VN Ren'Py Yesterday's Crossroads [Ch.3 v0.4.0a] [CHAQUINN0]

[Justaphase]

I understand the point of view. My main goal in making this AVN was to create a story-heavy game with adult elements (sex, violence, murder, heavy language, etc.).

My sex scenes are dog water but my 3D skills have been improving over time. I've received a lot of feedback since I started, and now I am reworking everything, including every sex scene, even that Keyla quick solo action in the bathroom. They will have better dialogue, much better animations, and they won't just be a set of choices with no depth. Now, each scene has a beginning, middle, and end. The menus will still pop up so you can reprise the action you'd prefer though.

So yeah, I am currently working on the reworks and fixing all this stuff.

Personally I don't have a problem with the lewd scenes as they are currently. But then that is not my reason for playing AVN's, my main reason is the relationship building between the characters. I enjoy a nice romantic story with a love interest that I like and this game has great LI's in abundance. I see a lewd scene as an added extra, not as my sole purpose for playing.
While I think that it's great that you are listening to feedback and making changes that you feel will improve the game overall, please try to not get too bogged down in reworking the game to try and please everyone because it's an impossible task.
Keep up the good work and I look foward to buying and playing the next update.

 

[Dessolos]

Personally I don't have a problem with the lewd scenes as they are currently. But then that is not my reason for playing AVN's, my main reason is the relationship building between the characters. I enjoy a nice romantic story with a love interest that I like and this game has great LI's in abundance. I see a lewd scene as an added extra, not as my sole purpose for playing.
While I think that it's great that you are listening to feedback and making changes that you feel will improve the game overall, please try to not get too bogged down in reworking the game to try and please everyone because it's an impossible task.
Keep up the good work and I look foward to buying and playing the next update.

i'm in the middle on this. I mostly agree with you however I do feel reworking the dialogue during the lewd scene is something I do want. While yeah sometimes dialogue during lewds are meh it also can be pretty intimate and just for a better experience when it comes to the character. As I did find it lacked an intimate feel at least the first time I played. I don't care about the animations tho.

 

[WolverineCTX]

Hey CHAQUINN0 - Your Sex Scenes suck!
And by the way, your AVN is a "Porn" Game you sick bastard! What did you think by making such a Game and publish it?!
I'll never ever ever play this Game again, not before the next Patch will be released - just wanted to let you know

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

i'm in the middle on this. I mostly agree with you however I do feel reworking the dialogue during the lewd scene is something I do want. While yeah sometimes dialogue during lewds are meh it also can be pretty intimate and just for a better experience when it comes to the character. As I did find it lacked an intimate feel at least the first time I played. I don't care about the animations tho.

I think that this game is already a masterpiece but once the rework comes out

with the much more emotional and romantic dialogue and sex scenes

with much more emotion and feeling

this game in my opinion will be the living embodiment of perfection

 

[CHAQUINN0]

Yeah, when I play other games like BaDIK, City of Broken Dreamers, AOA Academy, and a few others with much more polished content, and then I look at mine, I'm not happy with what I've made. So I took some time to improve it and address this, along with many other aspects of the game.

I want to eventually put this game on Steam, but in its current state, I wouldn't even consider it. I need to improve it substantially before I do.

Improving the overall content will be a win on all fronts, not only for myself, but for the player too.

 

[Maviarab]

Yeah, when I play other games like BaDIK, City of Broken Dreamers, AOA Academy, and a few others with much more polished content, and then I look at mine, I'm not happy with what I've made. So I took some time to improve it and address this, along with many other aspects of the game.

I want to eventually put this game on Steam, but in its current state, I wouldn't even consider it. I need to improve it substantially before I do.

Improving the overall content will be a win on all fronts, not only for myself, but for the player too.

I wouldn't worry Chaq...this is right up there with all those. One of the best VN's around for me.

 

[Dessolos]

I think that this game is already a masterpiece but once the rework comes out

with the much more emotional and romantic dialogue and sex scenes

with much more emotion and feeling

this game in my opinion will be the living embodiment of perfection

yeah for sure this game is my 2nd favorite AVN already. The only AVN I have ranked higher has the same feel to it tho that one has alot more drama and 12 chapters / updates

 

[Dessolos]

Yeah, when I play other games like BaDIK, City of Broken Dreamers, AOA Academy, and a few others with much more polished content, and then I look at mine, I'm not happy with what I've made. So I took some time to improve it and address this, along with many other aspects of the game.

I want to eventually put this game on Steam, but in its current state, I wouldn't even consider it. I need to improve it substantially before I do.

Improving the overall content will be a win on all fronts, not only for myself, but for the player too.

Just remember to keep giving us lots of Michelle and Julia I guess also Kimberly for the ones the prefer her and we can overlook any imperfections

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

i'm in the middle on this. I mostly agree with you however I do feel reworking the dialogue during the lewd scene is something I do want. While yeah sometimes dialogue during lewds are meh it also can be pretty intimate and just for a better experience when it comes to the character. As I did find it lacked an intimate feel at least the first time I played. I don't care about the animations tho.

