- Feb 23, 2022
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I kinda agree that the sex scenes in this update are a bit meh (mostly because they are just finished abruptly) compared with the last update, but still the main story has some nice progression so I'm not too bitter about it.
Yeah. Leading into Lena just happened so suddenly. Make the choice and suddenly what's-his-name is gone and Jade and Lena are naked.
Julie is on top of Jade... and then the next click suddenly turns to a black screen and there is a car at the side of the road and another pulls up. I was thinking, "Oh crap, is someone going to see Jade and Julie and get some dirt on Jade?"
But it was an entirely different scene happening much later. XD
I don't want to knock much because this is still a great game, but this didn't quite live up to the masterclass of pacing displayed the previous chapters.
- Feb 23, 2022
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Can't agree more. Julie's scene especially feels quite unsatisfying. Both the sex scene and story pacing in previous chapters (especially chapter 2) are balanced so perfectly that it makes me want to give a 5-star review instantly, so I can't help but feel a bit disappointed with this chapter, even though the story is still engaging.
Gonna have to make a game of "spot Ash's dildo".
- Apr 26, 2017
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This update was more focused on the story with Jade discovering more about her dad's death and the case she and Viv are investigating, about some drug experiments on futas.
Makes sense it was light on the sexual content. Besides Ash, Sam and Julie are pretty much virgins and one doesn't put a ~30cm dick into someone with no experience whitout a lot of preparation first.
I guess we will see the progress of those side storylines: Ash wanting to break free of her parents, Julie's mommy issues and Sam being bullied in the next update while Viv comb through the files she took from that scumbag ex-cop.
Makes sense it was light on the sexual content. Besides Ash, Sam and Julie are pretty much virgins and one doesn't put a ~30cm dick into someone with no experience whitout a lot of preparation first.
I guess we will see the progress of those side storylines: Ash wanting to break free of her parents, Julie's mommy issues and Sam being bullied in the next update while Viv comb through the files she took from that scumbag ex-cop.
Yeah, I was going to say the scene itself with Julie was fine because it's setting up for something bigger down the road. And we were given important information. She's a virgin, and needs to steel her revolve for when Jade and her giga-cock claim it. I'm all for setting up for a bigger payoff down the road. The lead-in was fine for the scene too and gave us some character development for Julie.
I think it's mostly because there was no follow up after the abrupt ending.
I did mention in my first reply after the update I'm assuming this was a setup update. I'm all for setup and payoff.
And I think the reason things felt abrupt this time is because in the previous chapters, the major sex scenes has longer lead-ins, and then some follow-up after the sex scene itself.
Like in Chapter 2, after banging Evelyn, it soon cuts to black and it's the next day when Jade is at her bother and Evelyn's house. But that followed up on the events of the previous night, continuing things with Evelyn. So it has some lead-out.
Same with Blaire from Chapter 1. After the sex, there was the following morning with her.
So yeah, this is just different from before. And we need to accommodate that things won't be done the same every time.
I think it's mostly because there was no follow up after the abrupt ending.
I did mention in my first reply after the update I'm assuming this was a setup update. I'm all for setup and payoff.
And I think the reason things felt abrupt this time is because in the previous chapters, the major sex scenes has longer lead-ins, and then some follow-up after the sex scene itself.
Like in Chapter 2, after banging Evelyn, it soon cuts to black and it's the next day when Jade is at her bother and Evelyn's house. But that followed up on the events of the previous night, continuing things with Evelyn. So it has some lead-out.
Same with Blaire from Chapter 1. After the sex, there was the following morning with her.
So yeah, this is just different from before. And we need to accommodate that things won't be done the same every time.
- May 11, 2021
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Overall, loved it, this is still a very enjoyable read.
However, what others have been saying about scenes looking like they are fast-forwarding or cut short is true, I just didn't expect it to be jarring to the point of feeling like a good chunk of those scenes were missing altogether.
Probably the biggest offender is when choosing between Nate and Lena
- A somewhat natural progression happens if you pick both
- Picking either one fast forwards to them initiating sex
(and imagine being someone looking forward to a scene with Lena, you may be severely disappointed)
- There's no aftermath (again), scene is cut to Jade waking up (at Maria's)
I did notice in previous chapters that sex in this story seemed like an afterthought, but now it does look like it's getting straight up rushed. Everything that happens leading up to it and after should be just as relevant and there's already a pattern of Jade being like "ok you clean up this mess, I'm gone".
At the very least I'm hoping the more meaningful relationships (and their scenes) are reserved for the main cast. I mean, as someone trying to tell a good tale and itching to get to the good parts, one must always keep restraint in mind. And yes, I'm a thousand year old sage with plenty of wisdom to share.
Also, didn't expect Sam to be the hottest girl in this novel.
However, what others have been saying about scenes looking like they are fast-forwarding or cut short is true, I just didn't expect it to be jarring to the point of feeling like a good chunk of those scenes were missing altogether.
Probably the biggest offender is when choosing between Nate and Lena
- A somewhat natural progression happens if you pick both
- Picking either one fast forwards to them initiating sex
(and imagine being someone looking forward to a scene with Lena, you may be severely disappointed)
- There's no aftermath (again), scene is cut to Jade waking up (at Maria's)
I did notice in previous chapters that sex in this story seemed like an afterthought, but now it does look like it's getting straight up rushed. Everything that happens leading up to it and after should be just as relevant and there's already a pattern of Jade being like "ok you clean up this mess, I'm gone".
At the very least I'm hoping the more meaningful relationships (and their scenes) are reserved for the main cast. I mean, as someone trying to tell a good tale and itching to get to the good parts, one must always keep restraint in mind. And yes, I'm a thousand year old sage with plenty of wisdom to share.
Also, didn't expect Sam to be the hottest girl in this novel.
- Feb 23, 2023
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nice game but i would love to break the brother nose, or arm, we cuck but it'is enough for a bully like him? keep the great work dev
- Mar 17, 2019
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As much as I appreciate the choices to choose when being asked to join a open relationship, can we have a option the involves Nate but stays at him and Jade sharing his wife? meaning a threesome but without the futa on male, like a MMF threesome so to speak, again I'm not oppose that kink, just want a bit more liberty
- Oct 1, 2019
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I think so. They are a couple after all and their scenes will vary. If you chose both of them, it doesn't mean they will be together in all future scenes, just want to let you know right away. Just that you will see more content.
- Oct 1, 2019
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As for most of the criticism I've read, I understand and unfortunately there's nothing I can do anymore except take notes. I wanted to focus on the plot in this chapter, so I guess I paid less attention to the sex scenes since no one liked them.
The scene with Lena and Nate was largely experimental with the threesomes. I wanted to try my hand at them, given that they are not in main cast.
The scene with Lena and Nate was largely experimental with the threesomes. I wanted to try my hand at them, given that they are not in main cast.
- Aug 22, 2018
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We love the sex scenes it's just the plot is more interesting to talk about. Sex is sex but we got a whodunnit to solve.
- Oct 1, 2019
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That sentence was poorly worded on my part, sorry. I wanted to say that I paid more attention to the plot and because of that, the sex scenes didn't come out the best. That's why not many people liked them in this chapter.
Do you have any favorites among the characters? I won't tell the others, if anything.
- Feb 22, 2023
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Can you please make android version in future for us android players it can be unofficial not done by you