I've just finished the game (v0.2.4d) and wanna share some thoughts as usual.
Despite the game being so good on so many levels, I see you guys are having "fun" here with some drama, so I will try to keep it short. AWESOME game. I've played many AVNs in last few years and at this point I think I've checked all the best titles here - it's great to be surprised by discovering a new gem like this one here.
Very good writing, awesome pacing and storytelling, GREAT branching and character emotion work...
Actually, a couple more words about branching... I play all my games with URM just to see alternatives or code/stats "behind the scenes" and it was actually the first (or one of the very few) games I played without constantly checking it and trying to make "perfect" playthrough. Branching in this game? This is how it should look like in my opinion, little decissions affect storyline just a little but the further you go the more impact you see.
I knew leaving college was not "canon" but I still chose it on my first playthrough. I expected a few words from MC, 2 additional renders and that's it. Instead I was like... WOW. And it had another branch to just leave or call Chloe. I called Chloe and oh my god, ending was so good, didn't expect such developed alternate ending at all. The first thing I thought of was how
Rebirth ended when I played it some time ago, the contrast between Rebirth's main (and only) ending after 5 chapters and just an alternate ending here is enormous, sad even.
I've got only one objection although not sure it's a real objection after all, it's just against of what I'm used to in AVNs... It is the first AVN I deliberately avoided sex with girls. I've checked them all out of curiosity and they are quite ok (short but it's again story-wise justified) but not their quality is why I ommited them. I felt like showing emotions and pacing of the story was SO GOOD here that it felt natural and "canon" that MC would not like to have sex with any of them. Occasional blowjob is fine but sex... I didn't feel like MC should feel strong connection with any of main LIs so quickly (I didn't), especially with how they were behaving so Rayne and Keira were out of my radar stright away. Next, it hit me hard after sex with Odette, I felt used and MC was like "I kinda expected it to be more meaningful". Same thing with Swansong, it just didn't felt "right" to loose virginity like that while it was clearly somewhat important for him and dev perfectly described MC's doubts after both encounters.
I wish I was as good in writing as dev is, this review sounded better in my head and I wanted to say much much more but yeah, it's already quite long and chaotic.
Lastly, +1 for dev for naming Swansong Swansong. May sound like nothing but it's a "cherry on the pie" of dev's creativity and writing skill. Combining Jeanette Voerman from original VTM with the name of another VTM game is just nice easter egg which fitted perfectly.
TLDR: One of the best games here, easily somewhere in top 15 and I fully recommend it to anyone who likes a good story.
ps. also, hands down, the music in this game is top-notch — perfectly fitted, often so subtle you forget it's even there, yet it shapes the scene's mood, and that's exactly how a soundtrack should be like