I love romantic and emotional dialogue during sex scenes it makes it a hundred times

better and it feels less robotic and it feels like it's a part of the world and story

without it it feels like we interrupt the story to bring you a sex scene

and with the dialogue it makes the sex scene feel unique to that relationship

 

[Elduriel]

Yeah, when I play other games like BaDIK, City of Broken Dreamers, AOA Academy, and a few others with much more polished content, and then I look at mine, I'm not happy with what I've made. So I took some time to improve it and address this, along with many other aspects of the game.

I want to eventually put this game on Steam, but in its current state, I wouldn't even consider it. I need to improve it substantially before I do.

Improving the overall content will be a win on all fronts, not only for myself, but for the player too.

fuck no man, sorry to be blunt about it, but the game is definitely good enough for steam as it is. Lesser titles did that

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

yeah for sure this game is my 2nd favorite AVN already. The only AVN I have ranked higher has the same feel to it tho that one has alot more drama and 12 chapters / updates

exactly brother and I already said that I have a list of visual novels I want to be buried with

it's a small list but this is one of them

 

[CHAQUINN0]

fuck no man, sorry to be blunt about it, but the game is definitely good enough for steam as it is. Lesser titles did that

That's my biggest issue, I already feel bad asking for people to pay for a game still in development, a half-baked game still in development would be even worse

 

[Dessolos]

I love romantic and emotional dialogue during sex scenes it makes it a hundred times

better and it feels less robotic and it feels like it's a part of the world and story

without it it feels like we interrupt the story to bring you a sex scene

and with the dialogue it makes the sex scene feel unique to that relationship

100% it's the main reason I even bother to read dialogue during sex scenes if it was all moans and grunts no point. Honestly some of my favorite dialogue and moments can be found during sex or right after in some of these games. It really enhances the experience when done right. Especially when it's a LI where there is some feeling and connection from both MC and LI.

One of my favorite characters there is a lewd scene in another game no penetration yet but if you pick the bad option which feels more romantic to me. The MC gets too excited and doesn't listen to her until she pushes him to the ground but then you can feel how bad the MC feels for what he almost did and the connection and love they have for each other and understanding and care. The dialogue is what really makes that "bad option" superior and more romantic in my opinion.

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

fuck no man, sorry to be blunt about it, but the game is definitely good enough for steam as it is. Lesser titles did that

exactly bro you tell him this visual novel I consider it to be one of the greatest

in fact in my opinion I consider this visual novel to be better than some of the best visual novel out there

 

[Dessolos]

That's my biggest issue, I already feel bad asking for people to pay for a game still in development, a half-baked game still in development would be even worse

honestly I would happily buy this day 1 if it came to steam. Tho no need to rush do it when you feel it's right and you want to do it of course. But I have bought some games on steam and very few of them can hold a candle to this game already and they have more chapters / updates under their belt. Some are just a waste of money and bought them cause I feel bad about downloading games off this site but I cant afford to sub to every game I like which why I do prefer to use steam as my method to support a dev.

 

[Elduriel]

That's my biggest issue, I already feel bad asking for people to pay for a game still in development, a half-baked game still in development would be even worse

well, again to be blunt, but most of them are doing it so it's not out of the norm. You can give your supporters free keys. A good steam release can be real beneficial when your game is fire

 

[CHAQUINN0]

Yeah, as soon as I'm done with these reworks, I'll start looking into it. It should be good by then.

 

[motseer]

Yeah, when I play other games like BaDIK, City of Broken Dreamers, AOA Academy, and a few others with much more polished content, and then I look at mine, I'm not happy with what I've made. So I took some time to improve it and address this, along with many other aspects of the game.

I want to eventually put this game on Steam, but in its current state, I wouldn't even consider it. I need to improve it substantially before I do.

Improving the overall content will be a win on all fronts, not only for myself, but for the player too.

Well... No. For those who like to actually read a good story. Those particular titles are not in the same league with you. The closest is City of Broken Dreamers but, that one leans a bit too much toward exposition for my taste. You have a talent for dialogue and letting the characters tell the story. Your artwork is pretty much on par with them give or take. Your animation skill is going up the ladder quickly. If I were giving an overall ranking of those titles and this one...

1. City of Broken Dreamers
2. Yesterday's Crossroads
3. BaDIK
4. AOA

JMHO

 

[BTWZ1]

I know some devs who spent too much time on polishing. and they released very polished and short update. I mean that you shouldn't spend too much time just on polishing. But it's just my opinion. Feel free to ignore it.

 

[xCalon]

Yeah, as soon as I'm done with these reworks, I'll start looking into it. It should be good by then.

When the day comes, and Yesterday's Crossroads will available on Steam, or GOG or whatever, that will be day one buy for me.