I'm glad you're liking the story so far. I can only tell you that if you liked the first chapters, you will surely like the following ones, since at the beginning I didn't have much idea of what I was doing and I learned by doing, hahaha.Hi,
I like the story and how it is progressing. I am just at chapter 3 or 4 now, but saw discussions about the weight, I hope she really loses weight. As I like pretty girls, not like a stick, a little bit is ok, but in Emma's case it is just as much to make it unattractive for me.
Overall I dislike the look of the mothers and how the MC describes them as hot etc., I don't feel it. But I guess it is a matter of taste and I don't prefer MILF's anyway.
Fav at the moment is Zoe... I like her look.
Keep up the nice story and work, I even haven't seen any typos yet which I remember.
Regards
As for Emma, as the chapters go by she loses some weight, but I'll tell you that she doesn't become super slim, she's becoming less plump, with a healthier body.