Raboobie

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It's quite the opposite actually.

I like this game because it actually has a good and refreshing story.

That particular scene, I don't really care that much either way. In my "canon" playthrough the MC doesn't get involved with the bimbo because he doesn't want to cheat on Emma and Ruby.
I think you missed my point. Suggesting he add scenes between the brother and sister, neither being the MC, is why I suggested you hit pornhub if you're just looking for unlikely pairings. No reason to add that stuff here, no reason to waste time and effort on rendering stuff that is not important to the story.
 
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Yngling

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I think you missed my point. Suggesting he add scenes between the brother and sister, neither being the MC, is why I suggested you hit pornhub if you're just looking for unlikely pairings. No reason to add that stuff here, no reason to waste time and effort on rendering stuff that is not important to the story.
Meh, now he "wasted" time and effort on a scene with the MC and some random girl.
Anyway. It's not important.
It's the dev's story.

Why did I think this was a harem vn? Every choice now seems to alienate one of the lis or another...
It *is* a harem, which consists of Ruby, Emma and Anna.

There are also several girls on the side, some of whom might fit in the harem, and some of whom might not fit.

We will see how it goes.

In my opinion, it is a harem game, but it's not a gotta-catch-them-all-game, although at this point I think it's still possible to catch at least most of them in one playthrough.
 

mrrxy

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Unfortunately there seems to be something wrong then.
I made a small patch so you can at least skip the mini-game and continue playing.
(replace the file "chapter201.rpy" in your .../game/ folder
Thanks a lot, i can continue now
 
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hey to update the game would i just need to download the new one since it has that ren'py also is the incest patch already in the game folder already or do i still need to put it in i forget if i have already asked this ?
 

sirpedro7

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I liked the last update, I think it was a good idea to make us use the potion, but I suggest you to formalize the Harem way in the categories and when you make an anal scene (the more the better in my opinion xD) put at least one animation where you can see the penetration, if not you lose a lot of the scene, it's like making a scene of creampie and you don't see that you end up inside and then the semen.
 

ramvivat

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At first, I thought the idea of this VN was similar to VN "my best deal"
downloaded.
installed.
launched.
started reading.
and "then - similar, but not similar!". in MBD you don't have to fix the problems of a "buried alive" wife. Compared to YA, MBD is an easy Sunday walk, where you are given powers with which you can influence people.
in YA - you "play hardcore" without prompting from a lovely goddess in a niggle. and you cannot dominate anyone by the power of thought.
and time for everything about everything - just one year, how you want and deal with the situation.
I start trying to predict in advance what hordes of cockroaches in Natalya's head I will have to deal with.
 
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ramvivat

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interesting...
very interesting...
books with Russian inscriptions and... in the list of localizations of this VN - Spanish and English and (!!!) no Russian???
oh come on... where's goddamt russian localisation? =)

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Spfjolietjake

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Meh, now he "wasted" time and effort on a scene with the MC and some random girl.
Anyway. It's not important.
It's the dev's story.


It *is* a harem, which consists of Ruby, Emma and Anna.

There are also several girls on the side, some of whom might fit in the harem, and some of whom might not fit.

We will see how it goes.

In my opinion, it is a harem game, but it's not a gotta-catch-them-all-game, although at this point I think it's still possible to catch at least most of them in one playthrough.
So can the ladies get hurt or pissed over choices?
 

Raziel_8

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So can the ladies get hurt or pissed over choices?
Hm, the only 'Lady' which got pissed was Zoey's sister Veronica iirc...she said 'pull out i'm not on birthcontrol' so obviously my MC made sure to give her a nice creampy, she didn't like that at all :whistle:
But 'harem' wise the ladys are so far more or less fine with each other, the main ones at least.

Beside that, i really hope for more content with Grace.
 

Yngling

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So can the ladies get hurt or pissed over choices?
Hm, the only 'Lady' which got pissed was Zoey's sister Veronica iirc...she said 'pull out i'm not on birthcontrol' so obviously my MC made sure to give her a nice creampy, she didn't like that at all :whistle:
But 'harem' wise the ladys are so far more or less fine with each other, the main ones at least.

Beside that, i really hope for more content with Grace.
Ruby also seems like the jealous type. She doesn't really like it if you favour Emma in public over her, despite the fact that she's your sister and you can't really be too affectionate in public for obvious reasons.

But so far that barely seems like flavour dialogue to me, nothing bad actually happens. So far at least. We will see how it progresses but given the style of the game I doubt that suddenly you get blindsided and Ruby leaves you or whatever.

I'm not sure what happens with Veronica after chosing to creampie her. I didn't try that route.
 
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ramvivat

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I know that nothing just happens.
the gun hanging on the carpet in the first act must fire in the last act of the play - such is the law of the genre. but apparently there are exceptions.
Emma's bed is nonsense. this bed is reminiscent of BDSM. even with chains. BDSM is missing from the list of tags, as well as the fact that Emma is too "vanilla" for BDSM.
or am I mistaken and the word "BDSM" is just not in the list of tags yet (that is, it may appear later)?
otherwise, why put such a bed in the frame? I'm sure there are many more other, less kinky beds in the assets set.
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the gun hanging on the carpet in the first act must fire in the last act of the play - such is the law of the genre.
You're speaking of Chekov's gun. It's advice in writing, not a law. Also, one could argue that Chekov's gun is countered by a red herring.
Emma's bed is nonsense. this bed is reminiscent of BDSM. even with chains. BDSM is missing from the list of tags, as well as the fact that Emma is too "vanilla" for BDSM.
Chains aren't used in BDSM. They may be used in bad interpretations of BDSM, but not in actual BDSM. I'd say you're stretching.
who is girl №5? Roxy?
She's the principal of the school.
 
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ramvivat

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You're speaking of Chekov's gun. It's advice in writing, not a law. Also, one could argue that Chekov's gun is countered by a red herring.

Chains aren't used in BDSM. They may be used in bad interpretations of BDSM, but not in actual BDSM. I'd say you're stretching.

She's the principal of the school.
Well, since I myself am Russian and was brought up on Chekhov's plays, then since I did not know other plays, then "Chekhov's gun" for me is synonymous with "the law of the genre." - I didn't cheat one iota. besides, since the developer of this VN is most likely Russian himself, one can mean by this that in his doctrine of the world "Chekhov's gun" is also the same synonym for "the law of the genre." why do I say so? Well, a few posts above, I posted a post with a picture in which I saw a sea of books with titles in Russian - is this not proof?
would it occur to an English-speaking author to insert books with Russian names into the picture?
 

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I can assure you that Zargon isn't Russian. Items in these games are from asset libraries and if the creator of the book/shelf asset happened to be Russian, there would be Russian books there.
 
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SuddenReal

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Well, a few posts above, I posted a post with a picture in which I saw a sea of books with titles in Russian - is this not proof?
would it occur to an English-speaking author to insert books with Russian names into the picture?
No, it's not really proof. As you said, there's no Russian localization. Why would a Russian make a game in English and Spanish, but not Russian? There's a whole continent between the two. There are books with Latin in the assets library, but that doesn't make the person using them an ancient Roman.

Also, I didn't say you cheated. I just said you made a stretch by linking chains in a bedframe to BDSM (no pun intended). It's a bigger stretch than saying "oh, they're driving a car, so they'll have sex in the car".
 
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ramvivat

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I can assure you that Zargon isn't Russian. Items in these games are from asset libraries and if the creator of the book/shelf asset happened to be Russian, there would be Russian books there.
outsourcing - yes, understand.
 
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