I will say that text with no upper and lower case is a bit hard to read.
"Will your fashion tryouts end today?" goes into "Not really a problem." Both said by MC which seems there is a missing part of the conversation. Or at least worded oddly.
Alright should be All right.
Does need an English speaker to go over it. Has some grammar and structure mistakes.
Had an inability to use the Bazket until I clicked the bottom left symbol, this was on a Sunday when trying to buy a med kit for blackfire.
The loading of the UI in the morning shows some lag. Why does the UI even leave and come back?
I would say have the bonus scenes in places they make sense story wise like night walk can be viewed before you meet people or you learn about them
Developer portion needs a money hack, specifically for the queen thing, since if you waste all your money on that and the quest stuff getting the 1k for blackfire takes forever. Especially since beast boy says you have to do it quick. Really hurts the pacing of the game. It wouldn't be so bad if you weren't hard story gated there. Otherwise it is go to work, sleep, repeat around 70 times.
Money sound happens on sat for miko, and sunday for robin, and monday for nothing (prior to club).
Why is working blocked on sat and sun?
I would also suggest to tell the player when they hit a wall, like hanging out with people doing nothing past the event. Otherwise people will think there is nothing to the game.
Also the hints from the wall are so vague, like "something is happening in the tower today" yet you go around and nothing happened.
Gallery should probably also include all the queen app images.
Cyborg teaching to drive is weird, since you already drive a moped around and thus have to know the traffic signs.
Some events can be done outside their time zones, like learning to drive at evening can be done at night but when you finish it is next morning, but also Terra is still in the background and doesn't update until you do something.
Raven exhibitionist case tea drinking, when you are pulled into the room, after the scene ends the doors are still there to be clicked as if you are in the hallway.
Jinx unicorn drawing also doesn't update when it finishes so she is still at the desk.
Covering eyes at the rain storm has the scene show the evidence room.
Stocks with cyborg thing doesn't need a day between.
A dumping of multiple requests the moment a major story finishes isn't great, everyone wanting either that night or next morning. Maybe a bit of staggering.
blackfire taking a bath if you press H to look at the image, it brings up sprite blackfire.
couldn't find cg/robin5/4/4.png error
couldn't find cg/robin5/7/7.png error
Red hat on jinx doesn't properly fit.
In robin outfit, why is MC's upper part red and not black?
Why is there a bell sound for choices if that can stop you from being able to have the harem path? The bell sound makes it seem that is the "correct" choice, unless you are going to give a specific sound for the harem choice then it should be removed.
Was wondering why all the interesting choices would be incorrect, and then I read on the forum oh you are supposed to have low hearts and be "incorrect".
Too much just black screen with text.
It is weird to have the friend event where she tells you of an item that gives fertility to her people, but also doesn't know what sex is in harem event.
migration 10 pushes 1 off screen.
starfire yoga pose is a grey image.
love jinx first sex scene has a disembodied partial hand on MC's neck.
End of jinx sex from showing boobs, cum vanishes.
So much barely used mechanics, like the ansr that was a one off, 3 clickable vehicles which you don't click them to use them outside of the ansr. The cafe location being a 1 time actual visit and the rest are story.
Game needs a big clean up and stream lining.
There is probably more issues.