VN Ren'Py WVM [S2 Ch. 1 Ep. 13 B5] [Braindrop]

[Crippy]

Just played for the first time and:
-Really good artwork - including the fish lips, oversize eyes and quirky expressions. I thought they just added to the overall humor. The MC didn't necessarily need a torpedo dick to sell his character.
-Writing was very creative. Where there were some outlandish scenarios, there were numerous real life ones as well.
-Animation can be smoothed out, but at least it was not so jerky that it became aggravating.

On a different note, this story line hit very close to home. A very close friend of mine, in the 1980s, did basically the same thing. He was highly recruited by several prominent D-I schools, but decided to stay close to home, follow his girlfriend, and attend a D-III school instead. He was instantly the big man on campus and everything was thrown at him (NCAA rules were not as strictly enforced then). Although his basketball playing career ended due to not getting drafted, he did go on to become a very successful D-I coach. And his girlfriend became his wife and they are still married today. His college stories were always fascinating to hear.

 

[Braindrop]

It's better to do it yourself if it can ve done.
The script I mean to be able to fix ir yourself for yourself.

Just go through the entire game again and re-write what you see.
I want it on my desk by tomorrow morning or you're fired.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Oh yeah....prove it.
What's he trying to say?
Can you do it in a sentence that hasn't altready been tried?
No????
I didn't think so.
Then you must be a game developer too in a rush to make sense or no sense.
I didn't find just one like this. I found many.
I seem to be running into them every 30 sentenses or so.
Or maybe I should come to you so you can better explain what the nonsense is he saying?

Just go through the entire game again and re-write what you see.
I want it on my desk by tomorrow morning or you're fired.

I said I withdraw my offer to help and I am a man of my word sorry.

 

[Braindrop]

I said I withdraw my offer to help and I am a man of my word sorry.

Just joking with you homie since I thought this was resolved.

 

[C.M.Cas]

Stop complain about Jamie, your fuctards! *I dunno if this word even exist, but, warever* She take care of you AND let you fu#k other girls! Man, she even throw you at others girls! If you dont live in Middle East, its not normal! This girl deserve respect! Stop looking forward for a di#k (Shauna) and think with your upper head!

Huff... Huff.... Huff...

I need go play Life Play and murder everyone to calm down. I come back from prison, what? 4 weeks? And you make angry like that. I will hunt your ip location and have a serious talk with all of you!! Leave ma Jamie alone!


Ok, just kidding. But, rly, i loved that girl. I will care and take of her. So, Dev. Give the option to marry her in the ending.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Just joking with you homie since I thought this was resolved.

That's OK out of 7 billion people I am the only one who keeps his word.

 

[preglovr12]

I hope MC gets a nice signing bonus, he'll need it for the diapers alone.

 

[kireineko]

Can I change the text box opacity in android?

 

[Canto Forte]

The weird part is if you told her a girl was really upset and you didn't sleep with her, Jaime would be pissed at you.

Highly offended you didn't share your cock with the sad girl.

A dick a day keeps the depression away, that's what the medical professional behind my local 7-11 tells me.

also MC has enough dick to go around so it's his duty to help all the sad lonely girls without a dick to ride on

That is the girl we all need in our lives !!!
Gimme that girl .. and that girl ... WHY SO SERIOUS BAMBI? dOE EYED IN THE HEAD LIGHTS?
lETS CUDDLE AND make good memories to get us through these rough times ...!

 

[K18]

Randomly thought about a line in the movie "The Waterboy", when looking back at Day 1 & 2 of the MC's affairs and before Jamie's proposal in Day 3. Looks like the MC has been living the motto of "What Mama Don't Know, Won't Hurt Her", but replacing Mama with Girlfriend and Tattoo with Cheating. Well you know, before babies start popping up.

 

[Braindrop]

Just felt like mentioning that we are beginning day four soon and the protagonist still hasn't slept in a bed yet.

Someone forgot about the very first image in the game

 

[K18]

Braindrop Elizabeth, Stacy, and Anna looked good without the makeup on. Will we at some point see some of the other girls (especially Shauna & Jamie) without makeup? As I noticed that almost every girl is wearing some type of makeup/eyeshadow and it stands out a lot. I'm curious how they would look remove it.

 

[Braindrop]

Braindrop Elizabeth, Stacy, and Anna looked good without the makeup on. Will we at some point see some of the other girls (especially Shauna & Jamie) without makeup? As I noticed that almost every girl is wearing some type of makeup/eyeshadow and it stands out a lot. I'm curious how they would look remove it.

Yes! Most girls at some point will not be wearing makeup.

 

[1337Bob]

Everyone is going gaga over Bailey but I much prefer Zoe.
She's got that whole cocky attitude and probably has daddy issues too. She has that whole super attractive diva look. She's probably one of those "choke me daddy" kind of girls.

I would probably hate her in real life for her arrogance but I find it such a turn on in the game.

 

[Wicked Garden]

Just rendered the new one in a similar scene as the old one. I think I very much prefer the new one myself. View attachment 441017

The newer version is definitely hotter

 

[firagabird]

Just finished the latest update (Day 3), and I'm floored by how much I enjoyed this game so far. While waiting for the next version to drop, can I play any similar games where the MC is both asserting yet kind to his girls/harem? I hate it whenever the MC of the erogame I play is either an asshole or a weakling.

 

[ArmoredCascade]

loving the girls and story so far but i have one little nip pick the MC is suppose to be this big all-star hot shot right? yet the school gives him a sports car and a mid-level looking home with jell cell looking rooms when the MC's teammate said about the house I had a picture of it being a well mid to large white house with marden look about it

 

[somebodynobody]

The new Emiko looks interesting, but kind of throws away being Asian, she looks Caucasian there.

 

[armion82]

Everyone is going gaga over Bailey but I much prefer Zoe.
She's got that whole cocky attitude and probably has daddy issues too. She has that whole super attractive diva look. She's probably one of those "choke me daddy" kind of girls.

I would probably hate her in real life for her arrogance but I find it such a turn on in the game.

And I like Jasmine.Put her right next to Sandra/Haley's Story/ and Gina/Big City's Pleasure.

 

[Freezer14]

Everyone is going gaga over Bailey but I much prefer Zoe.
She's got that whole cocky attitude and probably has daddy issues too. She has that whole super attractive diva look. She's probably one of those "choke me daddy" kind of girls.

I would probably hate her in real life for her arrogance but I find it such a turn on in the game.

Zoe is probably my in my top 2 favorite models in the game. I definitely agree with the idea that she's a "choke me daddy" kind of girl, but I almost got the feeling that she could be pretty down-to-earth in terms of personality.

The only time she's ever seemed cocky or arrogant is when you first tell her you can't "initiate" Liz. Then when Bailey and later Zoe herself, explains that a lot's going on, she starts to seem like a pretty friendly, normal girl who just wants the best for her squad. Kind of a "Mama Bear" for the cheerleaders. I'd be willing to bet she's probably just stressed about keeping that scholarship and having a decent team to cheer for. And class, of course. That would stress most people out.

Then again, I could be totally wrong.