I-Love-Adventure
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Ok, well, first things first, it's a bit too short to say how the story feels or where it's heading.
Next point, you say this is your first game, well, it's nothing new, just another blackmail/corruption novel, ugly old dude corrupts/blackmails hot young wife, these kinds of novels are everywhere, and they are all the same.
Why could you not have thought of something different?? Do something no one else has done. You could have made the Husband's boss a female, and maybe not so old.
You'd be surprised how many people on here are actually into Lesbian AVN's, they may be less vocal than those perverts who like to jerk off to Blackmail/corruption slut making novels, but they're big on supporting good stories.
How will this novel continue?? Are you going to move to a more linear novel, or will you have lots of choices to make throughout the whole novel?? Will you force the main FMC into sexual activities??
Unfortunately, these female slut creating novels are not my cup of tea, especially when it's males doing the corrupting/Blackmailing and stealing a wife, but i wish you luck on your endeavor.
Next point, you say this is your first game, well, it's nothing new, just another blackmail/corruption novel, ugly old dude corrupts/blackmails hot young wife, these kinds of novels are everywhere, and they are all the same.
Why could you not have thought of something different?? Do something no one else has done. You could have made the Husband's boss a female, and maybe not so old.
You'd be surprised how many people on here are actually into Lesbian AVN's, they may be less vocal than those perverts who like to jerk off to Blackmail/corruption slut making novels, but they're big on supporting good stories.
How will this novel continue?? Are you going to move to a more linear novel, or will you have lots of choices to make throughout the whole novel?? Will you force the main FMC into sexual activities??
Unfortunately, these female slut creating novels are not my cup of tea, especially when it's males doing the corrupting/Blackmailing and stealing a wife, but i wish you luck on your endeavor.
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IHATESlowburnBluBallgames
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It looks good, nice renders, just when it’s getting good it ends. Hope the young photographer can corrupt her too and get some action with her. but what’s with the tiny white text, can’t you double the size and maybe pick a brighter color, also when yummi is showing her inner thoughts the words are almost faded and even harder to read.
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Gonzolino
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The tags say female and male protagonist, the dev's tags just female protag.
So, do you play just as Yumi or as her husband as well?
So, do you play just as Yumi or as her husband as well?
Vampire_Lord
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ok this game started out good. all the choices were yours to make. great art. decent story. but then the game just had to take control away from the player and end the chapter with a choice that we didnt even get a chance to make. so im guessing the rest of the game wont be in our control? she's gonna be a whore no matter what you do? i can already see it coming.
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Thanks for sharing your thoughts! I'm a very new developer, and your feedback really helps me improve.
I've already written a long script, so I can't change characters now, but please wait for Version 1 to drop and check out how the story plays out!
Here's my response to your points:
Yes, there will be more characters going after Yumi, not just Mr. Thompson.
I get that you'd prefer a hot boss over Mr. Thompson. The script is locked, so he's staying, but he won't win Yumi easily. Atleast it's not gonna happen in Chapter 1 or 2, maybe in Future or maybe not.
Don't worry, this is a slow-build story. No quick hookups here. There's a chase and lots of plot before anything big happens.
I'm already working on adding sound.
And for Tags, Actually I've followed other games and believe I've chosen appropriate tags for now. If not I'll update the tags with Version 1 release. I plan to add more categories in the future.
Also Yes, there is lesbian and group sex planned, but it will be included in future updates or releases.
Currently there are no Animations, but in future I'll add.
One more thing, I don't have a Mac, and don't want to post without testing, which is why I haven't released a Mac version.
For now, I may or may not interact or reply with you all until I release Version 1. But Thanks again for your ideas! I'd love to hear your likes or dislikes. Please wait for 1st Release to see how it all comes together!
I've already written a long script, so I can't change characters now, but please wait for Version 1 to drop and check out how the story plays out!
Here's my response to your points:
Yes, there will be more characters going after Yumi, not just Mr. Thompson.
I get that you'd prefer a hot boss over Mr. Thompson. The script is locked, so he's staying, but he won't win Yumi easily. Atleast it's not gonna happen in Chapter 1 or 2, maybe in Future or maybe not.
Don't worry, this is a slow-build story. No quick hookups here. There's a chase and lots of plot before anything big happens.
I'm already working on adding sound.
And for Tags, Actually I've followed other games and believe I've chosen appropriate tags for now. If not I'll update the tags with Version 1 release. I plan to add more categories in the future.
Also Yes, there is lesbian and group sex planned, but it will be included in future updates or releases.
Currently there are no Animations, but in future I'll add.
One more thing, I don't have a Mac, and don't want to post without testing, which is why I haven't released a Mac version.
For now, I may or may not interact or reply with you all until I release Version 1. But Thanks again for your ideas! I'd love to hear your likes or dislikes. Please wait for 1st Release to see how it all comes together!
The Pitiful One
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There's already one game this reminds me of. I guess I'll be the first to ask. Any incest planned for the future? I'm guessing no if you're on Patreon only but figured it can't hurt to ask.
Jungles70
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Its was good until you get forced on that modell shit. You could say no but in the end you get forced onto it. I hope that changes otherwise its not for me. In the most female protag games u get forced on a modell pass its so annoying.