Hey
@achref, thank you for the update!
You're obviouly a talanted developer, but you shouldn't be so much in a hurry of making a new versions, but taking your time for polishing things out....
I really like your game and that you're so community friendly
You've chosed gorgeous models, made beautifull renders and even puted some pretty nice animation
, but...
storytelling isn't getting any better, those jumps from one event to quite another without any transicions between them are rather mood breaking.
At the point, where Jennifer was
and then out of nowhere in the middle of a night this Eric
guy shows up already inside their new house and Jen goes with him, cause she "can't refuse"
, story kinda turned into complete circus for me, and it's obvious that it's not the effect you wanted to achieve with your lovely game.
I'd say more renders and texts needed, to make those transitions if not realistic, but at least not that game/mood-breaking.
The quality of those sounds for adult scenes is not high, i'd say it would be nice to if not remove them, but to make an option for a player(maybe at the start of the game) to chose if those sounds should be played or not. Also those places where the sounds are played can't be skiped and it's rather irritating.
There are still some issues with naming, like Jennifer is already talking with Ashley alone it the room, but the name of speaker shows as Nicole, cause she was there in the previous scene.
Also i think it would be nice(if possible and not too hard) to make each other's characters speech colored in defferent color, like many other dev's do, kinda easier to read and understand what's going on
This game has a potential of being a 5 stars one, but so far it's around 3.5 to 4.5 for models/renders/animations, 3.5 to 4 for whole story/choises and sadly 1.5 to 2 for storytelling/sounds/immersion and overall style/design. Just my opinion, no intention to hurt someone's feelings.
