VN Ren'Py Abandoned Ghost Revenge [Ep. 1-4] [Adults city]

[achref]

Hello developer! Beautiful have you models ,especially their Asses. thanks for them
in the third episode, different paths appear it is unclear how to make them

Thank you! Nex time I will made a tutorial, because there is many route and ending in the game

 

[LoveWhores]

I just try it this one and i need to say that,this game is very nice - i like it! Both of the sisters (Jenifer and Ashley) are very hot,for me Ashley is one idea more hot from her sister(because of her great ass),but i really like Jinifer too - they are almost the same(almost )! It was very little actions in the "real world",most was happen in that "demon world" - where there were many nice moments(or may be need to say all moments was nice),but in the "real world" some unclear situations remained,like the fitness instructor who want to fuck Jenifer! I hope next time we will see more actions from the "both worlds",not only from one of them,but i need to say "Great work"! I hope next update will be soon,can't wait!

 

[achref]

I just try it this one and i need to say that,this game is very nice - i like it! Both of the sisters (Jenifer and Ashley) are very hot,for me Ashley is one idea more hot from her sister(because of her great ass),but i really like Jinifer too - they are almost the same(almost )! It was very little actions in the "real world",most was happen in that "demon world" - where there were many nice moments(or may be need to say all moments was nice),but in the "real world" some unclear situations remained,like the fitness instructor who want to fuck Jenifer! I hope next time we will see more actions from the "both worlds",not only from one of them,but i need to say "Great work"! I hope next update will be soon,can't wait!

Thank you! Next time there will be actions in both worlds.

 

[Mormont]

Wasn't so sure about this game at first but oh how wrong I was really enjoying it so far. I'm glad you get the options too stop certain situations unlike some games where you make the choice and it doesn't matter. Loving that closeness between the sisters of course that's optional but it's hot looking forward too some more.

 

[CDG]

I made some change in the story and from the next update you will have the option for a full lesbians route

You, sir, roxor! So few games with that option and I would think such a high demand. But then I always like to assume everyone likes the same things I like. It makes me feel normal.

 

[Lord-of-kings]

will this ghost will fuck girl too?

 

[achref]

will this ghost will fuck girl too?

Not all of them, but you will have the choice to decide.

 

[bosp]

Rokay. Generalmajor Grammar Nazi to the RESCUE!

The game is about Jenifer, a 20 years year old girl. Her father, before his death, (no need for the extra clause) was behaving strangely before his death and speaking about ghosts and evil who that wanted to destroy him. All the people (awkward) Everyone considered him (also awkward) thought he was crazy, except for his daughter (no need to repeat that fact) Jenifer, who deep in her heart wants wanted to believe him. After her father's death, she decided to move with (her family made the decision, not her on her own) her family decided to move somewhere else to another place. They collected all their money and bought a new house to start a new life (or new lives), but something strange begins began (you're mixing present and past tense all through this) to happen to them. They discover that there is a an (use an instead of a in front of words beginning with vowel sounds - English is FUN) evil who that (unless we know the evil is a person avoid using pronouns that describe him as a person) wants to harm them, and Jenifer is the only one who can save her family.

Mistakes crossed out, alternate wording underlined, explanations in brackets and italics.

This partially sums up the problem but when you actually try playing the game and get to the dialogues... like "help sister wear clothes" and as you go further you know it's not going to get better and eventually end with "I fuck now, you sit".

I can sympathize with the developers who are not fluent in English but what I cannot understand is their stubbornness in the belief that their dialogues are actually working fine and will not hinder their effort to make a good game.

News for all of you guys out there - bad English makes a lot of games just unplayable - get a proofreader before you go public.

 

[achref]

This partially sums up the problem but when you actually try playing the game and get to the dialogues... like "help sister wear clothes" and as you go further you know it's not going to get better and eventually end with "I fuck now, you sit".

I can sympathize with the developers who are not fluent in English but what I cannot understand is their stubbornness in the belief that their dialogues are actually working fine and will not hinder their effort to make a good game.

News for all of you guys out there - bad English makes a lot of games just unplayable - get a proofreader before you go public.

I agree with you. I know that the dialogue not working fine, my plan was to get a proofreader before releasing episode 3
but I didn't succeed with that. I'm not gonna release the next episode before getting the dialogue fixed by a proofreader

 

[ILCjr]

It is a little clippy, what I mean is it seems to skip around a bit, but I am enjoying it so far.

 

[LatexLara]

this is a neat game and as other people are saying a little bit wierd tekst "thanks google translator for making me giggle at times" and a few times it seems to mix the names , at the gym when you friend go down on you all the sudden your sister speaks what your saying to your friend but other than that i really enjoyd it

 

[Kendra]

Thank you! Next time there will be actions in both worlds.

Agreed . Fantasy realm is good, but it would be so nice to see some actions in the real world. Especially between the sisters/mother, maybe some lesbian/futa action, with someone might getting pregnant in the end

I've got to say big thank you @achref for adding all that content, lesbian route, futa, animation and so on, i love this all so much!
Can't wait for more, and hope you'll get some help from proofreader soon.

 

[achref]

Agreed . Fantasy realm is good, but it would be so nice to see some actions in the real world. Especially between the sisters/mother, maybe some lesbian/futa action, with someone might getting pregnant in the end

I've got to say big thank you @achref for adding all that content, lesbian route, futa, animation and so on, i love this all so much!
Can't wait for more, and hope you'll get some help from proofreader soon.

Thank you! I'm glad you like it.
In the next update, there is a futa animation and lesbians scene between the sisters-mother.
Also, there is a route in the game "Jennifer" gets pregnant.
I can't add lesbians animations with my current hardware but I'll add voices acting to all lesbians scenes.

 

[maitrarosy]

is it just Ep 3? if so, where can i find the other 2 episodes?

 

[achref]

is it just Ep 3? if so, where can i find the other 2 episodes?

No, it's a 3 episode.

 

[MontyKino]

the grammar could be better

 

[achref]

Version: ( Ep. 4)
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Changelog:
More than 160 render
Add more contents and scenes.
Add more character.
Add more animations.
Add futa impregnation option
Old saves will not work in this update

 

[HorizonD]

Fuuh, I get one bug after another. Has anyone else these problems (and yes, with a fresh start)?

Edit: Found the problem. It was my fault actually, used unren (dev-menu, console).

 

[fzaner]

i belive from CGs that this game might be a piece of art, but i didn't understand the story at all. because of my bad english reading and bad english writed in this game... i guess ?

 

[joe powa]

The last version 0.4, is unplayable, many images miss and when you have image the quality is 140p