CboyC95

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I've just noticed some grammar errors in terms of the female MC. Like, "Looks who's found his way back home."
 

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Love the story so far. Very linear (few choices) and a couple mistakes like referring to female character as "his" and some pictures aside from hands looking male on female choice, but very happy that you had an option to choose him or her (nice to be able to choose). I like Rachel and I love Ellie. Really hoping to see main character have the option to make life happy for both of them, or better said all three of them.

I am still unsure as to what exactly is going on, but it's interesting to see the author's mind set as thing progress. I wish the best for this story. Thanks so much for sharing. Look forward to what lies ahead.
 

recreation

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Do u still have a screenshot left of her old look?



DONT U DARE TO CHANGE HER
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The future tags say "Rape play" Is this something that can be avoided or will a specific character just have to be off limits?
I won't really be avoidable, but the tag is a bit misleading. I can't say more without spoilering.

I've just noticed some grammar errors in terms of the female MC. Like, "Looks who's found his way back home."
Noted, thanks.

Here's another one. "I'm happy to have a handsome young woman here". Shouldn't it be beautiful instead?
Also noted.

recreation, hello. I do not know whether they wrote about this bugs earlier or not, but I have it now. See the screenshot below.
Thanks, this has been fixed already.

I think most, if not all VN games should have a choice whether to play as male or female. Depending on what the story is written to be.
I think so too, but it's not easy and won't work for many games. It requires a lot of extra work, especially if you're doing third person view you have to render everything twice. I did most of my render in POV, so this isn't a big problem for me and the story and dialogues are basically the same for both, so I just had to put a view variables in, but this also won't work in many other games. That's why there are just a few of them.
 

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Yeah you're right, it doesn't really make sense, but rape fantasy doesn't fit either. Rape play might be the right term.
Rape Play is just another term for Rape Fantasy. Both are correct. :3
For what it's worth, the term is CNC (Consensual non-consent). Not rape fantasy. Rape "fantasy" is, as the name implies, the fantasy/idea of being raped. The actual act of "consensual rape" or "rape play" is CNC.
 

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Of course not , my message was I wouldn't mind seeing a redhead Elle Fanning
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I don't want to piss off The Redhead Harem Master ;):LOL:

in the thread What makes/breaks a game for you? my answer was to be able to choose sex and name of the MC :) recreation many thanks for giving that possibility in the game :cool: (y) I love it .
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Ok, I really have to play as a female as well :sneaky:
 
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Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While loading <'Image' u'/jpg/pcroom day2 night1 fem.jpg'>:
Exception: Could not load image u'/jpg/pcroom day2 night1 fem.jpg': error('JPEG loading error',)

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "events_m.rpyc", line 218, in script call
  File "events_e.rpyc", line 123, in script
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/ast.py", line 678, in execute
    renpy.exports.say(who, what, interact=self.interact, *args, **kwargs)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/exports.py", line 1229, in say
    who(what, *args, **kwargs)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/character.py", line 1031, in __call__
    self.do_display(who, what, cb_args=self.cb_args, **display_args)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/character.py", line 823, in do_display
    **display_args)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/character.py", line 572, in display_say
    rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='say', type=type, roll_forward=roll_forward)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/ui.py", line 289, in interact
    rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/core.py", line 2672, in interact
    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, **kwargs)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/core.py", line 3158, in interact_core
    self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/core.py", line 2075, in draw_screen
    renpy.config.screen_height,
  File "render.pyx", line 487, in renpy.display.render.render_screen
  File "render.pyx", line 235, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/layout.py", line 722, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 147, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 235, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/layout.py", line 722, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 147, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 235, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/layout.py", line 722, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 147, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 235, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "accelerator.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render
  File "render.pyx", line 235, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/image.py", line 500, in render
    return wrap_render(self.target, width, height, st, at)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/image.py", line 306, in wrap_render
    rend = render(child, w, h, st, at)
  File "render.pyx", line 147, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 235, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/layout.py", line 336, in render
    surf = render(self.child, width, height, st, at)
  File "render.pyx", line 147, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 235, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/layout.py", line 1267, in render
    return renpy.display.render.render(self.child, w, h, st, at)
  File "render.pyx", line 147, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 235, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/im.py", line 580, in render
    return cache.get(self, render=True)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/im.py", line 266, in get
    surf = image.load()
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/im.py", line 625, in load
    surf = renpy.display.pgrender.load_image(renpy.loader.load(self.filename), self.filename)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/pgrender.py", line 162, in load_image
    raise Exception("Could not load image {!r}: {!r}".format(filename, e))
Exception: Could not load image u'/jpg/pcroom day2 night1 fem.jpg': error('JPEG loading error',)
 

recreation

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I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While loading <'Image' u'/jpg/pcroom day2 night1 fem.jpg'>:
Exception: Could not load image u'/jpg/pcroom day2 night1 fem.jpg': error('JPEG loading error',)

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "events_m.rpyc", line 218, in script call
  File "events_e.rpyc", line 123, in script
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/ast.py", line 678, in execute
    renpy.exports.say(who, what, interact=self.interact, *args, **kwargs)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/exports.py", line 1229, in say
    who(what, *args, **kwargs)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/character.py", line 1031, in __call__
    self.do_display(who, what, cb_args=self.cb_args, **display_args)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/character.py", line 823, in do_display
    **display_args)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/character.py", line 572, in display_say
    rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='say', type=type, roll_forward=roll_forward)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/ui.py", line 289, in interact
    rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/core.py", line 2672, in interact
    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, **kwargs)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/core.py", line 3158, in interact_core
    self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/core.py", line 2075, in draw_screen
    renpy.config.screen_height,
  File "render.pyx", line 487, in renpy.display.render.render_screen
  File "render.pyx", line 235, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/layout.py", line 722, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 147, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 235, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/layout.py", line 722, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 147, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 235, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/layout.py", line 722, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 147, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 235, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "accelerator.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render
  File "render.pyx", line 235, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/image.py", line 500, in render
    return wrap_render(self.target, width, height, st, at)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/image.py", line 306, in wrap_render
    rend = render(child, w, h, st, at)
  File "render.pyx", line 147, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 235, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/layout.py", line 336, in render
    surf = render(self.child, width, height, st, at)
  File "render.pyx", line 147, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 235, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/layout.py", line 1267, in render
    return renpy.display.render.render(self.child, w, h, st, at)
  File "render.pyx", line 147, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 235, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/im.py", line 580, in render
    return cache.get(self, render=True)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/im.py", line 266, in get
    surf = image.load()
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/im.py", line 625, in load
    surf = renpy.display.pgrender.load_image(renpy.loader.load(self.filename), self.filename)
  File "/data/user/0/bad.memories/files/renpy/display/pgrender.py", line 162, in load_image
    raise Exception("Could not load image {!r}: {!r}".format(filename, e))
Exception: Could not load image u'/jpg/pcroom day2 night1 fem.jpg': error('JPEG loading error',)
Hm, works for me. On which device are you playing and are there any other errors?
 

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Hm, works for me. On which device are you playing and are there any other errors?
8.1 Android and that's the first major bug that I can't get past. I've seen a few body swaps during sitting down though where the shoes/legs change female to male.
 

recreation

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8.1 Android and that's the first major bug that I can't get past. I've seen a few body swaps during sitting down though where the shoes/legs change female to male.
I can't reproduce the error atm, but I'll have a look into it. For now you could hit "ignore" to move forward in the game.
 
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