VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [Dr PinkCake]

[felicemastronzo]

Think he had the story pretty much set from the beginning, there haven't been any real changes to allready released episodes... So any influences from players are more to be expected in the next appearing episode based on how the last was received..
If you gonna let the players influence your story when it's as complicated in storylines as BaDik youre never gonna finish...
Just see that influence as feedback for finetuning some little things, making some things more clear, other thing less clear...

on the story in general I agree, but it remains a vote of appreciation, a story that can last 16 or 20 chapters is not written in stone, it means that the margins to introduce or not certain characters or certain situations are there. without overturning the overall design

for example on Zoey there was a little retcon (on how long before they broke up), probably more related to legal issues than narrative anyway.

 

[AzulaTitsLover]

Jill-Bella threesome is the dream. wanna see their big asses as they make out

 

[mightybored]

Jill-Bella threesome is the dream. wanna see their big asses as they make out

No way, get Maya and Quinn for a good old-fashioned hatefuck threeway.

 

[vogelbeest]

for example on Zoey there was a little retcon (on how long before they broke up), probably more related to legal issues than narrative anyway.

Good example there, think Zoey got a pretty decent amount of screentime in the first episode, one could say it should have been enough to just describe that relation if you didn't plan on bringing her in the story at a later time... Same can be said for Vinny and maybe even Mona... Or that manbun guy at the prep party... (ah well, he could have been just a red herring too... without Sage adoption info at start ep 8 it would have never made sense she's a Burke lol)

 

[ChipLecsap]

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Previously, I give you a like, but please forgive me , but I have to take it back .
I have not read it before, the spoiler section. And now that I read it, I just can't give you a like for that . I mean it's Lisa and and Miss Skintight leather pants Jade

I respect your opinion, but I can't give a like for something like that, I hope you understand it, and we're cool.

 

[Kellermann]

Yeah, DPC isn't going to straight up admit that the players influence him, even if they do.

Let us hope they "influence" him to get rid of Madame so we no longer have 3 lewd scenes in one episode wasted on a barftastic, late-arriving side character. One of those lewd scenes could have been with our girl Brandi, a real Pink Rose lady.

And no house fire required! How might this happen? It's easy, just say that maybe one day on her smoke break a hungry Madame wanders away from the Pink Rose to root for food in the grass. She eventually finds herself in a nearby forest and is reunited with her birth family, a sounder of feral hogs. Although now an old sow, Madame is instantly recognised by her pungent stench. Tears flow as the once lost piglet, "Little Stinky" as she was called, has returned. A happy ending for all.

 

[felicemastronzo]

Let us hope they "influence" him to get rid of Madame so we no longer have 3 lewd scenes in one episode wasted on a barftastic, late-arriving side character. One of those lewd scenes could have been with our girl Brandi, a real Pink Rose lady.

And no house fire required! How might this happen? It's easy, just say that maybe one day on her smoke break a hungry Madame wanders away from the Pink Rose to root for food in the grass. She eventually finds herself in a nearby forest and is reunited with her birth family, a sounder of feral hogs. Although now an old sow, Madame is instantly recognised by her pungent stench. Tears flow as the once lost piglet, "Little Stinky" as she was called, has returned. A happy ending for all.

Do you trust those who chose to lick it?

i understand optimism....

 

[Kellermann]

Do you trust those who chose to lick it?

i understand optimism....

They can lick her in the wilderness in her natural environment with or without my trust. As long as I don't have to deal with it in the Pink rose, I'm happy.

 

[felicemastronzo]

Good example there, think Zoey got a pretty decent amount of screentime in the first episode, one could say it should have been enough to just describe that relation if you didn't plan on bringing her in the story at a later time... Same can be said for Vinny and maybe even Mona... Or that manbun guy at the prep party... (ah well, he could have been just a red herring too... without Sage adoption info at start ep 8 it would have never made sense she's a Burke lol)

For me, Cathe is the character with the most anomalous management.

she is quite central in the story at the beginning (as a teacher more than Jade), the real twist of Swyper, then in her moment of maximum importance, with the premise of an affair with MC, she literally disappears from the story

almost nothing in the sixth chapter, a couple of short scenes in the seventh, and in the eighth we saw her again only at the end credits

They can lick her in the wilderness in her natural environment with or without my trust. As long as I don't have to deal with it in the Pink rose, I'm happy.

is it Pink Rose her habitat?

unlucky...

