VN Ren'Py Shut Up and Dance [Ep.6 RE SE] [Boring Games]

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mpror said:
I remember playing this game but couldn't remember for the life of me what it was about. So I decided to start again, just to get me up to speed. It didn't take long to realize why I completely forgot what the story was.

The writing is bad. It's unfortunate, because with some tweaking this game could go from average to excellent in a heartbeat. It has the right elements in place, character progression => MC needs to become the man of the house and become an adult. Has some mystery involving his father and the science he was doing. Hot lady's everywhere. I would take a different approach to the whole mindcontrol thing, it's been done numerous times and it gets old super quick. The build up between the family members needs to be slower.

For example: The science stuff the MC has to do makes him horny all the time. This is fine, however the fainting and basically making the people around him to satisfy him so he wouldn't faint again is bad.

Instead, they should notice his erections, maybe even think to themselves that he has a nice cock or something along those lines but that's it, at first. After through the actions of the MC who takes care of his friends and family and by becoming more mature, they get closer and closer to him.


The science could have alternative side effects, like for example the MC is able to tell when a woman gets aroused. That would give him the idea of pursuing his familymembers, because during one of his many erections, they got moised. Same could be done for any other character. Or being unable to lie for a period of time when he does these experiments, this could make up for some very funny interactions where characters like mom or sis would find out about his true emotions. These are just some thought on the top of my head but alrdy I feel these elements would make the game so much more in depth..

I still sorta like this game cause im a sucker for incest, but it could be sooooooo much better... Best of luck to you dev

edit: removed terrible because it was so harsh and offending everyone.. oh yh and I also removed that I believe I could do better at making a story
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It is blasphemy to give negative reviews F95 but I am 100% with you this game is so forgettable. I've been playing this game since it 1st released to F95 and have played every update but if it wasn't for your review I couldn't honestly say that I remembered what this game was about. I don't even remember if MC got puss from any LI yet seriously even while writing I'm thinking trying to remember and nothing comes to mind. The problem is this game is not good enough to be put on long holds, the Dev was releasing updates at a good pace but then slowed down NTR was added to spice things up but I've yet to find it. I'm totally not a fan of NTR Im a total hater of that content but I could understand why it was added game was dieing fair enough or maybe the NTR has not started yet I really dont remember if it has or is supposed to start soon. Oh god let's not even bring up drug addict Angelina turned humanitarian who's taken 1 damn pill and she's as power no sorry more power than the MC because with 1 pill she has already demonstrated more feits than the MC who has been taken these pills since the beginning, yes I understand the shock factor but explain how she figured out she's causing this and it's not a form of dementia or psychosis from either of them. Cringe level 100‍♂o_O:cautious::(:rolleyes:(n):unsure::FacePalm::WutFace: from last update a few on comments stated this was going to happen instead of Dev being creative he continued as predicted.
 
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magus448 said:
Man MC's boss still a bitch even though he's pretty much single handedly saving her project. Threats of firing when without him it would take a year or more to get back on track.
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Really? Huh. I didn't once think she was a bitch. He's screwing up (using his powers, being a bit careless with the pills) on a government-funded project that no one else is supposed to know about. I'd expect any boss to be upset about it. Frankly, I think Emma's kept her calm quite well.
 
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She threatened to fire him when he was teasing her about dressing up for work. Also gave him crap for using the machine for himself once saying he owed her. After her being the cause of his blacking out in the middle of crossing traffic sending him to the hospital.
 
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I found this sentence in the game, I'm gonna quote it letter for letter, word for word. You can find this sentence in episode 4, when the family is on the beach. At on point the sister says this to the mc:

"Faif fill I slime xere and I'ff fow you!" the mc responds: "Oh! You'll regret it!"

Yh def nothing wrong with the dialogue. I however, need a translator for this. This isn't even engrish, it's ... gibberish.

Avaron1974 maybe you can help with this? It sounds like one of those sentences your vibrator would come up with after you stuck it to your keyboard.

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I could get my most powerful vibrator, set it on max and stick it on my keyboard and it would come up with something better than...
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SolidusEvol said:
yo anyone getting virus pop on the exe i downloaded both the regular and the crunched ones still getting the exe alert ?
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I've had both Windows Defender and Trend pop up on a couple of Ren'py games today when running the exe for the first time. Scans of the decompressed folder don't show anything so I'm sure it's safe. Usually I leave the downloaded files compressed for a few hours and then check the relevant game discussion to see if anyone posts a real virus/trojan warning for the files. It's not foolproof but it is an added layer of security. False positives can occur on both Ren'py and Unity games from some AV programs.
 
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mpror said:
I found this sentence in the game, I'm gonna quote it letter for letter, word for word. You can find this sentence in episode 4, when the family is on the beach. At on point the sister says this to the mc:

"Faif fill I slime xere and I'ff fow you!" the mc responds: "Oh! You'll regret it!"

Yh def nothing wrong with the dialogue. I however, need a translator for this. This isn't even engrish, it's ... gibberish.

Avaron1974 maybe you can help with this? It sounds like one of those sentences your vibrator would come up with after you stuck it to your keyboard.
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Lol, I thought anyone could understand such a little joke
 
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magus448 said:
She threatened to fire him when he was teasing her about dressing up for work. Also gave him crap for using the machine for himself once saying he owed her. After her being the cause of his blacking out in the middle of crossing traffic sending him to the hospital.
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I see what you're saying, but I still don't see it the same way.
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From my perspective, none of this stuff is unexpected. Someone following standard company procedures isn't what I would classify as a bitch.
 
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