- Thread starter randiel
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That's what I was thinking too, it was very tame for me. Now, don't get me wrong, I get how it can be triggering to some people and I in no way want to downplay how people react to it or what other people have experienced. However, I feel like there are much rougher scenes already in the game (the burglar, getting raped at night, etc.)Is that what you call rape?
I didn't even notice the crocodile tears.
My main problem with it was that, like McEvoy it’s not really my kink, (daddy type stuff) but the game kind of forces an encounter with no input from the player. At least with the burglar and night scene the game warns you not to go out at night etc and you can avoid those scenes if you are careful. Uncle and McEvoy are necessary and can’t be sidestepped if that makes sense.
Minor gripe but just clarifying my stance.
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Thought of some suggestions while playing, figured I should pop them on here.
1. Would love to see some content with gramps, maybe the ability to corrupt him like the rest of the family?
2. During the weekend you father goes to the bar, would be cool of we could meet him there, maybe give him a bj at the gloryhole?
3.Would love to see snooping scenes, like looking for their porn staches,stealing/cumming in used underwear that kind of stuff.
4. A gift system, the player can buy gifts and give them to people to raise their relationship, you could also have special scenes with the more naughty gifts.
5. The ability to text and send pictures to characters, depending on the corruption level of whoever you are texting you could recieve nudes or dick pics from them?
6. The pictures in the game are great, but would love to see more writing in general, some scenes feel like they rely too much on the images to tell whats going on, more descriptive text would be really hot!
Loving this game btw, cant wait to see where else you go with it!
1. Would love to see some content with gramps, maybe the ability to corrupt him like the rest of the family?
2. During the weekend you father goes to the bar, would be cool of we could meet him there, maybe give him a bj at the gloryhole?
3.Would love to see snooping scenes, like looking for their porn staches,stealing/cumming in used underwear that kind of stuff.
4. A gift system, the player can buy gifts and give them to people to raise their relationship, you could also have special scenes with the more naughty gifts.
5. The ability to text and send pictures to characters, depending on the corruption level of whoever you are texting you could recieve nudes or dick pics from them?
6. The pictures in the game are great, but would love to see more writing in general, some scenes feel like they rely too much on the images to tell whats going on, more descriptive text would be really hot!
Loving this game btw, cant wait to see where else you go with it!
- Mar 21, 2021
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I really like the game and I appreciate all the hard work that has gone into it. Marcus is apparently very drunk in that scene, so he cannot actually give consent or be willing. It's an acquaintance rape. My point was more about it being unavoidable and it being so creepy for an uncle to intentionally take advantage of a drunk nephew he's apparently perved on for years and he didn't even care about about hurting him. It was a little too close to reality for me, but as I said, I have my own experiences that make a scene like that triggering. The burglary, the rape at night, and the police/jail assaults are all easily avoidable if a player pays attention. I really don't want to focus on this because the game is great. I also really like UnrulyDogBoy's suggestion if the MC has a way to become a badass on his own and punish his abusers with the help of his brother, dad, Damien, Jeff, or Adam.
- Jun 22, 2020
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Yup I really like this idea to punish Uncle, maybe when you have a 60+ relationship with Dad and Brother you can invite Uncle to go fishing...once you get there they would take turns fucking Uncle all day and at night tie him up and whore him out on the woods.
And if that's to harsh make a 2 day trip sat/sunday first day they fuck, second day whore time in the woods...
It would probably be a nightmare to find images for this tho.
And if that's to harsh make a 2 day trip sat/sunday first day they fuck, second day whore time in the woods...
It would probably be a nightmare to find images for this tho.
It would be a nightmare to implement it first
I want to slowly start closing this game so I'll be more strict with adding new content.1. Grampa will have his small plot in future updates1. Would love to see some content with gramps, maybe the ability to corrupt him like the rest of the family?
2. During the weekend your father goes to the bar, would be cool if we could meet him there, maybe give him a bj at the gloryhole?
3.Would love to see snooping scenes, like looking for their porn staches, stealing/cumming in used underwear that kind of stuff.
4. A gift system, the player can buy gifts and give them to people to raise their relationship, you could also have special scenes with the more naughty gifts.
5. The ability to text and send pictures to characters, depending on the corruption level of whoever you are texting you could receive nudes or dick pics from them?
6. The pictures in the game are great but would love to see more writing in general, some scenes feel like they rely too much on the images to tell what's going on, more descriptive text would be really hot!
2. Finding dad in random places will be added (or maybe put under phone, I'm not sure yet)
3. Underwear - maybe
4. Gift system would be a good non-cheating substitute to raise relation/corruption. Will add something like that.
5. I tried that with bro already but overall texting turned out a bit more complicated compared to what it could give in return. There will be something like sending a nude selfie or receive a dick pick but that's it.
6. Please check Demitransference then
I'm not that good with long descriptions or dialogs, I'm slowly getting better at it but I prefer to have this game "image-driven".As said, I'll be adding the option to avoid all (or most at least) rape sex with the next release. Or possibly with the hotfix (I didn't have time to work on it last week
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- Jul 30, 2020
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Sorry Randiel, I was just speculating about a “revenge theme” against uncle.It would be a nightmare to implement it first
1. Grampa will have his small plot in future updates
2. Finding dad in random places will be added (or maybe put under phone, I'm not sure yet)
3. Underwear - maybe
4. Gift system would be a good non-cheating substitute to raise relation/corruption. Will add something like that.
5. I tried that with bro already but overall texting turned out a bit more complicated compared to what it could give in return. There will be something like sending a nude selfie or receive a dick pick but that's it.
