 244, in substitute
    s = formatter.vformat(s, (), kwargs)
  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 563, in vformat
  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 585, in _vformat
  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 646, in get_field
  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 605, in get_value
KeyError: u'rmom'

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.2.2.491
WVM 1.0
Sat Sep 28 21:03:13 2019
 
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Captain Kirk

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Yeah, that's another thing this time we are the star athlete which certainly makes a change if only other games would follow suit hate playing as the shy weak MC types.
Ughh that is the worst thing ever, worst part is when they actually have nice art and renders and they then throw that shit at u.
 
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Master of Puppets

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Oct 5, 2017
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you may want to replay the game and chose the route where you romance Shauna (you're missing on quite a lot of content) and i believe if you chose that path one of the last dialogues if not the last the mc has with her...you'll see what i mean ;)
No shit I'm missing content, that's only the one complaint I had about the game. And she only hints at a threesome if you're already cheating with her? Because the first step to having a threesome is not fucking the other woman behind your girlfriend's back. I would be very disappointed if she is perfectly fine with him fucking around behind her back, no girl with self respect should put up with that.


Pure male harem fantasy played extremely straight. All the girls tripping over themselves to sleep with you. I'm looking forward to more updates of this.
Nooo, in no way does this count as harem. There's a big difference between harem and cheating, and this guy is very squarely on the cheating side. If it qualified as a harem I'd be a patron, probably won't be doing that if it sticks to cheating or monogamy though.
 

Avaron1974

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Aug 22, 2018
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Pure male harem fantasy played extremely straight. All the girls tripping over themselves to sleep with you. I'm looking forward to more updates of this.
It's not a harem.

Harem's are groups of women that all know about each other and are happy to share the man or woman of their affections.

This is a guy cheating on his girlfriend with several other woman.

It's fun but it isn't a harem. He's basically being a massive dick to the girl that loves him.
 
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Alig8r

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Nov 9, 2018
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Such a great game. Satisfying to play as a star athlete. You get a lot of pussy BUT if it doesn't feel right (not well written) and for not the right reason it's not satisfying.
This however it just works.
Jasmine, Harper, Bailey, Zoe, Natalie are fucking amazing. Let's just say Jamie was right to worry about competition at college. MC's mom looks gorgeous with her large eyes.
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