 

[DavDR]

They can lick her in the wilderness in her natural environment with or without my trust. As long as I don't have to deal with it in the Pink rose, I'm happy.

OK I hope you realize what you've done. Now we're going to get Madame sex scene's with the wild pigs.

WARNING If you theorize it, it will happen!!! WARNING

 

[Kellermann]

is it Pink Rose her habitat?

unlucky...

No way. Her habitat is behind bars, and not a dancing cage, but a zoo...with the other monkeys that fling jizz and poo at passersby who don't feed them fast enough.

OK I hope you realize what you've done. Now we're going to get Madame sex scene's with the wild pigs.

WARNING If you theorize it, it will happen!!! WARNING

I'd take a wild pig over Madame. Just being honest. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

 

[hakuna-matata]

YO Tytbalt

 

[Kellermann]

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YO Tytbalt

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A difficult situation when the balls swing lower than the dick.

For me, Cathe is the character with the most anomalous management.

she is quite central in the story at the beginning (as a teacher more than Jade), the real twist of Swyper, then in her moment of maximum importance, with the premise of an affair with MC, she literally disappears from the story

almost nothing in the sixth chapter, a couple of short scenes in the seventh, and in the eighth we saw her again only at the end credits

Yes, I never understood this. Cathy should have been right up there with Jade, but she drops off of a cliff. A designated side girl from episode 1 with barely any content. It's going to be difficult to write her back into story (so that she has regular interactions with MC). Is she really going to be another Mona?

 

[SamualHand]

A difficult situation when the balls swing lower than the dick.

Can you share some details with us?

 

[Kellermann]

Can you share some details with us?

Well I guess I could try to snap a shot of your junk and share it if possible.

 

[OFT]

I've mentioned before about how I love the animation of Zoey's face at the end of Episode 8. Here's one where I bumped up the gamma so it's not as dark:

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But I must say, the work DPC did on Sage during her first lewd scene in the same episode was mesmerizing as well:




It would have been nice if I could have captured it without her hand movements, but at least you don't have the MC's member spoiling the view.

I'd take a wild pig over Madame. Just being honest. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

And just so you don't feel left out, Kellermann:

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I do hope DPC continues this trend of improving the facial details (that last example perhaps being an exception, for the sake of some folks in this thread).

 

[Kellermann]

I've mentioned before about how I love the animation of Zoey's face at the end of Episode 8. Here's one where I bumped up the gamma so it's not as dark:

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But I must say, the work DPC did on Sage during her first lewd scene in the same episode was mesmerizing as well:

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It would have been nice if I could have captured it without her hand movements, but at least you don't have the MC's member spoiling the view.





And just so you don't feel left out, Kellermann:

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I do hope DPC continues this trend of improving the facial details (that last example perhaps being an exception, for the sake of some folks in this thread).

I've been around you long enough to know not to click that...Sadly, when I hit reply the image is displayed and I'm nose to snout with horror. Note to self, don't hit reply.

 

[felicemastronzo]

Yes, I never understood this. Cathy should have been right up there with Jade, but she drops off of a cliff. A designated side girl from episode 1 with barely any content. It's going to be difficult to write her back into story (so that she has regular interactions with MC). Is she really going to be another Mona?

DPC makes us choose who we prefer between her and Jade and then one of them makes her disappear....

only the nickname and a dream remain in her honor....

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YO Tytbalt

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from this picture we can assume that Tybalt and Derek are brothers

I'm not a geneticist, but I believe certain traits are heritable.

 

[gamingdevil800]

Yes, I never understood this. Cathy should have been right up there with Jade, but she drops off of a cliff. A designated side girl from episode 1 with barely any content. It's going to be difficult to write her back into story (so that she has regular interactions with MC). Is she really going to be another Mona?

She's Jade's friend so she could show up in that capacity outside of B&R instead of as a teacher

 

[felicemastronzo]

She's Jade's friend so she could show up in that capacity outside of B&R instead of as a teacher

doesn't strike me as a friendship to put money on

theirs seemed like a farewell, and we saw Cathe change jobs, she probably doesn't live where MC accompanied her anymore.