6. Please check Demitransference then
As said, I'll be adding the option to avoid all (or most at least) rape sex with the next release. Or possibly with the hotfix (I didn't have time to work on it last week
HOWEVER I am not joking about a Young Marcus spinoff. Randiel has already implied that there are only a few more updates to YM and then he plans to close up shop. If you’d like to try your hand and game dev, why not consider a YM spin-off. Maybe isn’t a small game about the he soldiers at the base. Or about the castle. Or a hospital drama. YM has a lot of branches you could play off of.
Thought it might be fun for someone.
unruly
- Mar 21, 2021
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I think you sell yourself short. You're good with long descriptions and dialogs. At least, to me you are, though UnrulyDogBoy is great in Demitransference too! Please don't feel sad about not having time. We all have lives and the work you've done is already incredible. Thank you for doing it!6. Please check Demitransference then
As said, I'll be adding the option to avoid all (or most at least) rape sex with the next release. Or possibly with the hotfix (I didn't have time to work on it last week
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It's a little sad that you've already hit the end of the game since it's really good though, if you really take into account every suggestion, Young Marcus - Expanded is the type of game that would never end.It would be a nightmare to implement it first
Well, I'll be waiting for your next project. You're really good at it
Hot-fix for version 0.8:
Instruction:
Extract both HTML files and replace them in your game folder in which you have "Pics" folder. Choose the base game or "mobile" if you play on your phone.
Fixes:
- Jack's house throwing an error
- broken image when bro is humping the pillow
- missing image when meeting bro in the mall for a quicky
- Few buttons on the map not working properly
- Skipping jail when looking around and getting back
- missing "back" option after meditate
- asking bro to join between 20 and 23 present no scene
- Church missing in mobile version
Changes:
- New option for enabling/disabling rape content (at least some scenes): with the option disabled you will:
- Streaking counter increase when walking naked in the house, nude beach, park (nude jogging), and Point Erectus
Instruction:
Extract both HTML files and replace them in your game folder in which you have "Pics" folder. Choose the base game or "mobile" if you play on your phone.
Fixes:
- Jack's house throwing an error
- broken image when bro is humping the pillow
- missing image when meeting bro in the mall for a quicky
- Few buttons on the map not working properly
- Skipping jail when looking around and getting back
- missing "back" option after meditate
- asking bro to join between 20 and 23 present no scene
- Church missing in mobile version
Changes:
- New option for enabling/disabling rape content (at least some scenes): with the option disabled you will:
- no longer trigger an intro scene with uncle
- won't be raped when changing clothes at the beach
- will be able to serve your time in jail without any visits (Thomas will still fuck you as this is his way of saying "hello" and your punishment)
- Ability to set options right when the game starts- Streaking counter increase when walking naked in the house, nude beach, park (nude jogging), and Point Erectus
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Hey guys, I did a grammar review of the game and tried my best to fix most of the grammar issues. I hope this increases the quality of this great game.
Here is the html file with all the changes using the brand new hotfix as the base, simply extract it and put it in the game folder where you have the "Pics" folder to be able to play it. Note this is the base version, not the mobile version.
View attachment Young Marcus - expanded hotfix GR.zip
As I am not a professional editor, I made sure to only focus on small things like typos, word choice, word flow, etc. I avoided changing the meaning of any sentences wherever I could although some sentences had to be reworked.
I am sure I fixed most if not all of the typos. However since this is no longer a small game, I definitely missed a few here and there so don't expect it to be perfect! It should be easier to read than the original though, as this version includes over 1000 changes to the text.
If you want to see what and where I made changes, you can take a look at this spreadsheet:
View attachment Young Marcus Grammar Review Checklist.zip
(ps. don't have excel? just import it to google sheets!)
Randiel, if you find this grammar review good enough to use, feel free to use the html file; otherwise you can review all the changes I made using the spreadsheet and apply whatever fixes you like to the official version.
Btw, great work on this update Randiel!
Here is the html file with all the changes using the brand new hotfix as the base, simply extract it and put it in the game folder where you have the "Pics" folder to be able to play it. Note this is the base version, not the mobile version.
View attachment Young Marcus - expanded hotfix GR.zip
As I am not a professional editor, I made sure to only focus on small things like typos, word choice, word flow, etc. I avoided changing the meaning of any sentences wherever I could although some sentences had to be reworked.
I am sure I fixed most if not all of the typos. However since this is no longer a small game, I definitely missed a few here and there so don't expect it to be perfect! It should be easier to read than the original though, as this version includes over 1000 changes to the text.
If you want to see what and where I made changes, you can take a look at this spreadsheet:
View attachment Young Marcus Grammar Review Checklist.zip
(ps. don't have excel? just import it to google sheets!)
Randiel, if you find this grammar review good enough to use, feel free to use the html file; otherwise you can review all the changes I made using the spreadsheet and apply whatever fixes you like to the official version.
Btw, great work on this update Randiel!
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Finally had some time to take a look. Well, Tobbi29 I'm simply lacking words to describe it, you sir are a treasure here. The amount of work you must have put into this is astounding.
I will of course us this as a base for the next update.
I will of course us this as a base for the next update.
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Took me a while to figure out how to do it as well. If you want to rate a game you need to click on the stars at the top right corner of the screen (not in the Reviews screen) where you have all the tags, which will open a new window for your review. I know, it is not super intuitive.