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most likely a UK thing. I went ahead and replaced the "arse" as well...
So the MC is a doormat with military training who will bend over backwards to make his manipulative backstabbing bitch of a sister happy... Great... I was looking forward for this update, just to be dissapointed in the first few seconds playing it.
- Nov 30, 2018
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The daughter is really well built I can see the MC having his hands full with not just her but his sister as well she seems quite the character 
and I'm glad it's not only me who thinks there is something a bit off with the MC I'm sensing the sister wears the trousers in their relationship he just comes across as a guy who will accept everything.
and I'm glad it's not only me who thinks there is something a bit off with the MC I'm sensing the sister wears the trousers in their relationship he just comes across as a guy who will accept everything.
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That was my first thought.
MC didn't deserve all the shit that went on with all those lies but now she asked him to keep their daughter safe which means he needs her to trust him so it's kinda the only logical thing to do.
With all the sister stuff and the MC showing as much common sense as a house brick it's a struggle enjoy it.
I found it more frustrating than anything and I think I had a different reaction to some people here in that I don't hate the sister but I do hate his ex and think the MC is arguably one of the dumbest people i've seen in a VN.
I thought this ws going to be an awesome VN. The first one was great, sure the MC was a bit irritating and didn't know when to shut up but it was enjoyable.
Sort things out with the daughter and build the relationship back up.
Sadly not how it went and now it's a convoluted mess full of characters it's incredibly hard to find anything to like about.
Tp me it sounds like the sister should be the MC as she seems to be the only one capable of getting shit done and seems to have her own harem.
There I am, getting annoyed at the MC on my screen shouting in my head to just "show her the letter you mind addled knob gobbler" yet he just drools down his own chin while his sister puts in that work.
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Well I just read the letter so have still some hard times to come if read your post
, but are thinking if you still loved him and cared for him, why did you not contact him when he was free and rebuilding his life even if just as lover on the side. There must have been way more going on as she is admitting to in that letter ......
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Lol I may be wrong, but why do I strongly get the feeling that all the misfortune MC befell may have been setup by his ex-wive. Well if she really loved him, she could not have gone any better about it by betraying him and making anyone he cared for betray his trust if she had set out to do it. Somehow I have a feeling someone wanted revenge for the betrayal of MC to her by having that relation with his sister.
Agree with you Avaron1974 , mc feels more like a soldier that is only really good at following orders, not someone who thinks for himself. It may be the devs intention though to have him be like that. He does not seem officer material.
Agree with you Avaron1974 , mc feels more like a soldier that is only really good at following orders, not someone who thinks for himself. It may be the devs intention though to have him be like that. He does not seem officer material.
I just finished this update and I'm not sure if I want to play any more of this. I liked the concept, the first "chapter" had some things that annoyed me, but it wasn't bad in anyway. I waited for this update hoping that the MC will finally put Deb in her place but nope... It seems that he is going to be a submissive little bitch throughout the whole game, hoping to get Deb's leftovers when she feels like it... Oh, yeah. He gets to be her plaything too! Hooray... I'm not a big fan of their dynamic and I don't see it changing. Deb will probably fuck Millie or Julia in the next update and the MC will find it hot, after apologising to her of course for something SHE did.
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Kudos for changing Max's face, but even with a mask on I could spot his horny teenage antics anywhere. In all seriousness though, MC is not a very convincing 40-something veteran/conman his behavior and the way he speaks is closer to a horny teenage coomer. The military and con stuff doesn't shine through at all. Most scenes can be broken down into 3 parts, long inner monologue, MC laughs or responds to his own joke and weirds people out around him, zoom in on tits or ass and MC takes a temporary hit to his intelligence score.
I gotta say, the daughter looks rough sometimes, like Ronald Weasley took steroids and donned a wig. I would've died if the daughter randomly blurted out 'IT'S MA'AM!' Other times she can look alright and even cute, but that muscle slider could probably be dialed back some and still illustrate that she is a fitness junkie. There are some bits I like, like the Bart guy was written pretty well, Julia and the Albie guy seem interesting too. It just seems like you are making things more complicated than they have to be, like this is an incest story with a dad lead and some military/black ops type special forces seasoning and you didn't just sprinkle it on there you really poured that seasoning in there good. Some extra seasoning is good, but if you add to much it overwhelms everything else. Also kinda like the dude above DA22 hinted at, I think the MC is miscast, like you wrote a detective story and then hired a grunt who only follows orders and isn't much of a thinker to solve the mystery and keep the girl safe.
