VN Ren'Py Abandoned Yharnam's Throne [v0.1] [Patches the Hyena]

[Power Broker]

The game is quite short even for a 0.1; you only have two choices and both of them are boring porn logic choices (show tits yes / no and masturbate yes / no).
No build up, no getting to know the heroine first, your first scene already has the creepy hobo who- of course- wants to see her tits. I hope the game will improve in terms of story telling and character development, as of now it just looks like your run of the mill porn game with all the nonsense that plagues these games.

That said, the heroine looks good with the exception of the nipples and the bush. Female protagonists are always welcome and appreciated. There's not much to say about it as of now, but I'll keep an eye on it.

 

[myuhinny]

TrustyOldPatches

When you see a updated file being posted or need something added to a OP just click report on the persons post and click what the report pertains to like for a update you would click update and state new update that needs to be added to the OP. You can also report the first post if you see things that are not right like incorrect tags at the top.

I reported your post selected update and I also stated to not replace the OP files with this new one as others might want to play the original instead and to state that the file has the girl with smaller areolas.

Thanks she looks great now I can spend my time looking at her face or boobs I'll avoid looking lower as I'm afraid somethings going to jump out of there.

 

[antoniosiilv]

Android??

 

[TrustyOldPatches]

Android??

Tomorrow.

 

[HypnoLucy]

Too short, but good, so the goblin will mind control the mc to marry him in the future? that will be a good alt route (at least for me)

 

[larry69]

You planning to add any Great ones?

 

[TrustyOldPatches]

Finally finished one of the characters that i'll introduce in the next version. Her name is Morgana and she is a mage working as part of your uncle organization.
I want her to have an air of nobility. Not sure if a succeded. What do you guys think?.

 

[C17H19NO3]

That doll

You spelled Lady Maria wrong.

 

[PinkGoddess]

TrustyOldPatches if u can give some renders and Ill make some fan sigs, I love dark souls universe and bloodborne my fav by far so I will so gladly to make something

 

[PinkGoddess]

https://attachments.f95zone.to/2020/09/843517_Yharnamfan.png
https://attachments.f95zone.to/2020/09/843518_Yharnams2.png

 

[James009]

Good choice, whoever added a normal aerolas version.
Oh, And nice game btw good luck

 

[thevampirate]

Finally finished one of the characters that i'll introduce in the next version. Her name is Morgana...

I really like Morgana Redhead, freckles and green eyes are really nice. Her clothes have a bit of a regal flair. anything from that time period with embellishments is going to help the regal feel. more plain the outfit more common it becomes. I might add a necklace to further push the idea of rich noble while maintaining the functional hunter look she has but i don't know about modeling and if that's easy or not. With that in mind I might change the boots to something more like lady Maria's from bloodborne or something.

 

[TrustyOldPatches]

I really like Morgana Redhead, freckles and green eyes are really nice. Her clothes have a bit of a regal flair. anything from that time period with embellishments is going to help the regal feel. more plain the outfit more common it becomes. I might add a necklace to further push the idea of rich noble while maintaining the functional hunter look she has but i don't know about modeling and if that's easy or not. With that in mind I might change the boots to something more like lady Maria's from bloodborne or something.

Isn't difficult. I'll check how a necklace goes with her as i'm retouching the other character anyway. But not sure if i'll add it because i like her a lot already.

Thanks for the feedback!.

 

[Thegoblinlayer]

So from the sounds of it the monster tag hasn’t come into play yet. Will it happen next update?

 

[TrustyOldPatches]

So from the sounds of it the monster tag hasn’t come into play yet. Will it happen next update?

Possibly in 0.3, 0.2 will be centered around meeting the main characters and the base of the story.

 

[TrustyOldPatches]

Another one of the characters that i'll introduce in the next version. His name is Diego, he is an ex-soldier from the neigborn country that now works for your uncle. This one is the good guy of the group. The story will have some major assholes on it and i wanted at least a good male character. He is inspired somewhat on Allistair from Dragon Age Origin. I would appreciate some feedback on his design too. Thanks!.

 

[Power Broker]

Morgana[...] air of nobility

She looks more like a cheeky, redhaired rogue than a noble. For an air of nobility her skin should be smoother (no freckles) and she should wear some "nobler" dress.

Diego [...] good guy [...]

Yeah, he looks like the good guy, well done. The only problem I see is his haircut, it's modern military style (machine cut), I don't think they had hair cutting machines back in the days of swords and shields.

 

[Penda Offa]

Another one of the characters that i'll introduce in the next version. His name is Diego, he is an ex-soldier from the neigborn country that now works for your uncle. This one is the good guy of the group. The story will have some major assholes on it and i wanted at least a good male character. He is inspired somewhat on Allistair from Dragon Age Origin. I would appreciate some feedback on his design too. Thanks!.

Never been a fan of the swords strapped to the back but I think that comes with the top? I agree with Power broker about the hair too

 

[TrustyOldPatches]

She looks more like a cheeky, redhaired rogue than a noble. For an air of nobility her skin should be smoother (no freckles) and she should wear some "nobler" dress.



Yeah, he looks like the good guy, well done. The only problem I see is his haircut, it's modern military style (machine cut), I don't think they had hair cutting machines back in the days of swords and shields.

Hi. Thanks for the feedback!

I want her to have and air of nobility, not to look exactly like a noble. A dress is not practical for the job she do.

About the haircut i'll check if there is one i like better. But event Geralt have one similar to that one:

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it's a magical world, it's pretty easy to justify it.

 

[swbfvd]

Really excited for this game!