VN Ren'Py WVM [S2 Ch. 1 Ep. 13 B5] [Braindrop]

[Deleted member 3363005]

Day in the life of Harper. (head shake) whatever.... BTW...did everyone get a boob job while I wasn't looking??

 

[Catherine♡]

Come on man, did anyone still have hope for this when the dev constantly kept adding more girls instead of fleshing out the existing characters. I mean come on, I still know like only half of them. And was it just me that started thinking the all were looking pretty similar at least face wise.

'DITLO' is doing just that, fleshing out Harper's story and character. And the rage here is huge as you can see, people don't want that. They want to see the mc fucking 10 different girls, that's what made WVM so popular the huge number of women.

 

[MrD812]

We all told him he shouldn't use a duck for a reference photo, unfortunately he just didn't listen.

Closer to marsupial-human-mix then duck, have not seen any duck-bills on the characters or were they there before?

 

[lemonfreak]

'DITLO' is doing just that, fleshing out Harper's story and character. And the rage here is huge as you can see, people don't want that. They want to see the mc fucking 10 different girls, that's what made WVM so popular the huge number of women.

Yes, at the beginning the game's mission statement was essentially this


Well, maybe not the mind-expanding drugs part

 

[grim019]

If this DITLO was supposed to flesh out Harper as a character it failed. Since it didn't really teach us anything new about her.

 

[MissSonicBoom]

The way this guy talks it's like he's making the follow up to the greatest work of art known to man. It's just a porn game bro

That's been worked on for like 2+ years though, I think anyone in that position would've well moved on from it simply being a "porn game".

 

[FreshRevenge]

That's true, but you wonder about it. You may think about it, but you don't say it directly to your own child. Like what the actual fuck?

There are so many ways to make it work if you wanted to create a scene in which Natalie learns about it. In my opinion, it was just badly written.

It feels even stranger because Natalie reaction it's on the level of saying something similar to a partner or a friend.

" Oh, I was just thinking about how different my life could have been without you "
" You are stuck with me now haha "

This does feel more like a joke said between friends than anything else. You can add all the " Your mother is a failure " or " I wouldn't change anything " stuff, but it still doesn't make sense as an interaction. Hell, right after that you just start talking about boys? Hello? What the actual fuck is this?

I totally agree, it's so cringe worthy writing that it's horrible. But given Braindrop's mental state, I just think he isn't thinking on full cylinders at the moment. So the writing is taking a bullet so to speak. Maybe a couple of bullets. It makes me want to skip the dialog altogether.

There are other writing issues I have with this episode. I feel like he threw it together over a weekend and didn't think too much about his writing and didn't realize he was letting his problems affect his work.

 

[Trojaner]

'DITLO' is doing just that, fleshing out Harper's story and character. And the rage here is huge as you can see, people don't want that. They want to see the mc fucking 10 different girls, that's what made WVM so popular the huge number of women.

Well, don't think thats really true and enough Peops want to see whats missing like it is in this Harper shorty. The problem more or less he pushed it out at an wrong time since we havent seen her ingame if we ever will. Just Censoring it instead of use another view is just a bad sign and it does feel just wrong. Not to forget it's just an Mini instead of an Actual Maingame Update, thats why 99% of Fans and even Patrons are lil angry after all the long time.

 

[IFF01]

Whats with the censorship for Harper

 

[BeingADikDik]

If this DITLO was supposed to flesh out Harper as a character it failed. Since it didn't really teach us anything new about her.

I have to agree with this. I actually liked the 'update', but from a narrative standpoint you are exactly correct in that the discerning reader would already understand that Harper is a struggling single mother with anxiety issues and a strong relationship with and attachment to her daughter.

I think it might have been more impactful to show a day in Harper's life sometime before MC committed to WVM. By seeing her at a low point before MC enters her life, we could better glimpse her inner workings and have deeper context against which to contrast how she will blossom as a consequence of MC's actions.

 

[donkiszu]

this mini update is a bit of crap, and with partial censorship it doesn't pay to play, let alone download.

 

[MadMonk]

That's been worked on for like 2+ years though

And missing any meaningful release for almost 1 of those years

 

[Kyusen]

Bro, his excuses don't even makes sense anymore... "I have the update fully completed and was ready to released months ago, but i can't release because "insert a poor excuse", sorry guys", anyone that believe this shit is so naive or just stupid...

 

[Kharig]

Damn, not gonna lie... Comments are better then game itself.

 

[BillyBob132]

I actually for one enjoyed the little bit of harps story, and it looks like he maybe plans on doing more of these seeing as you pick the day when you start it (even tho theres only the 1 for now) also I thought it was nice seeing a bit into the new days and how the rework is going to look, I imagine we'll get to see the nat date and the night spent with them in the main game, but as far as updates and how long its taken which i'm probably going to be called a "white knight" among other things for saying this but he can take his time, he's pausing pledges and communicating etc, i'm glad to wait for what he thinks is the correct way to go it's his game afterall, and honestly things could be MUCH worse like devs who gatekeep updates until their patreon reaches a set goal.. but anyways good little mini game! it was good seeing the characters again

 

[redproud]

'DITLO' is doing just that, fleshing out Harper's story and character. And the rage here is huge as you can see, people don't want that. They want to see the mc fucking 10 different girls, that's what made WVM so popular the huge number of women.

I wanna see the MC fucking HARPER. His dick should be flying towards her like it was launched from a railgun. I am injecting copium straight into my veins waiting for it at this point.

The comments have been a great alternative since like 4 months ago though.

 

[quigebo]

Based off that Patreon post I'd consider this abandoned and just move on.

 

[Battle Brother Mac]

I thought he suspended payments? If not that is incredibly fucked up and a milky shitty move. Will there be a real update this year? This decade? This century?

There will be an update in next life trust the dev hahaha

We all told him he shouldn't use a duck for a reference photo, unfortunately he just didn't listen.

How many times do I have to remind you guys that the duck face is a very important requirement for the girls to be accepted as a harem member of the MC hahahaha

 

[Sngo]

I can appreciate the side story for what it is, sure, but it feels a little sour when the main story is taking so long between updates, if they were consistently every 1 or 2 months it'd probably land better, but ah well.

And of course Patrons are going to like it, too many of them lack a fucking spine to say otherwise, I'm sorry but if I was paying, I'd have more reason to be a wee bit disappointed.

Well BD patrons are paying for BD life diary not for the game itself since as you can see main game update is nowhere to be seen and now you get censored side stories too, when you think he couldn't go lower he proves you wrong .

 

[badass]

feels like a prank