I gotta say, the daughter looks rough sometimes, like Ronald Weasley took steroids and donned a wig. I would've died if the daughter randomly blurted out 'IT'S MA'AM!' Other times she can look alright and even cute, but that muscle slider could probably be dialed back some and still illustrate that she is a fitness junkie. There are some bits I like, like the Bart guy was written pretty well, Julia and the Albie guy seem interesting too. It just seems like you are making things more complicated than they have to be, like this is an incest story with a dad lead and some military/black ops type special forces seasoning and you didn't just sprinkle it on there you really poured that seasoning in there good. Some extra seasoning is good, but if you add to much it overwhelms everything else. Also kinda like the dude above DA22 hinted at, I think the MC is miscast, like you wrote a detective story and then hired a grunt who only follows orders and isn't much of a thinker to solve the mystery and keep the girl safe.
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i dont like kinetic novels and this seems pretty much a kinetic novel where you only choose what girl to fuck, no way to end relationship etc, if i was the mc i will break wathever relationship they have and probably show the letter to the daughter to see "what kind of mother" she was. it may seem unfair since the mc did cheat on his wife with her sister but then the wife did cheat with the sister too so no point on feeling guilt, even more when the wife leaves him and tell bad things (lies) to his daughter about him.
this vn is clearly not for me but best of luck to the dev
this vn is clearly not for me but best of luck to the dev
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The MC is still a submissive little asshat he should be working in a Bakery not out on Black Op's.
Deb's has more balls then the MC an will probably fuck Julia/Milly first, But can you really trust her?
Thank god we didn't have a dreadfully long ass conversation between Bart and the MC.
Milly is to much of a meat headed wine baby piss pants and everyone but her knows that her mother was a lying bitch. Oohh but wait he mother REALLY LOVED THE MC so that's why she destroyed the MC's life writes its all down in a letter for you to read seven years later........CUNT lol
You need a Astrid & Julia sammich, Maybe that would get the MC to stop being a damn pussy lol .
Guess what I'm sayin is it was a alright update I'll check back again.
Deb's has more balls then the MC an will probably fuck Julia/Milly first, But can you really trust her?
Thank god we didn't have a dreadfully long ass conversation between Bart and the MC.
Milly is to much of a meat headed wine baby piss pants and everyone but her knows that her mother was a lying bitch. Oohh but wait he mother REALLY LOVED THE MC so that's why she destroyed the MC's life writes its all down in a letter for you to read seven years later........CUNT lol
You need a Astrid & Julia sammich, Maybe that would get the MC to stop being a damn pussy lol .
Guess what I'm sayin is it was a alright update I'll check back again.
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This whole fookin' castle accent makes it annoying to keep playing. At first it's amusing, but it gets old rather quickly.
On another note, after playing for a while I've realized that I already dislike several characters:
1) The MC
2) His ex
3) His sister
I can only assume the list might grow even longer, but I want to give this game a fair chance before bailing out. It might surprise me and get better.
On another note, after playing for a while I've realized that I already dislike several characters:
1) The MC
2) His ex
3) His sister
I can only assume the list might grow even longer, but I want to give this game a fair chance before bailing out. It might surprise me and get better.
I don't see how the situation with his sister can get better. She keeps saying how much she loves him again and again, yet she keeps breaking his trust in every chance she gets (she was fucking his wife behind his back, she was in contact with her all these years, she completely ignored his request to not follow him), now she obviously wants to fuck his daughter (and he should be ok with it because he's fucking her, so incest shouldn't be a problem) and that dumbass keeps apologising to her for everything! The only thing left is for the dev to pull a "slonique" and have her fuck him with a strap on... The most annoying part in all of this is that for some reason I really want to like this game, but the relationship dynamics between the MC and Deb is making it so fucking difficult.
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I'd cut ties with his sister. I hate the whole lying aspect(even if the MC is also a piece of shit), even if it was before getting control of the MC. I'm aware that the MC is also a piece of shit, but I'd like to actually have control over his decisions. Since the beginning I have NO CONTROL over his decision to keep fucking his sister, which drives me mad, I'd make things clear from the start. Whatever dumb decisions we made in the past, I won't be repeating them over and over. The only way I'd keep her in my life is if she understood that we fucked up and that from now on we'll have a normal sibling relationship.
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I want to Like Deb but like you said she keeps breaking the Mc trust in every chance she gets, and Deb didn't completely ignore MC request an follow. Bart said Milly asked her to come as a different request so technically she didnt lie lol. I agree you know Ded will fuck Milly and the MC will be Like hey thats ok your my sister an its ok you fucked my wife too. I'm sure there is still more story with Deb an the mother we don't know yet so things could change ....and Ooh god NO to "slonique" please lol