VN Ren'Py Harem Hotel [v0.17.2] [Runey]

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Runey

Runey

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Mikelemagne said:
Fascinating idea, but how much work and rework would that cause? More than that, it feels like it’s missing a trigger to cause that event. I know life’s random, but I find it strange that it was being addressed for the first time just before you knock on her door. Perhaps the new event could be a sort of date you take the two of them on. This accomplishes a few things:
1. Establishes more history and family background.
2. Could lead to a repeatable threesome type scene.
3. Could reveal the augment stuff.
4. Could establish Jin and Lin’s relations as a bit more distant, and could start sewing the scenes for their embrace as close sisters later.
5. Could be used to establish the event you proposed above for a later update and provide some background as Lin and Jin grow.
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I'm not too sure what the content of a date event with the two of them would have. It could be a good idea, it definitely would need to be unique and such. Lead up could be good though.

imzahai said:
Meh. I really like Jin's looks as they are. But I agree MC would have her get cleaned from them; and would also turn her/work through her issues/ the same as he has with all the other Girls so far ... I figured you left her the way she was because it was easy to explain she has been a sex slave for more than a century, and didn't mind it so much [already broken] .... MC's easiest rebuttle to her 'decreasing my value...' comments; 1 - he bought her to reunite her with Lin, 0 plans to sell her, he isn't breaking up his family [yes HIS - remember he Tried to free Lin already]. 2 - she proved her value in her assisting him in training Lin for that contest which will theoretically pay it back via having Caldwell as a contact; not to mention she can help him with the 3 new elves; she can freely attest he isn't a Creeper nor a Thug. This would be especially important if Nia's story is going to be developed.
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Jin has been a sex slave for 3 centuries, even worse haha.

Yeah, I think the only way Jin could be an interesting character is if she's 'reverse corrupted'.
 
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imzahai

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Runey said:
Yeah, I think the only way Jin could be an interesting character is if she's 'reverse corrupted'.
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i don't mean make her prude [also i couldn't remember how many centuries so i put 'over a ..']; i mean show her she has value. show her she is more than a living fuck-doll, she has valuable experience in that regard yes... and she is intelligent, she just needs to be reminded its OK to feel emotions again. the detox would of course start that; the fact that those around her won't change their behavior afterwards will start a healing process as well; especially if MC has more interactions with her [like having her go along to group events, have him take her and Lin shopping, in addition to sex acts(could you take some of the stills and animations from the succubi mod perhaps?)] and she could find a happy medium like Maria has...
 
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TheDevian

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Runey said:
I was actually thinking of something along these lines, and have been developing an idea around it.

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I haven't given any thought to Lin's parents though. I had pretty much considered them dead, but nothing is set in stone until it's said in game.
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Well, that explains why there is such a discrepancy between them. Guess that means Ann is on them too...
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I look forward to seeing them growing closer again, both to each other and you.
 
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TheDevian said:
Well, that explains why there is such a discrepancy between them. Guess that means Ann is on them too...
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I look forward to seeing them growing closer again, both to each other and you.
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Ann isn't taking anything. I think Cornwall mentioned that all Dark Elves are like that on average.
 
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Will there be some physical changes in the characters from their character evolution as well as the growing bond/love/frindship with the MC like for example Maria change with her Hair Style or Ashley in personality and Hairstyle,meaning will other characters also change in some physical/personal/emotional changes at some point in the game to show their character evolution?
 
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Saw a lot of talk about Jin, and I'd like to throw out a suggestion.

Instead of trying to"purify" Jin, what about trying to make her less submissive? A few days after buying her, Lin has an event where she wants you to start showing her sister what her new life is like. So you start taking her out, letting her choose where to eat, what to wear, etc. Basically easing her into freedom. Gives her a chance to subtly come into being one of the interactable harem rather than just springing it out of nowhere.

I also like the drug thing, but that would be workable with this scenario. Jin has been a slave for so long, she had to cope somehow. But when she found she didn't need the drugs anymore, she got sloppy. Maybe even did it intentionally in her subconscious as a cry for help, but either way Lin catches her and goes totally nanners. That would lead right into your story, and as someone else said, would let us help her through her issues like we've helped all the other girls through theirs.

Just an idea I had, feel free to use it to bounce off of. :) Whatever you decide for it, I'm sure it'll be amazing.
 
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I think Lin should probably find herself in some state of distress since everything around her has been good. Maybe some envy or jealously thing with Jin or having to somehow assist in breaking through Jin's shell since she's never known love.

I also feel like Jin and Android might have more in common and might do well to have a tandem arc where Android helps her understand she's more than a tool. This could also tie in with the Religious girl (name is escaping me right now).

Basically Jin could work very well as a catalyst for a lot of story points to help push conflicts and growth with other characters.
 
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Runey said:
I haven't given any thought to Lin's parents though. I had pretty much considered them dead, but nothing is set in stone until it's said in game.
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An interesting thought is maybe they're dead, but does Lin know this? Does Jin? Maybe there could be something where Lin doesn't know and finds out somehow. Maybe Jin knows and that's who tells Lin, but it could be that neither knew and Lin discovers it while surfing the net? Maybe their deaths were fairly recent and the sisters find out when an inheritance package arrives. However it's done, it could add an interesting character development to Lin and/or her sister.
 
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Runey

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Ichigo Kurosaki Shiba said:
Will there be some physical changes in the characters from their character evolution as well as the growing bond/love/frindship with the MC like for example Maria change with her Hair Style or Ashley in personality and Hairstyle,meaning will other characters also change in some physical/personal/emotional changes at some point in the game to show their character evolution?
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Any permanent visual change/customization is highly impossible. (Well it's not, but just adding 1 customization option to each girl, no matter how big or small, would take me over a year to do alone, and would increase the game's file size by around 32x IIRC.)

Girls have changed and will continue to do so, as you've seen with Lin, Kali, Ashley, Maria, Android, and Emma. Maria has started wearing casual wear on the weekends in v0.7.
 
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SilverSniper88

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So, just wanted to ask...does Lin keep that blond look if you tell her to? I rejected her when it happened, but it's been bugging me for a while.
 
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