First of all, it's a porn game and at least it's more innovative than most stories.
Secondly, the old MC buried himself so much in work that he had no idea what was going on in his family anymore. It requires some suspension of disbelief but it does happen.
That's the only part you picked up on huh, the ONLY part that is excusable OR plausible.
We see that from the first frame, Paul didn't want to have anything to do with his life at all and distanced himself from it.
We get that in the first scene, everything following is incredulous at best.
The MAIN point I had was BOTH families are so very interconnected within the narrative, BUT they have ZERO clue who the other set is, being in a relationship for several years with a girl who lived through that firsthand, it's not only improbable but IMPOSSIBLE that this could even be fictionalized, even basing the fcking blame on it being a porn game.
Life can be altered, fictionalized, warped, and changed to be a shadow of its former self, but the main premise behind them NOT knowing a damn thing about one another, especially Pauls's wife ASKING who the fck HE was...the boy her husband gave his LIFE for, the one that would have easily been the center of EVERY story involving the tragedy is just ludicrous, with ZERO excuses for creating a "story" like this at all!
Lastly do not even THINK about replying with a short answer that I can forsee you are most likely mulling over in your head, even before you sent that reply, that "If I don't like it, move ON to something else" since THAT stupid form of thinking doesn't GET the developer to improve, alter or advance THEIR way of thinking.
Apathy is FAR more destructive than constructive criticism!~
