VN Ren'Py The Scheme of Betrayal [v0.2] [Fronz]

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Saint Blackmoor

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During a mission, a team of three mercenaries is ambushed.
Group leader Vincent is knocked unconscious by the explosion.
After waking up, he realizes that he has partially lost his memory.
What will you do to recover your past?​

I can help with the dialogue.
Frxnz
 

Slick Bean

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When you somehow know you are the one who is majorly overdressed for the occasion,
but for the life of you cannot pinpoint what it actually is, specificaly, that sprung that idea on you.

After waking up, he realizes that he has partially lost his memory.
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Factually wrong and absolutely misleading - he realisez he is about to be flayed alive with a boar skinning knife,
that is what his slain boar eyes tell you.
 
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Frxnz

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New to you overview
During a mission, a team of three mercenaries is ambushed.
Group leader Vincent is knocked unconscious by the explosion.
After waking up, he realizes that he has partially lost his memory.
What will you do to recover your past?​

I can help with the dialogue.
Frxnz
Hi. You mean the English translation?
 
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Slick Bean

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Biggest issue about this game is the rather opaque UI .. .where are the flags with the language choices?
 

Saint Blackmoor

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If you can help me with translation from Russian to English, I will be incredibly happy. I'm almost finished with the first episode, I plan to release it in December
I have never done a translation. I do the clean-up of the translation if needed. I can look into what it details, I have thought of doing that work in the past.
 

Frxnz

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I have never done a translation. I do the clean-up of the translation if needed. I can look into what it details, I have thought of doing that work in the past.
I got it. Then I'll let you know if it's necessary and I have to translate through google translator.
 
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Slick Bean

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One idea would be to make a visible button about the language settings,
or telling people where to click and what to choose in the only Russian interface,
cause letting only Russian language on start up is a rather limitting solution.
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Change the language in the settings. In the new menu it will be located in the same place
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I have to translate through google translator
You should always do that and only then send it out.
Idioms (proverbs, slang, jargon, my grandma used to say / my mother always says/ we always say) in Russian
are very different to American English ones,
even more so to Brittish English ...
just keep that in mind next time.
 
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Frxnz

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One idea would be to make a visible button about the language settings,
or telling people where to click and what to choose in the only Russian interface,
cause letting only Russian language on start up is a rather limitting solution.
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You should always do that and only then send it out.
Idioms (proverbs, slang, jargon, my grandma used to say / my mother always says/ we always say) in Russian
are very different to American English ones,
even more so to Brittish English ...
just keep that in mind next time.
All right, thank you. I'll keep that in mind
 
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Slick Bean

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I am standing here looking at the beauty and clicking on mouse right- nothing,
mouse right- nothing , mouse wheel - nothing.
How am I supposed to guess which of the three Russian words would get me into the Settings of the game?

Trial and error later .. .it was the word in the far right ...

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Then the third highlighted white text menu choice form the list on the left ...

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Finally .. English after much frustration ...
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Now I am angry! Lets shoot some baddies! Bring em! ReeeeeeeeeEEEEEeeeeeeeee !
 
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Frxnz

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I am standing here looking at the beauty and clicking on mouse right- nothing,
mouse right- nothing , mouse wheel - nothing.
How am I supposed to guess which of the three Russian words would get me into the Settings of the game?

Trial and error later .. .it was the word in the far right ...

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Then the third highlighted white text menu choice form the list on the left ...

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Finally .. English after much frustration ...
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Now I am angry! Lets shoot some baddies! Bring em! ReeeeeeeeeEEEEEeeeeeeeee !

The main thing is that you did it xDDD
 

Slick Bean

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Development Status [v0.2] #12.

Hi everyone! First of all, I'd like to confirm that the first episode will be released in January, not December. I have almost everything ready, but we can't forget about rendering, fixing bugs and translating the game.
I'm currently finishing up the last scene in the game. Initially, until about two months ago, I knew exactly where to stop and finish the episode, but I ended up crossing the 1000 renders mark and finishing the episode a little further than I wanted to. Right now I have 1131 renders, 4 in the queue and a few more will need to be done and put in the missing spots.
I also want to mention that the first episode will not give you the opportunity to spend the evening with three different girls like the prologue did, but who you choose in the prologue will change part of the final scene of the last episode. You need to have saves with the two main girls to see the changes in the finale.
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SonsOfLiberty

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Hi everyone, 55-60% of the update has been translated so far. I won't say specific dates, but chapter 1 will see the light of day soon.

Thank you all for your support!

Have a great weekend and take care.
 
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NebulousShooter

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New update is out on their

Edit: This has been on my watchlist for a while, haven't tried it yet, but the the dev seems to be an insanely good artist. Hopefully the translation is decent, or he can partner up with someone bilingual, because it would be such a shame if his work doesn't get more recognition.
 
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Haast

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Seems to have that graphical slicing issue, unfortunately the fix Shift + G doesnt help, as the fonts arent visible so you cant select any options to fix it
 
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