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"Slow burn", the bane of all porn games
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new update up to truth or dare game..and fuck i am bored. this game is boring as fuck. 1 guy 5 women..none of them doing anything remotely interesting..and mc is a pussy. this one is going to the trash where it belongs.
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im currently in chapter 3, and mc looks like total sub and simp Lisa all the fucking time. No idea how old he is but behave like horny teenager. Unassertive scared wimp right now, how something like that can make a potential harem?
- Jan 7, 2022
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Reading comments here, brings to mind an old aphorism: Giving Pearls to Pigs.
HOLD your horses, I'm NOT calling anyone a pig. Relax.
That
The worst of it all is that those of us that do like it, still have to be here and read your departure shots like you are saying goodbye to friends and family on the airport. I speak only for me, obviously, but, please don't bother yourself on my account. I can quite endure your departure with no goodbyes. #NoTearsWasted
Peace
HOLD your horses, I'm NOT calling anyone a pig. Relax.
That
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means that sometimes people do so much effort that it is completely unappreciated by the receivers. As is the case with many users here. This isn't a wham-bam thankyou mam kind of game, so, all of you think that it is a waste. It is a pity.The worst of it all is that those of us that do like it, still have to be here and read your departure shots like you are saying goodbye to friends and family on the airport. I speak only for me, obviously, but, please don't bother yourself on my account. I can quite endure your departure with no goodbyes. #NoTearsWasted
Peace
As people on Patreon I am legally obligated to tell you this game has NO incest. As a person on this site that loves games of that type, just check my signature, I will say people can use their imagination. If someone in the future makes some kind of clandestine patch, well, there's nothing in my power I can do to stop that.
Respectfully, did you read the synopsis and say "This is a slow burn game, time to say this in the comments" or did you play it first and then come to the comments to write this. I'm just wondering. Cause if you don't like slow burn, you won't like this game. And if you don't, it's okay. I wish you a good day regardless.
MC is around late to early 20's. One thing to note, what part of him is a "Horny teenager?" I wrote him up and down and I'm pretty sure I didn't write any horny scenes where he's perving on people. In fact, it was because I hated those kinds of games that I decided to write it that way. If you're talking about the moments when he's with Nicole in bed, that was "divine intervention"
Another thing, what makes him a simp? He is their servant and he's struck with her. He won't be overpowered, or be groveling to anyone. Just to be clear.
As far as the "unassertive scared wimp" goes, every person in life has some struggles. MC has one of those moments where he has his past trauma with Nicole and his ex girlfriend Rachel. These things keep him from moving forward romantically. If you're asking when we'll see MC evolve? Well, he's already improved in a few ways. He's been diligent at cooking and cleaning. He's meeting friends and interacting in a casual manner with them and helping them with their problems. He is becoming more reliable as the game goes on.
However, a major turning point will happen with MC in Chapter 7. This chapter will see him taking control of a situation and helping him to stop second guessing himself.
As far as MC becoming a Harem hero, that's pretty simple. He's a guy the girls like and want to be around. Someone who is understanding, reliable, and a good time to be around. MC will get here, but first he must conquer each demon that plagues him. Each of these aspects are touched on by every love interest in the game. Each one having an issue and MC learning to build himself better as he helps them deal with their own issues.
Thank you so much for your words. It's always nice to know people are supportive of developers. Personally, I tend to avoid "leaving messages", but If I do, I usually end on a positive note. Regardless, I wish you a fantastic dayReading comments here, brings to mind an old aphorism: Giving Pearls to Pigs.
HOLD your horses, I'm NOT calling anyone a pig. Relax.
ThatYou must be registered to see the linksmeans that sometimes people do so much effort that it is completely unappreciated by the receivers. As is the case with many users here. This isn't a wham-bam thankyou mam kind of game, so, all of you think that it is a waste. It is a pity.
The worst of it all is that those of us that do like it, still have to be here and read your departure shots like you are saying goodbye to friends and family on the airport. I speak only for me, obviously, but, please don't bother yourself on my account. I can quite endure your departure with no goodbyes. #NoTearsWasted
Peace
Sorry to hear that. I find it weird. I'm not the technical guy, Sweetychily might know more about why.
Anyway, to anyone reading this, I don't expect you all to like the game. That's okay. I just ask that you be respectful. Our game is a bit slow, and we understand that. But we've also given the game for free and been active on this forum. We are trying our best dedicating hundreds of hours to get it done. Slow burn, understand that this does us no favors. We could be making a more shallow game and put wall to wall sex scenes, but we aren't. Cause that's not what this game is. It's not a porn game, it's an adult visual novel.
I'm personally inspired by great stories in Japanese Visual novels. One in particular that I've been inspired by recently is The Most Forbidden Love In the World. Anyway, if I convinced anyone to stay, then cool. If not? Still cool.
See you around
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Same.Regardless, I wish you a fantastic day
I don't know if you know this, if you do, please do forgive me, I have no intention of lecturing, just tell a bit of trivia, slow cooking (something akin to writing a slow burn type of story) is a way to create the most special flavor of all. This flavor is called
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and it's one of the ways that you can achieve it without adding anything, just by enhancing what already is on the food.By writing this in a slow burn, you make all connections seem really relevant. The contacts, the relationships, the interactions. There's a permanent sense of expectation, but also of calm and assuredness.
So, I'm going to say, keep it up. Sex stories are abundant around here, but, good ones that feel worthy of the time taken to read, are rare. I hope for a good story.
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Then tag "handjob" should be removed, if curent game version doesn't have even this
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Gotta say, I absolutely love this game. The story and characters are very deeply and well-written. As for the incest, I may take a stab at making a patch. I've never done one before, but I'm an experienced proofreader, so I'm used to making script changes. My only worry is that, with the way the story is written, the patch would require updating each time a new chapter is released.
I'd also need some possibly spoiler-ish information, to ensure that future story developments don't clash with the patch. It'd be pretty easy to make Nicole MC's aunt, and Allison his cousin. However Nicole's story about falling for someone taken, during truth or dare, made it seem like Allison's actual father could be MC's father, making Allison MC's half-sister already. If you had something different in mind with that story, maybe my version could work as a patched version? That's what I meant by possibly needing spoiler-ish information to prevent future discrepancies.
Edit: P.S. I noticed a couple inconsistencies between some of the chapters. There was a line in one of the early chapters, "But wow, I can't imagine Valeria doing that for you. She's always been... you know... prickly." However, her name was later changed to "Tracy" without changing that old line. Also, the name of the city changes several times between "Alistar" and "Aristar". If I do an ipatch, schedule permitting, I may also do a quick proofread while I'm at it, if you'd like.
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MC: "...then, I went back to my parents house." lol
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First let me say, thank you for taking so much interest in the game. We try really hard when writing to get the best out of it. Some things may limit us, mostly renders and time, but the characters and their stories are really important. For example, almost every character has clues that gives you a clearer perspective to their past. Lisa and Nicole really coming out during this and last update.
As for the "patch" as I said I am on Patreon and there is NO incest in the game. But regardless, the story isn't set up to give any such indication of such content. My recommendation is waiting a little
Sorry, i got something in my eye. That's better.As for the text changes? If you can let me know where they are, I can fix them. I spend a LOT of time in the editing phase so by the time I'm getting through all of it, I'm dead. So maybe that's why I missed some of these. For example, I had a problem with choosing a name for the older sister, but for some reason I didn't notice this. This will be fixed. Thanks for letting me know! Feel free to message me directly if you have any questions or queries about the game or more depth on a character